Young Justice OC'S!!! Article: My Total OCD Moment About All The OC's

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posted by KatRox1

Okay, I'm having one of those moments again. The kind where I get all depressed about Mercy becoming evil (because I really didn't want her to!) and about how there are WAY to many OC's! Not pointing fingers at anyone, because I'm doing it too, but seriously! If 你 want to make an OC, could 你 PLEASE just write an 文章 about them first? We need some idea about them first!
That's why I won't be RP-ing at all until I can actually WRITE a story for Casey! I suggest a lot of 你 guys do that, saying that some people don't even put up a bio for their character!
One 更多 point, PLEASE refrain from making 更多 OC's than 你 need! I mean, I get it if 你 need to make them for like, one night to make sense of something in your fanfic. I've already deleted a few of my RP accounts, I suggest some of 你 do also! But please, don't overcrowd!
And I also learned this term from one of my friends: God modding. That's a big no-no also! So that means, don't make yourself "so powerful that 你 can take over the world with the snap of my fingers"; it also means don't be able to just dodge everything that comes at 你 and don't be so invincible that 你 can be stabbed in the 心 and be completely fine! (I know, that happened to Mercy, but I will explain that later)
One 更多 thing (probably not) DON'T control other people's OC's! I know in real life, we don't control other people! So, don't put them in those kind of situations!
Okay! I promise, almost done! I just wanted to give a round of applause to those people who 显示 that their OC's are imperfect. They are able to 显示 that they go through what a bunch of us go through on an everyday basis! Not being perfect, second-guessing ourselves, and being who REAL people are!
And one last idea! What if: Because there are SO many OC heroes, and not that many villains (That doesn't mean 你 need to create one!!) Once 你 see that about 2 或者 3 OC's have gotten themselves into a fight, don't swoop in and join... 3 或者 4 OC's only, to make it 更多 fun and interesting!
**But don't forget to interact and not always be the lone wolf!**
Haha! 你 thought I was done! Nope! Just also wanted to say, IF Mercy does come back as a normal hero, NEVER 问题 what she does... E.V.E.R.... Unless 你 want to repeat the "I'm a mentally and emotionally unstable villain who hates my life" thing!

Sorry if 你 guys don't like any of the things I have stated, but thats life! Deal with it! This has been bothering me for far to long and I thought SOMEONE needed to say it! 爱情你 guys!
-KatRox1

The_Writer, SilverWings13 and 6 others like this

BentleyYJ OOC: YOU READ MY MIND!!! OMG DO YOU KNOW WHAT IM THINKING??/ 0_0 XD people listen to this brilliant person

EclipseYJ OOC: I think i can live with that ;) and i think i might change eclipse to being deaths apprentise instead of gods daughter cuz i'm going a little over bored <3 LOV U TOO

SilverWingsYJ OOC: I luv this! Thank you so much for posting it!!!

Devin_Grayson OOC: heh. The last point refers to me. Heheh. Sorry!

66Dragons I completely agree. I believe I have pointed out enough that Red is NOT the perfect hero. In fact, he sorta fails a lot more than his cocky attitude lets on... Damn. Now I sound egotistical...

KatRox1 Heh. You know when I said I wouldn't be RP-ing as Casey? I kinda lied, saying I have nothing better to do in my free time!

AislingYJ OOC: You are my life now. No seriously. This is amazing. Of course, I face the extremely uncommon problem (at least I think it's uncommon) of my OC not being able to do ANYTHING, and me getting completely bored of that. Like I was tempted to kill Aisling, but ya kinda get attached to your first OC, so she probably will just get an upgrade, like some actual fighting skills or something. Now I'm rambling. Amazing article though!

ShadowYJ Great article. Even though none of this applies to me 'cause my OC doesn't have any powers. But yet all the same: great article.

To Save the Future 4

posted by XxKFforeverXx

Nudge paused as she entered the room, her chattering with the brunette beside her slowing. She rose an eyebrow in confusion at the three siblings laughing and hugging. "There's more of you?" Jaime looked up at the sound and let go, running over and hugging onto her tightly. She blinked before slowly hugging him. 'I'm so confused." Nudge grabbed his shoulder, pushing him back to stare at him, lowering a few inches to get eye level with the boy. "You look just like him, wow." She leaned back up, patting her head as Jack held up the polaroid, snapping a picture of him. "What's your name, kiddo?"...

Twist of Fate pt 16

posted by SilverWings13

For weeks, the siblings had gone over their plan again and again. Now, as Ana stood in the 城堡图书馆 leaning against her grandfather’s desk, staring at a geode emitting a holographic model of the room they were invading, she could have recited the plan herself. So she did.
“When I arrive, they’ll check me for weapons at the door, so—“
“You’ll have your Glock on 你 since the guards expect it, but you’re prepared to be weaponless anyway,” Ana interrupted. The hologram zoomed in to focus on the front door. Aleksander nodded and continued.
“I’ll go into the room alone,...

