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Please read my article, it is VERYimportant! Thank 你 so much!

It is called Please read, this a very important topic. It deals with bullying and suicide,so please read. Thank you.
 dbzdude1000 posted 一年多以前
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Shadowmarioking said:
i've seen it, and i'll be frank. it sounds like something anyone would say at the problem, about not allowing it to happen and what not and seeking help. i agree its important, but what 你 lack is enough key information. your words are hollow. 你 state to get help, but never say how 或者 under what circumstances. someone being bullied may not easily seek help, whether from pride, fear, 或者 any other emotion. 你 fail to use yourself as an example effectively, failing to provide information as to how 你 solved your bullying problem. as for the suicide part of it, 你 must consider the fact that thinking of consequences will not always work. sometimes people are 迷失 to their insecurities, and must seek psychological help in some cases.

i would like to point out also that one doesn't consider being a bully. it is an action performed, it doesn't necessarily pop into a think bubble like "HEY! I should be really mean to people today!"

i'm glad 你 have strong feelings on the issue, but 下一个 time present your case in a 更多 memorable way so that it doesn't feel like i'm 阅读 one of those "LIKE DIS IF UR AGAINST BULLYING" posts i find every so often on the 随意 wall.

if i've offended you, i'm terribly sorry, but this is what i think of your 文章 in all honesty.
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