I need some serious help!

Ok so I am going to try and answer this as best i can (its a hard Q.)....

So usually in 写作 levels connect, something that happens seemingly meaningless at the start of the story comes back at the end 或者 middle. If 你 try and find the layers that connect 你 can cut them (2 或者 more) out without rupturing the story line.

Planning might also help. If 你 plan the layers at the start then 你 don't get the end and have to (try) cut something out. If 你 plan the layers at the beginning then 你 also don't have the chance of adding 更多 in from the original idea.

Hope this helps....

Hm, this is a complicated question, because 你 would go about it differently for each story. Since I don't know anything about your story, I can't give 你 specific examples.

Sit down and look at what 你 have, and I mean really look. Is there anything that doesn't add to the conflict, plot, 或者 general story arc?

Also, talk to your teacher. See what he/she thinks is so complex about your stories. What he/she thinks maybe completely different from what 你 think.

youve got so much to say its almost bursting, the teacher doesnt want to be inthralled 由 your stories; your good, but- teacher got to work on the other 迷失 sheep,mmm simpler sucks,= that wouldnt sell! [and your in training!!!!!!!] will a note from Saint Nick help? id allow your 100 pages, the rest in colour ha he hi ho hu later;-}