Nick isn't the only one who reviews stories on Fanpop.
And I decided to take the oppunity to review a bad story of THE PURGE, and I think I found one.
It's called THE DEVIL'S WATER:
It's about the villain of the first movie, "polite stranger" who never identified to have a real name, but the writer called his rel name, Adam Harmon.
I gotta admit, it kinda fits him..
Anyway.
There's only one character so far.
But it appears to be a 爱情 story.
Of coarse, this is pretty hard considering there's 3 things about him..
1: He and his purge gang are responsible for the deaths of many many innocent people, and killed, along with possible rape, and, well, just about every crime imaginable..
2: He is fuckin dead!
Prehaps we all forgot about the the fact, "polite leader" was gunned down 由 one of the protagonists, and clearly died..
3: I think he might of already had a girlfriend..
Well.
As for the story itself..
As I 说 there's only one chapter so far, so not much to say about it, there's barely even a plot yet.
So, all in all..
That's all I got for this one..
And I decided to take the oppunity to review a bad story of THE PURGE, and I think I found one.
It's called THE DEVIL'S WATER:
It's about the villain of the first movie, "polite stranger" who never identified to have a real name, but the writer called his rel name, Adam Harmon.
I gotta admit, it kinda fits him..
Anyway.
There's only one character so far.
But it appears to be a 爱情 story.
Of coarse, this is pretty hard considering there's 3 things about him..
1: He and his purge gang are responsible for the deaths of many many innocent people, and killed, along with possible rape, and, well, just about every crime imaginable..
2: He is fuckin dead!
Prehaps we all forgot about the the fact, "polite leader" was gunned down 由 one of the protagonists, and clearly died..
3: I think he might of already had a girlfriend..
Well.
As for the story itself..
As I 说 there's only one chapter so far, so not much to say about it, there's barely even a plot yet.
So, all in all..
That's all I got for this one..
Bah... I just woke up. 熊 with me. -Not at all funny cause my nickname's Sambear.- Shortest one, but I might tweak it later.... after coffee... and toast...
Rarity shambled into her room,and lay down, staring at the mirror close to her. She probably should get ready for 苹果 Jack's party later, but she was tired. And, as a fashionista unicorn, readying would be a cinch, right? She let her eyes drift shut, not noticing the cold that crept into her bones. Her mind wandered, and she giggled feebly. "Ha, ha, sew tired. D'you get it, Sweetie? So tired, sew tired, and I make dresses? Ha..." Not only was she tired, but now she felt like stone. She yawned, and was still.
.................. -Coffee and Toast-...................
Rarity shambled into her room,and lay down, staring at the mirror close to her. She probably should get ready for 苹果 Jack's party later, but she was tired. And, as a fashionista unicorn, readying would be a cinch, right? She let her eyes drift shut, not noticing the cold that crept into her bones. Her mind wandered, and she giggled feebly. "Ha, ha, sew tired. D'you get it, Sweetie? So tired, sew tired, and I make dresses? Ha..." Not only was she tired, but now she felt like stone. She yawned, and was still.
.................. -Coffee and Toast-...................
I am RainbowWing, this is the story of when The Cutiemark Trio got their cutiemarks. I will start with HoneyDoodle's.
" Yo! Brother! RainbowWing!" the energetic pegasus called. Me and her shy twin trotted to her.
"What do 你 want now?" I hollered. "Yeah," LightningTrail uttered quietly. "I now how to get our cutiemarks!" she smiled her green eyes sparkled with mischief. " Have a party!" she exclaimed,
" We are only fillies, what 小马 would want to go to that party?" I asked,
" Hey, i'm no filly, I'm a colt," LightningTrail pointed out. I sighed.
I 爱情 parties so we threw one in the Cutiemark Crusader's old 树 house. The 下一个 日 only twelve ponies showed but boy did she 显示 them a good time!
After the party a 心 with a lightning bolt in it appeared on her flank. We had no idea what it meant except it had some thing to do with parties.
" Yo! Brother! RainbowWing!" the energetic pegasus called. Me and her shy twin trotted to her.
"What do 你 want now?" I hollered. "Yeah," LightningTrail uttered quietly. "I now how to get our cutiemarks!" she smiled her green eyes sparkled with mischief. " Have a party!" she exclaimed,
" We are only fillies, what 小马 would want to go to that party?" I asked,
" Hey, i'm no filly, I'm a colt," LightningTrail pointed out. I sighed.
I 爱情 parties so we threw one in the Cutiemark Crusader's old 树 house. The 下一个 日 only twelve ponies showed but boy did she 显示 them a good time!
After the party a 心 with a lightning bolt in it appeared on her flank. We had no idea what it meant except it had some thing to do with parties.
Moon Dust
I have decided to give 你 all Moon Dust's back story so enjoy and comment!
Moon Dust was born on Hearths Warming Eve. Her father was a pegasus named 树 Whisper. Nopony knew who her mother was. Moon Dust was delivered onto her father's house the night she was born 由 Princess Luna.
Luna 说 she found Moon Dust in the snow 由 the 城堡 with a note telling the princesses he was her father. Luna 说 she sensed great power from this filly. 树 Whisper asked her to name the filly because naming the filly was not his job.
Moon Dust was named Moon Snowy Dust Moon Dust for short. 树 Whisper raised Moon Dust until another filly with a 彩虹 mane was delivered to his house with a name and note saying she was named 彩虹 Wing. 由 then Moon Dust was 2.
When Moon Dust was 10 she was accepted to Celestia's School for gifted 独角兽 and when she turned 12 she was made Luna's apprentice.
So that is most of Moon Dust's back story
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