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What do 你 guys think of my poem? My English teacher 说 it was good but I want to know your opinions :3 Please no harsh 评论 ^_^

Dragons
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Up high in the sky they fly
循环, 骑自行车 round and round
Their mighty wings are great things
Soaring over the clouds
One 由 one they go
Greater than birds
Greater than planes
Their large bodies lift them away
Dragon power is strong
They are a peaceful creature
Always aflight in the sky
They shall never be dismissed
And stay with us forever
Respect them
Treasure them
For soon they will be nonexistent
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it's nice .3.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted 一年多以前
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thanks :D
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
你 want our opinions but we can't say anything bad?


seems legit.
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posted 一年多以前 
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well they can be but I don't understand why anyone would say something mean D:
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
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Criticism m'dear.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted 一年多以前
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@Keith Agreed. @16fallout CRITICISM learn to take it.
BlindBandit92 posted 一年多以前
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huh
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
Ssmiley_143 said:
It is good!
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 It is good!
posted 一年多以前 
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:DDDD yay thanks
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
egyptprincess7 said:
It's great.
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thanks :D
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
Kenny756 said:
Its Nice! :)
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thank u ^_^
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
scalesandtails1 said:
That is really good!!
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thanks :D
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
BlindBandit92 said:
Half the poem didn't rhyme but 总体, 整体 I like it. But honestly it is not one of my 最喜爱的 poems.
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posted 一年多以前 
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eh I'm not that good with rhyming but thank 你 :D
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
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^You're quite welcome.
BlindBandit92 posted 一年多以前
Usui--takumi said:
Well.. 龙 are peaceful creature? Lmao."Respect them and treasure them..For soon they will be nonexistent". They don't exist in the first place xDD Anyway, that was sweet and nice :D
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um wrong they DO exist :3
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
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but anyway thx
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
Anime_Gir1235 said:
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IT WUZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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 ... IT WUZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:DDDDDD
16falloutboy posted 一年多以前
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