写作 Article: Influenced

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posted by hgfan5602

I am
Shocked.
Seeing how amazing she is,
Seeing how she can truly
Change my life.

She is a very inspiring person.
由展示 me how perseverance
Can take 你 so far,
And how determination and tolerance
Are the keys to success.

你 may laugh all 你 want at me,
As others do.
But nothing will shake my feeling
Of this particular friend.

Now,
Up to this point,
你 have been lied to.
Well, partly.
Your brain has been mistaken.

The "inspiring person" I am referring to
Is not a girlfriend of mine
And it never will be,
Because I am a girl, 你 see.

This person
I call an influential person
Is my teacher.
Shocked yet?

Well,
All this 年
I have been afraid of her.
Cowering in the shadows.
I did not enjoy that feeling,
Believe me.

That feeling of cowardice
Has been slowly receding
As the 年 went by,
Like the waves of the blue ocean.

Now I see her as
A true friend and mentor,
As she has been everything
I am in this life.

My teacher has changed my life.
Completely, entirely.
I feel like I cannot ever repay her
For what she has done for me.
The effect is ever-lasting.

All I can say for now,
Is thank you.
Thank 你 for all 你 have done for me.
Your effect on me
Will never be erased.
你 will always be like a hand print
On my heart.
Truly.

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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 7

posted by Insight357

I saw black sneakers with purple shoestrings. Then tight black pants. 下一个 a draping black shirt, with small hands covered 由 fingerless, leather gloves. A 交叉, 十字架 choker sat at the base of her neck. My eyes then fell upon hers. Those eyes, those piercing blue eyes, somewhat similar to my own. The black hair teased slightly, with choppy, side bangs, covering the outer corner of her right eye. It was the girl, from the hallway. The one who thanked me. I gasped softly.
“Hello, Lucy,” I 说 to her.
“Hello,” she 说 in the same small voice....

Fairy Tale Chapter 2

posted by bunnibunnibaby

"It's nice here. I don't know many people though..." Victor brushed his hair back, smiling again. "Well, 由 tomorrow, all of the kids at school will wanna be your friend." "Oh..." Jade turned slightly to see the raven haired boy deep in thought. "What is it?" "Hn? Oh, it's nothing. Oh, we're here." The blonde looked up ahead and saw her house. "Really? Cause my house is right there." She pointed, and Victor burst out laughing. "Haha-I live right 下一个 to 你 then..." The blonde looked at the house 下一个 to hers. It seemed normal. A little old fashioned, but definitely normal. "Cool! Well, I'll see 你 tomorrow then?" "Yeah..." The onyx eyed boy took Jade's hand, kissed it lightly, then walked off. "What was that?"

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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 5

posted by Insight357

Today was my first 日 working for the mental institution. I woke around ten, and got a shower. I dressed in my black pants, shoes, and shirt. Over the 衬衫 was my white doctor’s jacket. The color white didn’t’ suite me, but it’s not like I hade a choice in wearing it.
I walked to work. The asylum was only three blocks away. As I walked I worried over people criticizing me. Or, making fun of me. What if I treated the wrong patient? What if I messed something up? What if I got lost?
My stomach started to tighten as I thought of the day...

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Hells Outlaw - Chapter 15

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 15

Jax felt he had been pounding on the door of Bone’s 车库 for an hour. Finally, he heard the click of the lock and they door opened and he was greeted 由 the barrel of a shotgun.
“Whoa Bone come on its just me,” Jax 说 quickly with his hands up in surrender as Bone stepped closer to him without lowering his gun.
“Yeah I know it’s you, the hell 你 doin’ here?” Bone replied. His voice was raspy like he had a sore throat.
“I’m not drunk if that’s what you’re thinkin’.”
“No? Then why are 你 here?”
Bone kept his shotgun pointed at Jax.
“Look, I just escaped...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 4

posted by Insight357

    I stood from the brown couch, rubbing my eyes. I had slept on the couch. Grey was mad, and I had been stressed. It was a fight waiting to happen.
    Grey had already left for her job at the pharmacy. She was a secretary. Today, I was going to get my license, to practice psychology.
    I stood from the couch, I was dressed in last night’s clothes. I’d been at the bar, doing 龙舌兰酒 shots. I was trying to numb my mind from pop-up questions.
    It had been a week since I left the asylum. Since I left Dr. Anozi....

Hells Outlaw - Chapter 12

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 12

The late afternoon sun shined on Koda’s back as he headed further west. Soon the sun would be shining in front of him, slowly drifting its way down the western horizon. Night would follow…

The hospital grew quiet as the hours went by. Jax’s pain had subsided but his anger and vengeance did not. With each passing 分钟 he grew 更多 restless and ready to leave his hospital bed.
He gently took the oxygen tubes out of his nose then gritted his teeth as he pulled the IV out his hand. Slowly, he moved his feet towards the edge of the 床, 床上 but quickly pushed them back as he saw a nurse...

