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Well I promised this tomorrow but I finished it and well here it is. It's Bree tanner in diegos point of view. Going from where he left her his final night with her. I wrote this fir fun and have only wrote this one. Here's the link about me explaining what I am doing: link
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun 你 first timers 阅读 my 粉丝 fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my 下一个 project I am working on. So 你 will see this draft again at the end of his story I will write so many moons from now. But 下一个 time it will be very different. I am ninety six percent sure of that. Diego is one of my 最喜爱的 characters of the twilight saga and I thought he deserved his own story and hopefully 你 can relate to him and learn to 爱情 him as much as I do. Well sorry for the long introduction. Umm please 评论 and critique I like that stuff well thanks for 阅读 here's the story. Please remember not edited and I am sure it will be different the 下一个 time I put it up. So please don't be too harsh. Here it is

                I frowned as I turned around an ran from Bree. I felt bad about tricking her, but I did know if this turned badly...well Riley wouldn't hurt me, but I didn't know about Bree. Riley trusted me. I would make it up to her later. I was about to turn around and maybe talk to Riley tomorrow. I thought about our new hand shake all 日 and couldn't wait to 显示 her tomorrow...- "Diego?" Riley asked, interrupting my thoughts. Crap! He was with her. I looked in her deep red eyes, her expression menacing "I knew someone was spying on us! 你 there!-" she grabbed my 衬衫 with her fist and yanked me up to her, her eyes only inches from mine-"What did 你 hear?! What did 你 see?!" she growled, her voice was still, high. Almost a shriek "n-nothing, I just wanted to ask Riley about some theories" I said, for the first time truly terrified, but she could tell I was lying. My voice was so shaken it gave away my lie. She threw me on the ground and turned on Riley "So, tell me Riley, 你 can always really distract them with thirst?" she growled. He looked at me quickly, then back at Victoria "umm..." he 说 ,dumbfounded. I guessed "I thought he was, but he is almost a year...he-" "I guess 你 thought wrong" she 说 interrupting him "you" she 说 "get up!" she yelled and grabbed me again "your coming with us, 你 are going to tell me everything, and I will find out one way 或者 another!" she said.
               We walked...Until we got to the log 舱, 小木屋 then we stopped inside, she slammed the door behind her. Then the lights came on, she glared at me for a long 分钟 "what all did 你 hear?" she said, I thought about all the things we saw and what I was going to tell her. She slammed me in the wall, hard "what did 你 hear!?" she yelled. I looked at Riley, betrayed. He looked at me apologetically while he did nothing to stop her "umm...well I saw those people in the dark cloaks. I was following Riley to tell him that I found out the sun didn't hurt. I didn't mean to" I said. She smiled at me, her grin harsh. She wasn't happy, she was menacing "oh...I think 你 did, and 你 will pay! Riley!" she yelled. She startled Riley "hold him down, I am going to get the truth" she said. Riley hesitated for a moment "fine then, but 你 either lose him, 或者 me" she snapped. Then he slowly closed his eyes for a long minute. In that one minute, he turned to stone. He wasn't the Riley I knew anymore.  He opened his eyes and they looked like actual rubies, hard and cold? Yes. The Riley I knew and trusted was gone.
      He walked sullenly toward me. For one brief 秒 his eyes looked apollogetic, but then went hard again. He held my arms down, pinned against the 墙 "now,what were your theories?" she asked "we-we can go out in the sun, w-without being burned...the sun doesn't hurt" I 说 "but it does burn" she hissed picking up my leg with one arm, with the other she slammed her elbow into it hard. It felt like she set it on 火, 消防 Riley shuddered, as I saw my unattached leg get thrown into another 墙 I screamed. "Riley" I screamed, why was he doing this. I struggled to get out of his grasp. He did not look at me. He looked at the ground while holding me. He did not react to my voice "was anyone with you, while 你 were listening?" she asked. I would not tell her about Bree, I would be killed a thousand times before, SHE knew. I shook my head "wait" Riley said, his voice cold "he was with one girl yesterday, all day. In one of his hideouts. I think her name was Bree" Riley 说 "oh, well who is that? And what is this hideout?" she 说 looking in my eyes for 答案 "it's a cave, the sun was coming up, and I was trying to be responsible. I took her with me. She doesn't know about the sun, she doesn't know that I was listening. All we did that 日 was talk...about our walt life, before now. We became 老友记 and that's all. I even finished making our hand shake. But we decided to keep our distance when we got back and would want to hunt together. I even really, really like her. I have no clue about her but that's all. She doesn't know anything" I 说 really fast.
      I waited as she took that in slowly. She pulled off my other leg and threw it to another 墙 "what did 你 hear tonight?" she 说 calmly, but the calm didn't touch her eyes "I heard everything the people in cloaks said, and before that. Nothing else. I was wanting to tell Riley about the sun, that's all" I 说 but she didn't believe that I wasn't trying to spy she grabbed my forefinger and moved it around "and 你 weren't trying to spy on us?" she asked "no" I said. She ripped it off, the pain, the 火, 消防 burning stronger. "Are 你 sure?" she asked "no" I 说 again. She ripped off another one. I screamed and struggled. I needed to leave now, but Riley was stronger. Especially since I was weak. She ripped off three 更多 "you were spying on us weren't you?!" she yelled and ripped off my other hand. I screamed and confessed "yes, I was curious" I screamed some more. She smiled "I knew it." she grinned bigger. Riley let me fall. I screamed in pain, she walked slowly closer to me and from the corner of my eyes I saw Riley mouth "I am sorry". She stopped less than an inch from me and 说 "your services are no longer needed. Thanks for everything" she said. Then put both hands on the side of my head. Ready to rip my head off.The last thing I saw when I closed my eyes...before the blackness came over was Bree. I closed my eyes and waited for the final fire, the large amount of pain and burning to come to end. Along with my short 秒 life as Diego.



