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Hows my story so far? I am stuck, any ideas what I could put next?

Here's what I have so far:
I stopped in a dark alley panting. I peered around the long brick wall, when I saw the man in the black car. He was scoping the area looking for me. I would have run but I was too out of breath. But even my quiet tippy toes would be heard, with the many people chasing me.
I didn’t have to run in hide. But when someone comes chasing you, its almost the only option.
My name is Citrus Dove. A strange name, for a strange girl. My mother always said. I would always ask her why she called me that and thats what she told me.     
Everything was normal until that one day, on a couch, with a broken leg, a giant rash on my arm, and a huge pimple growing on my forehead.
“Darling, how is your leg?” My mother asked repeatedly, but luckily this time she was making me cookies, I 爱情 cookies. “Same as it was two 秒 ago” I 说 waiting there with the aroma of 饼干 feeling the air.
She put them on the short, 焦糖 colored coffee table. I grabbed a cookie and felt the delicious melted 浓情巧克力 goodness melting in my mouth.
 coolcatsRus123 posted 一年多以前
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mermaidgirl1010 said:
Good. I 爱情 the begining. What is the name of this story?
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posted 一年多以前 
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1st: thanks! 2nd: it's called The elpoeps it doesn't make sence now but it will
coolcatsRus123 posted 一年多以前
Firewriter said:
The beginning of this story sounds awsome! What to put next, Im not sure. What exactly is your plot here? Like, are 你 gonna continue with that 日 when the 浓情巧克力 was melting in her mouth 或者 when she was running? Then itll be easier to get the 下一个 part goin
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