Alright, I got some 评论 on my last Slendermane story. Most of them 说 stuff like "It should be 20% longer". So I revised it, and made it, just as the 粉丝 requested 20% longer. Here it is!
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Twilight Sparkle groggily jumped out of bed, wobbling when her hooves hit the floor. She had been at one of Pinkie Pie's midnight parties again, and she was beginning to suffer the cosequences of it. Black lines were under her eyes and her mane was all out of place. She picked herself up and yawned.
"Goood moooorning Spiiike...." she groaned.
"Hey, Twilight!" Spike sounded chipper.
Twilight began to walk towards the door, squinting in the sun's rays streaming through the window. She used her magic to open the front door a bit, when Spike piped up.
"I already got the paper, Twilight. Its on the table."
Twilight released her grasp on the doorknob, and turned around with another moan. When she took a 座位 at the table, she slumped 前锋, 期待 and planted her chin on the table. Why did she attend Pinkie's party? Why? WHY?
Then she saw the front page headline and gasped.
She jumped up with a sudden burst of energy, startling Spike and causing him to drop the silverware he had in his paw. He immediately rushed over to the 表 to see Twilight staring, her jaw nearly unhinged, at the newspaper.
"Slendermane Strikes Again?" Spike read the headline aloud. "Who's Slendermane?" he inquired, with an expectant glance at Twilight.
"I don't know for sure," Twilight responded after a moment of quiet. "But I've heard that name once 或者 twice."
She turned behind her to look at the gigantic bookshelf behind her. "Now, which book was it in?" she paused for a moment, then gasped. "Ah, there it is."
She used her magic to carefully guide the book down to her, then set it down on the table. The book was a lavender hardcover, "Creatures of Equestria" engraved in a spidery text on the front.
Twilight walked up to the 表 and flipped through the pages. "Let's see...Chrysalis...Discord...Ah! Here we go!" and began to read the page aloud:
Name: Slendermane
Age:Unknown
Gender:Unknown, but suggested to be male.
Appearance: Appears to be a regular pony, but, referring to its name, is much too skinny to be a normal pony. White body, no mane, black tail, and appears to wearing a suit. When aggravated 或者 confronted, Slendermane is known to extend tentacles on its back...
Twilight read no 更多 and slammed the book shut. "We've got to tell everypony! Immediately!
Before it's too late!"
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Twilight Sparkle groggily jumped out of bed, wobbling when her hooves hit the floor. She had been at one of Pinkie Pie's midnight parties again, and she was beginning to suffer the cosequences of it. Black lines were under her eyes and her mane was all out of place. She picked herself up and yawned.
"Goood moooorning Spiiike...." she groaned.
"Hey, Twilight!" Spike sounded chipper.
Twilight began to walk towards the door, squinting in the sun's rays streaming through the window. She used her magic to open the front door a bit, when Spike piped up.
"I already got the paper, Twilight. Its on the table."
Twilight released her grasp on the doorknob, and turned around with another moan. When she took a 座位 at the table, she slumped 前锋, 期待 and planted her chin on the table. Why did she attend Pinkie's party? Why? WHY?
Then she saw the front page headline and gasped.
She jumped up with a sudden burst of energy, startling Spike and causing him to drop the silverware he had in his paw. He immediately rushed over to the 表 to see Twilight staring, her jaw nearly unhinged, at the newspaper.
"Slendermane Strikes Again?" Spike read the headline aloud. "Who's Slendermane?" he inquired, with an expectant glance at Twilight.
"I don't know for sure," Twilight responded after a moment of quiet. "But I've heard that name once 或者 twice."
She turned behind her to look at the gigantic bookshelf behind her. "Now, which book was it in?" she paused for a moment, then gasped. "Ah, there it is."
She used her magic to carefully guide the book down to her, then set it down on the table. The book was a lavender hardcover, "Creatures of Equestria" engraved in a spidery text on the front.
Twilight walked up to the 表 and flipped through the pages. "Let's see...Chrysalis...Discord...Ah! Here we go!" and began to read the page aloud:
Name: Slendermane
Age:Unknown
Gender:Unknown, but suggested to be male.
Appearance: Appears to be a regular pony, but, referring to its name, is much too skinny to be a normal pony. White body, no mane, black tail, and appears to wearing a suit. When aggravated 或者 confronted, Slendermane is known to extend tentacles on its back...
Twilight read no 更多 and slammed the book shut. "We've got to tell everypony! Immediately!
Before it's too late!"