Again not edited and please 评论 I hope 你 enjoyed this. Umm see 你 friday for those of 你 who read a lot of my writings
bella's B-day
Bella had told us she didn't want any thing for her birthday but we still got her some things but she told me i could not spend any money on her so i made her a cd of me playing the pianio!alice&jasper got her a blue 衬衫 and black dressy pants,rose&emmet got her a radio with a cd player and mom and dad got her,me and vickie plane tickets to see bella's mother.
So now me and alice are on our way to bella's,are brother's and sis are done with school! now i dont have to listen to rosalie's thoughts anymore!We were just walking up to the door i couls hear bella she was...
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posted by stepphy-rox
Chapter 4: I Knew It Was To Good To Be True!!!
After I had a good chat to everyone, Bella called me over to her.
“Let’s go for a walk” she grabbed my hand gently and we walked outside to the edge of the little shimmering river near the border of the forest.
“How are you” she asked
“Great, how about you?”
“Good how is Renee I really miss her”
“Actually she is in Australia at the moment so I haven’t seen her since we moved.”
“Wow that’s amazing” she laughed.
“You and Edward are amazing. I hope me and my boyfriend have a good relationship.”
“You have a boyfriend! What’s...
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TWILIGHT:
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Bella Swan’s 移动 to Forks could have been the most boring 移动 she ever made. But when she meets the mysterious and alluring Edward Cullen, her life takes a thrilling and terrifying turn. Up until now, Edward has managed to keep his vampire identity a secret in the small community he lives in, but now nobody is safe, especially Bella.
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NEW MOON:
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Star-crossed 爱人 Bella and Edward return find themselves facing new obstacles, including a devastating separation, the mysterious appearance...
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posted by Rob_patt_fan
When I opened my eyes, Edward was staring straight into my eyes. I placed my head on his hand and tried to sleep before I had to get up and get ready.

-Bella,love. 你 seem really tired. Are 你 sure 你 wanna go to school today?

I turned my head and stared into his golden eyes. He kissed my forehead and started playing with my hair.

-I should go. We have biology test! It's important.

He chuckled and said:
-Ok,Ok! I know that you're a total geek!

I punched him on his shoulder where his skin was Ice cold as always. The clouds were covering the sky so after 2 days that Edward couldn't come to school, He finally could and that made me happy for almost a minute.

-Can 你 wear your blue T-shirt Today? The one that I bought you?!

I nodded with my head and got the t-shirt Edward had bought me the other week. I wore it while Edward was holding me in his arms.

-Ah, your strong!