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Death Becomes Me: Luke Blade Story Chapter 2

posted by sawfan13

Sylvia took him to the hospital after his tantrum. He had a fever from it, and he became a little sick from his anger. She was a very good mother and taught her children well, but why would her 天使 of a son act so violently and moody? The doctor 说 it wasn't Sylvia's fault. Luke's real mother drank alcohol while carrying him which that means, Luke has fetal alcohol syndrome. It causes violent mood swings, temper tantrums, and compulsive behavior. Sylvia was worried about him because this can effect his behavior with everyone else around him, and his self esteem. A few days later, Sylvia...

Hidden Power-Part One, The Two Odd Visitors

posted by woofbark

Somewhere in the universe, a planet was dying.

The planet was Esphera, Earth's twin. Here lived people like on earth, who wore pants, shirts and dresses; they went to school and had emotions;they had their own currency. There were no cars here, but they had instead hovercrafts- spade-shaped vehicles that floated in the air. Most people on the planet were too poor to buy a hovercraft, one of the most expenisve items in Esphera.

But the thing that sets Earth and Esphera apart is the children.

Children on Esphera are all born with a special power-like invisibility-that vanishes at age 16. After...

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Dangerous 爱情 Chapter Two

posted by M169

I 偷了 fifty dollers out of my dads wallet. Okay...I'll pay it back I swear! Maybe he won't notice it's gone....

I used the money to go to a movie with my friend. I mean, if my parents won't willing let me, of course this is going to happen. They should be expecting it.

I walk into the movie theater, and wait for my friend. I wait for ten 分钟 before I get a text message saying that they won't 显示 up...I turn around to head to the exit and I crash into a man. I take no notice of his apperence. I look him stright in the eyes. "Oh! Sorry Miss!" He stuttered. "It's okay....what movie are...

The girl Who cried 狼 Chapter 8

posted by greenstergirl

Ok I was REALLY bored this time so I drew ANOTHER picture of Danny. It took me forever and it STILL sucks.

Okay I just realized something. There's a movie called The girl who cried wolf. And I never knew there was until now so I think I should change this stories title. Tell me in my 评论 as a vote. Should it be called

Wolf Girl
or
Ice Wolf
or
I'm no werewolf
(I don't know I just loved my first idea the original one but if 你 have any better ideas tell me)

Which one? Okay lets start the story.

**************************************************

Danny:

I moved in front of the group. Behind me I could hear Brenna and Kyla talking. Marcus trudged behind. I rubbed my tired eyes and told myself too keep walking....

The girl who cried 狼 chapter 6

posted by greenstergirl

My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible

Her scream was high pitched. The kind where 你 get a shiver down your back. The kind when someone scrapes their nails on a chalk board. The kind where the person screaming is in utter pain. But gladly it wasn't all the way like that.

你 would think the water elementals would be 更多 careful around the giant sea snake. It's one of the many creatures that live in our vally's lake. Some of the water elementals are even 鱼或者 sea snake shape shifters. Thats why I laughed when one of them screamed at the giant serpent.

Trixi yelled at me for my rude behavior and we ran towards the snake. From...

Through Their Eyes Chapter 1

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

Keaira: I was an early bird for one reason and one reason only sunrises and they early flow of the river in the morning. The river was a place where 你 could dunk your feet into its cool waters and it’d sound as if it were whispering your name 或者 maybe it was just my brother playing a trick on me. 你 had plenty to do 由 the river. Swim in its waters, draw things in the wet dirt, 或者 stare at the lilies floating on the surface. I remember scaring my parents to death each morning when they woke up and me, Kaden, Marshall, and my little 3 年 old brother Johnny were...

The 日 I Died (Short story, Pt. 1)

posted by cute20k

BANG! BANG!A shill cry; a scream.

It's funny, 你 never feel your death creeping closer. It's not like 你 feel the silent breaths of your death tip-toeing toward you. And if 你 did, like it would matter. Most people reach out to grab their world when they see it falling... then again, I'm not most people.

Hi, I'm Ever Flarez. I was- I mean, I am? - an average girl. The thing is, my life kinda clashed with the whole average thing.

Here I am. I'm not alive. But I am something. I'm ... well- dead, 你 could say. But the thing is I'm not gone, gone. It's like my life is gone- not me.

I know you...

