My first story, so, if 你 wanna make suggestions, post of a 论坛 ill make in a bit.
The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and 狗 yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and 狗 yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
Tell me if 你 see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a 幻想 world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID 塔科, 炸玉米饼 MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a 幻想 world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID 塔科, 炸玉米饼 MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
bloosom