I giggled and got myself out of his arms.
Chapter 5

*Edward’s pov*

I went out the room.
I went downstairs.
Alice was right. There’s a stupid thing that’s waiting for me.
What the hell! It’s my chance… I didn’t even grab the opportunity.
‘Dammit. 你 are so stupid Edward Cullen....’ I shouted to myself.
Suddenly, I heard the doorbell. I opened the door, still annoyed 由 what had happened at the room.
I looked up.
To my surprise, I saw a girl. She was as young as me. Her eyes were golden brown. Her skin was pale. Her hair was perfectly blonde. Her dimples were so cute – that reminds me of….
Ashley.
Ashley?
Ashley Walker.
No,...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
“Jacob!” I was yelling from the bath room. I was in 更多 pain than I ever thought was possible. It felt like something was clawing its way out of my stomach. This couldn’t be possible I’d been pregnant for only a couple of months. “JACOB BLACK GET 你 屁股 UP HERE!” I was screaming so loud Jacob could have gone def. He ran into the bath room and kneeled down beside me. “What’s wrong?” “I need to get to grandpa.” He picked me up and drove me to the house and carried me in.
“What’s wrong with her?” My mother came rushing to my side. “Mom stop just get grandpa.”...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
(I am sorry, I think I think I have writers block, I dont know how 或者 what to write about. Like a honey moon 或者 anything like that.)

Sawyer and I we to the reception, it was beautiful. Everyone came around and hugged Sawyer and I, told us congradulations. Before we knew it, it was time for everyone to leave. We decide not go on a honeymoon but to just stay at 首页 and relax. We started helping everyone take down the decorations from the wedding and reception. I hated taking everything down because it all looked normal. It didn't take long, than me and Sawyer enjoyed some alone time together....
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The Dance
My dress was blue and alittle before my knee's and i have black heels on and alice did my make up and i told her i should not be wearing heels she 说 your with edward he would never let 你 fall down

My arm was still in a sling,my leg was heeled but i was not aloud to fall cuz it could reopen and i was not aloud to hold vickie on that side.and i was walking down the stairs and vickie said"wow,muma 你 pritty"she was on the 长椅, 沙发 with charlie watching cartoon baseball
"thank you"i went and kissed her on the head
"bye honey"i 说 and went out the door
edward was at the door waiting...
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Chapter 19: Honorary 狼 (Nessie's POV)

    The sun streamed into the open flap of the tent reflecting off of me and Jake’s skin sending prisms of color swirling around us. We had been laying in a contented silence for the past 小时 just trying to 包, 换行 our heads around the fact that we were able to be here together without a worry. It amazed me how even after all of the drama that had unfolded in our lives over the past couple of weeks we could still fall right back into place as though nothing had happened. I was even 更多 grateful than I had been for each moment that...
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I'm sure, 由 now, most of 你 have seen the New Moon Teaser Trailer 2 that was posted. Although it was in french, I'm going to talk about it and it's misinterpretation.

Positive 评论 first! It's great to see snippets of new scenes! We got to see:
- the 狼 pack
- Jacob in Bella's Room
- sneak peek of the Volturi
- cliff diving
- Victoria
- Edward and Bella's Italy kiss
- movie theatre J/B talk

They all look great! And it makes us want to see the movie 更多 if that's possible!

Now the negativity. When I analyze the trailer and get critical, sometimes I get pretty negative if I'm not...
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posted by Gabstaaa
‘Harley… Just because 你 can’t step outside doesn’t mean 你 can bring the outside inside.’ Complained Alice. I’d been practising using my ability of producing objects but I got bored and decided to put it to use. I had managed to make over 60 vases of yellow roses, water-willows and daisies appear in the living room.
‘I hate being cooped up in here though! I want to run!’ I almost screamed.
‘But 你 know why you’re here and not out there. You’re still only 1 月 old. We can’t let a newborn out into a world full of living, breathing humans.’ Alice repeated. I knew...
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Chapter 4: Nature


As I had expected, Bella demanded a meeting with my family shortly after our incident with the dog in the parking lot. Luckily, I had seen this coming (confirmed 由 Alice, of course), and had gotten to my family first. I had convinced them all that Bella’s change could not happen while she was in a state of panic. Giving up your mortality was not a decision to take lightly, and doing it because 你 are afraid is not the right decision. They agreed with me wholeheartedly, and I was grateful.