Kiely's new secret chapter 1

posted by melcu

"what should we do today Teki?" Kiely asked her tiny dog. Knowing that the dog couldn't posibly respond in any other way than wagging her tail 或者 bark and that is exactly what the dog did.
Kiely sat 下一个 to her 奇瓦瓦, 奇瓦瓦州 and ran her hand down her back feeling her soft black and brown fur."your a good baby girl" she crooned at the little puppy.
"Lets go to the park and then we could go to fred's,"Kiely finally desided Teki was still wagging her tail. Kiely made her way to the bathroom to freshen up and take a shower. She got out of the 淋浴 and headed toward the mirror to see if she had any...

A troulbed soul (the dark)

posted by neonstars

When I woke up July 15,2010 I had no idea what i was a bout to do heres my story:
I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock and it 说 5am. Oh crap,Im gonna be late fr work! I 说 as i stretched my jeans on.I got dresed and ran down stairs.I opend my liitle sisters door to see if she was aslepp and as usaul she was.She was only 12 and i was 17.
I grabbed my keys and I ran out the door,I started my Red jeep and drove down the rocky drive way.10 分钟 later ...I parked my car in the parking lot of SUzi Surf Shop.I saw my 39 年 old boss suzie turining on the lights.I enterd and a cowoker name...

Holding on Chapter 1 : Family and 老友记

posted by TomboyWriter

If there’s one thing I cared about 更多 than my freedom it was my family. I loved my dad 更多 than anyone though it’s just hard not to 爱情 my dad with his kind gentle nature. His eyes were big like a 小狗 somewhat and were a deep dark 浓情巧克力 brown framed 由 long dark eyelashes and dark eye brows that matched his charcoal black hair that had a thick consistency but a silky feel. His skin was a medium 橄榄 color and though many didn’t find him handsome I did. He was everything in a father and in myself. He was real shy and my Uncle Drew as I called him though he wasn’t my real...

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Finding 爱情 : Chapters Five, Six, Seven, and Eight : Part One ; Casey's Story

posted by dancing_banana

X: Chapter 5

Matthew

I’m picking up Casey on Saturday and my 心 melts a little 更多 when I see her. She’s got her hair curled, her makeup done lightly, and a pale 粉, 粉色羁, ter子, 吊带 dress on, and a white sweater to cover her shoulders.

“Wow, 你 look amazing.” I mean it too.

“Thank you, is the sweater okay? I think I might have something else if I can’t have any white on.”

“It’s fine, my cousin won’t care a bit.”

“Okay, good. 你 clean up nice.” She tells me well checking me out in my suit.

We talk some while we drive to the beach, but mostly we joke, and try to make it not awkward....

Leaving Ilias: Swept Away Chap. 1

posted by ButteBaby_K

An image found that somewhat looks like the image of Phim I had in my head. ")

Chapter 1: 迷失 in my own world of thought, a common occurrence, the rain left me like always. I remained standing moving with breeze, as the rain receded leaving me pondering my thoughts. I smiled to myself. Ilias, my name was derived from his. I was born in a great time of sorrow, called Ravasn; for that was the name of death, which there was much of nearly 15 years 以前 on the 日 of my beginning. A massive drought had plagued Phim for 7 years for the rain spirit was greatly wounded 由 the indecency of my people. They had 迷失 his trust and his respect, and I was the solution. My mother had...

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Mary Beech - Star, Chapter One - before Chapter Two - Hooded Stranger

posted by 1-2vampire

Chapter One: Before

A warm late Augusts’ evening was upon Hultimore, the secret area which humans that held no gem upon their left palm were not able to see. Gemmers believed that if they visited this area for any amount of time at least once in life, they will be born a 更多 powerful Gemmer after death.
No one stepped upon the streets of Hultimore after dark. It was forbidden. Most obeyed this rule and stayed indoors. Yet, the silence of Hultimore was broken, as a lone traveller stepped out across the barrier between dry, barren land and a city full of magic.
His footsteps echoed in the empty...

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Primrose High: chapter 1: How it all began (PART 1)

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

WELL I AM CURRENTLY 写作 the wierd and wonderfull world of Belle, BUT I THOUGHT I WOULD WRITE ANOTHER SHORT STORY, SO I DONT GET BORED.

ANYWAY THIS ONES ABOUT A GIRLS LIFE,ROBYN. SHE DOESNT SEEM TO FIT IN, AND NOT FOR THE REASON SHE THINKS...

Panicking,I ran. And ran and ran. I didnt look back, all I knew was, I had had to run. They wont get me not now not ever, I wont be used.

2 Days earlier,

"Robyn! Get up now!" I faintly heard my mum shout from down the stairs, moaning I turned onto my stomach, and pulled my 枕头 over my head. "Robyn Stirling, if 你 dont get ready for school now, you...