The over all body structure isn't bad, but needs lots of work.
The upper body is too big compared to the lower body, the hips are to small, and the legs just don't sit right.
The angle is a bit odd, the boobs are not in proportion The hair needs 更多 detail the left hand is backwards, and throws me off, other than that, not bad, and not great
你 have teh basics down, 你 just need to work off that.
Just keep practicing.
你 have talent, no doubt about that, 你 just need to unleash it.