The meeting itself had gone quickly, each of my family members telling Bella why she...
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The Character


Name: Caius

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: No Known Power

About Them: Caius is married to fellow vampire, Athenodora. With pale skin that is almost translucent and shoulder length hair white as his skin, Caius moves with such grace that he appears to be floating. He is a leader of the Volturi along with Marcus and Aro who have special abilities each. Caius tends to be the stubborn and demanding one of the Volturri as he was ardent that Bella should not be allowed to leave Italy alive. When Aro allowed Bella to leave Volterra alive under the assumption that Edward planned to change...
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Another long one for 你 guys. I decided to break the story up in chapters so 你 guys can keep track of the story with the actual book! ^_^

When I arrived at Charlie’s, Bella was asking permission to go to La Push. Charlie’s thoughts were ecstatic that she was finally going to be talk to Jake. He didn’t care that it was the middle of the night. Quicker than a human eye could detect, I opened the 兜帽, 罩, 发动机罩 of Bella’s truck, and quickly incapacitated it. I hopped in the passenger’s 座位 and waited in the dark. It was cloudy tonight. Too cloudy for even the moon to shine through. I was rather...
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Chapter 10- Flight

------------------------------------Tom's POV------------------------------------------------------------------- I led Esme into the living room and placed my hands on her shoulders. “Esie what is it? What did he do to you?” she looked at me and smiled slightly.

“He didn't touch me. Yet. I'm worried that he will though,” she looked down. “He.... he drinks too often. He'll end up hurting me, but it isn't me I'm worried about Tom,” she looked back up at me.

“I understand, what do we need to do?” I asked her. “We need to get 你 away from him, away from here,”...
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I feel like I REALLY need to work fast on this. I'm only on page 40 in the actual book. So starting after this, I'm going chapter 由 chapter. It will be faster, and it will A LOT longer for 你 guys to enjoy. Hope 你 like it.


“You’re really not that good of a mechanic, Edward. Maybe 你 should have Rosalie look at it tonight, just so 你 look good if Mike decides to let 你 help, 你 know. Not that it wouldn’t be fun to watch his face if Rosalie showed up to help. But since Rosalie is supposed to be across the country attending college, I guess that’s not the best idea. Too bad....
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Nothing to say today... but enjoy! ^_^


In Alice's vision, I see Victoria in the forest right near Forks. Alice's face was completely blank, and I controlled my expression so Angela and Ben won't be wondering what's going on. We still have a secret to protect, the only exception was Bella.
"Alice? Alice!" Angela yelled while moving her hands back and forth in front of Alice's face. I stopped looking at the horror-strucked vision and pretended that it was not a big deal. I didn't need Bella to get worried. I won't let anything happen to her.

I made a casual laugh. Angela and Ben looked at me,...
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Thanks for all the replies, theyre really appricieted. I have the 下一个 installment (which is in JACOBs POV =]) already written out and will post it as quick as possible. Thanks again =]
My whole body ached to be with her. My anxiety must have been 展示 because even without Jasper present Alice leapt lightly to my side and thought softly towards me.
"Dont worry the DOGS" she thought fiercly "will be gone soon and 你 can see Bella." she added hoping to placate me.
I sent Bella a quick text, i knew how bad anxiety was for her.
"Problems with dogs. Will be late. 爱情 you, E" i smiled knowing that...
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Chapter 4-The Demise

I heard the front door creak open and then slam closed. “My 晚餐 had better be ready,” I heard the rough voice of my husband as he walked inside.

“Yes sir. It is,” I 说 pulling out his chair for him. Then sprinting to sit at the other end of the 表 before he could sit and yell at me more. We ate in silence then after dinner, much to my dismay he headed off to the bar with his 'drinking buddies'. I took this opportunity to clean the dishes and pray he didn't get too drunk.

A few hours later I was upstairs reading. The house was spotless and I couldn't think...
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posted by twilight-7
Rosalie hesitated before she began speaking. I could tell she wanted to just plough into an entire 小时 long speech but she considered her words carefully. She didn’t want to upset me which was weird but good.
“First of all,” she said. “I don’t hate you, Kayla. I never have and never will.”
I nodded. “That’s good. I wouldn’t know what to do if 你 did hate me.”
She smiled. “Probably run in terror, I think.”
“Probably,” I laughed. Rosalie even managed a tiny laugh.
“But,” Rosalie turned serious. “I do have to stress that I do not approve of 你 marrying Edward....
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