Well I promised this tomorrow but I finished it and well here it is. It's Bree tanner in diegos point of view. Going from where he left her his final night with her. I wrote this fir fun and have only wrote this one. Here's the link about me explaining what I am doing: link
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun 你 first timers 阅读 my 粉丝 fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my 下一个 project I am working on. So 你 will see this draft again at the end of his story I will write so many moons from now. But 下一个 time it will be very different. I am ninety six percent sure of that. Diego is one of my 最喜爱的 characters of the twilight saga and I thought he deserved his own story and hopefully 你 can relate to him and learn to 爱情 him as much as I do. Well sorry for the long introduction. Umm please 评论 and critique I like that stuff well thanks for 阅读 here's the story. Please remember not edited and I am sure it will be different the 下一个 time I put it up. So please don't be too harsh. Here it is
I frowned as I turned around an ran from Bree. I felt bad about tricking her, but I did know if this turned badly...well Riley wouldn't hurt me, but I didn't know about Bree. Riley trusted me. I would make it up to her later. I was about to turn around and maybe talk to Riley tomorrow. I thought about our new hand shake all 日 and couldn't wait to 显示 her tomorrow...- "Diego?" Riley asked, interrupting my thoughts. Crap! He was with her. I looked in her deep red eyes, her expression menacing "I knew someone was spying on us! 你 there!-" she grabbed my 衬衫 with her fist and yanked me up to her, her eyes only inches from mine-"What did 你 hear?! What did 你 see?!" she growled, her voice was still, high. Almost a shriek "n-nothing, I just wanted to ask Riley about some theories" I said, for the first time truly terrified, but she could tell I was lying. My voice was so shaken it gave away my lie. She threw me on the ground and turned on Riley "So, tell me Riley, 你 can always really distract them with thirst?" she growled. He looked at me quickly, then back at Victoria "umm..." he 说 ,dumbfounded. I guessed "I thought he was, but he is almost a year...he-" "I guess 你 thought wrong" she 说 interrupting him "you" she 说 "get up!" she yelled and grabbed me again "your coming with us, 你 are going to tell me everything, and I will find out one way 或者 another!" she said.
We walked...Until we got to the log 舱, 小木屋 then we stopped inside, she slammed the door behind her. Then the lights came on, she glared at me for a long 分钟 "what all did 你 hear?" she said, I thought about all the things we saw and what I was going to tell her. She slammed me in the wall, hard "what did 你 hear!?" she yelled. I looked at Riley, betrayed. He looked at me apologetically while he did nothing to stop her "umm...well I saw those people in the dark cloaks. I was following Riley to tell him that I found out the sun didn't hurt. I didn't mean to" I said. She smiled at me, her grin harsh. She wasn't happy, she was menacing "oh...I think 你 did, and 你 will pay! Riley!" she yelled. She startled Riley "hold him down, I am going to get the truth" she said. Riley hesitated for a moment "fine then, but 你 either lose him, 或者 me" she snapped. Then he slowly closed his eyes for a long minute. In that one minute, he turned to stone. He wasn't the Riley I knew anymore. He opened his eyes and they looked like actual rubies, hard and cold? Yes. The Riley I knew and trusted was gone.
He walked sullenly toward me. For one brief 秒 his eyes looked apollogetic, but then went hard again. He held my arms down, pinned against the 墙 "now,what were your theories?" she asked "we-we can go out in the sun, w-without being burned...the sun doesn't hurt" I 说 "but it does burn" she hissed picking up my leg with one arm, with the other she slammed her elbow into it hard. It felt like she set it on 火, 消防 Riley shuddered, as I saw my unattached leg get thrown into another 墙 I screamed. "Riley" I screamed, why was he doing this. I struggled to get out of his grasp. He did not look at me. He looked at the ground while holding me. He did not react to my voice "was anyone with you, while 你 were listening?" she asked. I would not tell her about Bree, I would be killed a thousand times before, SHE knew. I shook my head "wait" Riley said, his voice cold "he was with one girl yesterday, all day. In one of his hideouts. I think her name was Bree" Riley 说 "oh, well who is that? And what is this hideout?" she 说 looking in my eyes for 答案 "it's a cave, the sun was coming up, and I was trying to be responsible. I took her with me. She doesn't know about the sun, she doesn't know that I was listening. All we did that 日 was talk...about our walt life, before now. We became 老友记 and that's all. I even finished making our hand shake. But we decided to keep our distance when we got back and would want to hunt together. I even really, really like her. I have no clue about her but that's all. She doesn't know anything" I 说 really fast.
