I am
Shocked.
Seeing how amazing she is,
Seeing how she can truly
Change my life.
She is a very inspiring person.
由 展示 me how perseverance
Can take 你 so far,
And how determination and tolerance
Are the keys to success.
你 may laugh all 你 want at me,
As others do.
But nothing will shake my feeling
Of this particular friend.
Now,
Up to this point,
你 have been lied to.
Well, partly.
Your brain has been mistaken.
The "inspiring person" I am referring to
Is not a girlfriend of mine
And it never will be,
Because I am a girl, 你 see.
This person
I call an influential person
Is my teacher.
Shocked yet?
Well,
All this 年
I have been afraid of her.
Cowering in the shadows.
I did not enjoy that feeling,
Believe me.
That feeling of cowardice
Has been slowly receding
As the 年 went by,
Like the waves of the blue ocean.
Now I see her as
A true friend and mentor,
As she has been everything
I am in this life.
My teacher has changed my life.
Completely, entirely.
I feel like I cannot ever repay her
For what she has done for me.
The effect is ever-lasting.
All I can say for now,
Is thank you.
Thank 你 for all 你 have done for me.
Your effect on me
Will never be erased.
你 will always be like a hand print
On my heart.
Truly.
Shocked.
Seeing how amazing she is,
Seeing how she can truly
Change my life.
She is a very inspiring person.
由 展示 me how perseverance
Can take 你 so far,
And how determination and tolerance
Are the keys to success.
你 may laugh all 你 want at me,
As others do.
But nothing will shake my feeling
Of this particular friend.
Now,
Up to this point,
你 have been lied to.
Well, partly.
Your brain has been mistaken.
The "inspiring person" I am referring to
Is not a girlfriend of mine
And it never will be,
Because I am a girl, 你 see.
This person
I call an influential person
Is my teacher.
Shocked yet?
Well,
All this 年
I have been afraid of her.
Cowering in the shadows.
I did not enjoy that feeling,
Believe me.
That feeling of cowardice
Has been slowly receding
As the 年 went by,
Like the waves of the blue ocean.
Now I see her as
A true friend and mentor,
As she has been everything
I am in this life.
My teacher has changed my life.
Completely, entirely.
I feel like I cannot ever repay her
For what she has done for me.
The effect is ever-lasting.
All I can say for now,
Is thank you.
Thank 你 for all 你 have done for me.
Your effect on me
Will never be erased.
你 will always be like a hand print
On my heart.
Truly.
This is a peom I wrote for a competition at my school. Tell me what 你 think of it, please?
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Have 你 felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until 你 burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! 你 will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.
Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.
__________________________________________________
Have 你 felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until 你 burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! 你 will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.
Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.