Does anyone know how to write a paragraph about geting in a car crash?

I have an idea.

"All I remember happening was being in a car ride with my parents. It was an 'ok' ride, but it all went wrong when we were crossing the bridge. It was a really stormy night and I was staring out of one of the back windows, watching the raindrops roll down the window pane. We started swerving and I had no felt like this was a nightmare. We were in the very middle of the bridge when my dad 迷失 control. I closed my eyes, but felt everything. I felt the car leave the ground and flip before crashing on the 兜帽, 罩, 发动机罩 from all the water pressure. I was sitting up straight when it happened, I hit my head on the dented 兜帽, 罩, 发动机罩 of the car. My parents did too. We were under water and it wasn't good. I had a sudden strong feeling that told me I wouldn't die. I got over the rushing blood from my head and tried to open a door. Everything was upside down. I was surpised that there were no broken windows. I finally found a door and got out. I got out of the water and gasped gor air. I thought my parents would be right behind me, but they weren't. I screamed and tried to save them. I went back down and a current took me. I didn't know where the car was anymore so I gave up. Despite my thoughts that they had got up too, I somehow knew that I'd 迷失 them." I felt tears trickle down m face.

This is like an overly dramatic version of a car crash I was in farely recently. It was raining, but we weren't on a bridge. My sister 迷失 control of the car and we swerved a lot. I closed my eyes but I knew we were flipping. I could feel the car leave the ground a roll a few times. When I opened my eyes we were upside down, in a 玉米 field. When you're upside down everything is so confusing. It took me a while to find a door handle. I didn't hit my head, but I got shot with a staple gun. Anyway, I had a nightmare that night, about drowning from wrecking off a bridge. I drew both of these things into this little thing I wrote. I hope it works. And don't worry about me and my sister. My sister is now perfecly fine-we both had bruises across our chests from the seatbelts. I only have a scar on my ankle from the staple gun. The car however, is a different story. It really sucks because I liked that car.

All I remember happening was being in a car ride with my parents. It was an 'ok' ride, but I could sense that something wrong was going to happen when we were crossing the bridge. It was a little to stormy for my taste, hailing and thundering. The last clear thing I could remember was the thunderous pounding of the rain hitting my car window...

Suddenly the car swerved, sending shocks through my body. I felt the back bumper hit something hard, and I flew forward, then slammed back into the seat. I can hear my mother in the front seat, trying to conceal her tears. The wind shield shattered into tiny pieces as I saw small and large branches collapse on 最佳, 返回页首 of the car. Grunts of pain could be heard in the front, and I quickly unbuckle my belt, rushing to the front of the car. Bug mistake. As soon as I got up from my seat, the car's windows busted, sending millions of glass everywhere. Pieces landed in my skin, my eyes. I unbuckle my parent's belts, managing to see with what sight i have left. Once I do that, I get out of the car, doing the tuck and roll, instantly swallowed 由 rain and hail. Rushing to the front of the car, which was still moving rather quickly, and thrusted the doors open. I grabbed my father 由 the arm, pulling as hard as I can. He fell out onto the pavement, half his body still in the car. I sprinted to the other side, and tried to do the same for my mother. It wouldn't open. The door was stuck, a dent on the side of it, preventing it from opening. Suddenly the vehicle flew out of my grasp, its weight to much for me to hold. I watched in agony as it drove itself of the bridge, plunging into the water, my mother still in there. Tears welled up in my eyes as i walked back over to my father. He took major blows to the head, and glass stuck in his flesh. All I remember was seeing the little brooke of blood coming from his head before I passed out.

..I woke up, instantly feeling nauseous. I feel like I was being eaten alive. My head and stomach hurt, and my eyes were swollen. I can only faintly remember myself crying when the doctor had told me my parents had died.

"The heavy downpour made it almost impossible to see outside. The sensation made me feel queasy, so I sat back and closed my eyes. I must have drifted off, because I'd been woken up 由 high-pitched squeals. Everything happened so fast; it wasn't in slow motion like in the movies. It just happened. I was jolted forwards, the 座位 带, 皮带 pulling me back, winding me. I screamed. There was a sensation of floating for a moment, then a crushing, compressing pain. And then everything went black."

Sorry, not so good, I was just using the sensations I had been feeling when I was in a car crash. It wasn't so bad that anyone died, but it was on holiday, and it was on omen, because it was the WORST holiday ever.