I waited as she took that in slowly. She pulled off my other leg and threw it to another 墙 "what did 你 hear tonight?" she 说 calmly, but the calm didn't touch her eyes "I heard everything the people in cloaks said, and before that. Nothing else. I was wanting to tell Riley about the sun, that's all" I 说 but she didn't believe that I wasn't trying to spy she grabbed my forefinger and moved it around "and 你 weren't trying to spy on us?" she asked "no" I said. She ripped it off, the pain, the 火, 消防 burning stronger. "Are 你 sure?" she asked "no" I 说 again. She ripped off another one. I screamed and struggled. I needed to leave now, but Riley was stronger. Especially since I was weak. She ripped off three 更多 "you were spying on us weren't you?!" she yelled and ripped off my other hand. I screamed and confessed "yes, I was curious" I screamed some more. She smiled "I knew it." she grinned bigger. Riley let me fall. I screamed in pain, she walked slowly closer to me and from the corner of my eyes I saw Riley mouth "I am sorry". She stopped less than an inch from me and 说 "your services are no longer needed. Thanks for everything" she said. Then put both hands on the side of my head. Ready to rip my head off.The last thing I saw when I closed my eyes...before the blackness came over was Bree. I closed my eyes and waited for the final fire, the large amount of pain and burning to come to end. Along with my short 秒 life as Diego.
Again not edited and please 评论 I hope 你 enjoyed this. Umm see 你 friday for those of 你 who read a lot of my writings
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun 你 first timers 阅读 my 粉丝 fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my 下一个 project I am working on. So 你 will see this draft again at the end of his story I will write so many moons from now. But 下一个 time it will be very different. I am ninety six percent sure of that. Diego is one of my 最喜爱的 characters of the twilight saga and I thought he deserved his own story and hopefully 你 can relate to him and learn to 爱情 him as much as I do. Well sorry for the long introduction. Umm please 评论 and critique I like that stuff well thanks for 阅读 here's the story. Please remember not edited and I am sure it will be different the 下一个 time I put it up. So please don't be too harsh. Here it is
I frowned as I turned around an ran from Bree. I felt bad about tricking her, but I did know if this turned badly...well Riley wouldn't hurt me, but I didn't know about Bree. Riley trusted me. I would make it up to her later. I was about to turn around and maybe talk to Riley tomorrow. I thought about our new hand shake all 日 and couldn't wait to 显示 her tomorrow...- "Diego?" Riley asked, interrupting my thoughts. Crap! He was with her. I looked in her deep red eyes, her expression menacing "I knew someone was spying on us! 你 there!-" she grabbed my 衬衫 with her fist and yanked me up to her, her eyes only inches from mine-"What did 你 hear?! What did 你 see?!" she growled, her voice was still, high. Almost a shriek "n-nothing, I just wanted to ask Riley about some theories" I said, for the first time truly terrified, but she could tell I was lying. My voice was so shaken it gave away my lie. She threw me on the ground and turned on Riley "So, tell me Riley, 你 can always really distract them with thirst?" she growled. He looked at me quickly, then back at Victoria "umm..." he 说 ,dumbfounded. I guessed "I thought he was, but he is almost a year...he-" "I guess 你 thought wrong" she 说 interrupting him "you" she 说 "get up!" she yelled and grabbed me again "your coming with us, 你 are going to tell me everything, and I will find out one way 或者 another!" she said.
We walked...Until we got to the log 舱, 小木屋 then we stopped inside, she slammed the door behind her. Then the lights came on, she glared at me for a long 分钟 "what all did 你 hear?" she said, I thought about all the things we saw and what I was going to tell her. She slammed me in the wall, hard "what did 你 hear!?" she yelled. I looked at Riley, betrayed. He looked at me apologetically while he did nothing to stop her "umm...well I saw those people in the dark cloaks. I was following Riley to tell him that I found out the sun didn't hurt. I didn't mean to" I said. She smiled at me, her grin harsh. She wasn't happy, she was menacing "oh...I think 你 did, and 你 will pay! Riley!" she yelled. She startled Riley "hold him down, I am going to get the truth" she said. Riley hesitated for a moment "fine then, but 你 either lose him, 或者 me" she snapped. Then he slowly closed his eyes for a long minute. In that one minute, he turned to stone. He wasn't the Riley I knew anymore. He opened his eyes and they looked like actual rubies, hard and cold? Yes. The Riley I knew and trusted was gone.
He walked sullenly toward me. For one brief 秒 his eyes looked apollogetic, but then went hard again. He held my arms down, pinned against the 墙 "now,what were your theories?" she asked "we-we can go out in the sun, w-without being burned...the sun doesn't hurt" I 说 "but it does burn" she hissed picking up my leg with one arm, with the other she slammed her elbow into it hard. It felt like she set it on 火, 消防 Riley shuddered, as I saw my unattached leg get thrown into another 墙 I screamed. "Riley" I screamed, why was he doing this. I struggled to get out of his grasp. He did not look at me. He looked at the ground while holding me. He did not react to my voice "was anyone with you, while 你 were listening?" she asked. I would not tell her about Bree, I would be killed a thousand times before, SHE knew. I shook my head "wait" Riley said, his voice cold "he was with one girl yesterday, all day. In one of his hideouts. I think her name was Bree" Riley 说 "oh, well who is that? And what is this hideout?" she 说 looking in my eyes for 答案 "it's a cave, the sun was coming up, and I was trying to be responsible. I took her with me. She doesn't know about the sun, she doesn't know that I was listening. All we did that 日 was talk...about our walt life, before now. We became 老友记 and that's all. I even finished making our hand shake. But we decided to keep our distance when we got back and would want to hunt together. I even really, really like her. I have no clue about her but that's all. She doesn't know anything" I 说 really fast.
I waited as she took that in slowly. She pulled off my other leg and threw it to another 墙 "what did 你 hear tonight?" she 说 calmly, but the calm didn't touch her eyes "I heard everything the people in cloaks said, and before that. Nothing else. I was wanting to tell Riley about the sun, that's all" I 说 but she didn't believe that I wasn't trying to spy she grabbed my forefinger and moved it around "and 你 weren't trying to spy on us?" she asked "no" I said. She ripped it off, the pain, the 火, 消防 burning stronger. "Are 你 sure?" she asked "no" I 说 again. She ripped off another one. I screamed and struggled. I needed to leave now, but Riley was stronger. Especially since I was weak. She ripped off three 更多 "you were spying on us weren't you?!" she yelled and ripped off my other hand. I screamed and confessed "yes, I was curious" I screamed some more. She smiled "I knew it." she grinned bigger. Riley let me fall. I screamed in pain, she walked slowly closer to me and from the corner of my eyes I saw Riley mouth "I am sorry". She stopped less than an inch from me and 说 "your services are no longer needed. Thanks for everything" she said. Then put both hands on the side of my head. Ready to rip my head off.The last thing I saw when I closed my eyes...before the blackness came over was Bree. I closed my eyes and waited for the final fire, the large amount of pain and burning to come to end. Along with my short 秒 life as Diego.
Again not edited and please 评论 I hope 你 enjoyed this. Umm see 你 friday for those of 你 who read a lot of my writings
This scene is very revealing because we can see the bracelet that Jacob gave Bella plus the bite mark left 由 James and finally the ring, too.
Remember that this ring is very special because it belonged to Elizabeth Masen, the biological mother of Edward, so it has a lot of sentimental value.
The ring is gorgeous, with tons of diamonds. It shows the true 爱情 that Edward has for Bella, and that he wants to spend eternity with her.
Of course, the ring scene in the book and movie is one of the most romantic and emotional of the Twilight series.
Jacob Black