Twist of Fate part 14 **FLUFF WARNING**

posted by SilverWings13

"Noëlle, come inside! Dinner's almost ready!
Michael returned to the pot filling the quant house with the aroma of beef and caramelize onions. He ladled 汤 into the ceramic bowls, sprinkled in croutons, and smothered them both in Comté before setting the bowls in the oven. When a pair of bare feet was still absent from the kitchen, the man turned off the 烤箱 and went back to the 厨房 door.
"Noëlle?" he called again. "Mon ange!" No answer came from the flowered front yard 或者 the marsh lakeland at the bottom of the hill. Instinctively, Michael grabbed his 刀鞘, 剑鞘带, 皮带 and darted out...

Twist of Fate part 12

posted by SilverWings13

Aleksander was already awake when his sister knocked on his door. A blue messenger 蝴蝶 had flown through the cracked window half an 小时以前 with an urgent message from the Red Army: the White Army’s leader, Wilhelm Magnus, was expected to attend the neutral Circle’s spring solstice celebration. Aleksander had already received the same news from Magnus’ own daughter and was attempting to explain to the Reds that he had the situation under control--without revealing his communications with the other side.
Even if he had been raised a strategist, playing both sides when he only wanted...

GTK: Blaine

posted by Robin_Love

Blaine Wyatt Aldric

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Blaine Wyatt Aldric
Reason 或者 meaning of name: Blaine-Yellow; Wyatt-Brave, Hardy; Aldric-wise ruler
Eye Color: Undefined (I haven't decided)
Hair Style/Color: Red
Height: 6'3"
Clothing Style: Formal
Best Physical Feature: Why does this matter? (His hair)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Loosing
Your Guilty Pleasure: Kisses
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: ...Loosing
Your Ambition for the Future: I wish not to disclose

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: When did I fall asleep?
What 你 Think About the Most: That's Private
What 你 Think About Before Bed: Not specific...

Torture

posted by Robin_Love

WARNING: This is violent. There isn't a happy ending. If 你 choose to read, be prepared.

“How long has it been?”
“Almost a month.”
“How is she still alive?! 你说 she'd be ours within the week!”
“Calm down; we underestimated her. But we won't do that again. She has to break soon. Then we can mold her again.”
“You better or-”
“Or what?! 你 don't have any power without us!”
“Don't kill her. 你 need her as much as I do.”
“For now. If she proves to be a problem-”
A knock sounded against the heavy metal door. It scratched the door as it was opened. A man walked in, dressed...

Twist of Fate pt 7 **CALLAGHAN WARNING**

posted by SilverWings13

Ana stretched her arms as she sat back in her seat, sighing as she slouched in the tall chair and surveyed the crowded bar. Between the time she had arrived with Callaghan and the time she finished her food, the relaxed 晚餐 crowd had been replaced 由 rowdy evening drinkers.

There were mostly young adults, couples and friend groups. A teenager in a flowered sun dress cuddled up to a young man in a jean 夹克 and beanie. There was even a band consisting of a violinist, drummer, and guitarist setting up their equipment in the back corner.

Ana returned her attention to her own 晚餐 partner....

Reyna Update

posted by Robin_Love

Reyna Jackson

Name: Reyna (Ray-na) Jackson
Alias: Hyde
Occupation: Translator; vigilante; student
Powers: Siren Song, Levitation, Abnormal strength, Wings, Mermaid
Weaknesses If she expels too much power, she will pass out. She is not invulnerable to weapons. She can only levitate herself for short periods of time.
Skills/talents: She is fluent in sign language, English, and understands animals.
History: Reyna was born the daughter of a human man and a mermaid. Her parents met young and married. As time went on, her father, in his 搜索 for scientific recognition, started to go mad. He used his daughter as a...

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Twist of Fate pt 4 **gore warning**

posted by SilverWings13

Cal wished to comfort the torn soul and shield its dying light from further darkness...

Demon in the Garden

Grey snowflakes danced in the wind. The air stank of burning hair and flesh. In the dark crimson tint of the 甜点 planet's infamous scarlet moon, pools of blood became inky black puddles reflecting the remains of the courtyard.
Callaghan Rurik could feel the 火, 消防 at his back as it raged through the army barracks. Screams were whipped to and fro 由 the ghastly wind, making it impossible to tell if the wails came from behind 或者 ahead. For ahead the 作者 of this macabre scene continued her vengeful tirade. Callaghan's eyes drifted over the dark shapes littering the once...

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Twist of Fate pt 3

posted by SilverWings13

I'm pretty sure no one's actually 阅读 this, but college stuff is stressful af and 写作 about murder is much 更多 reasonable therapy than actually committing murder, so...

Happens right after link

Città dei Canali

Ana kept a firm hand on her brother's arm as they walked away from their escort. Every time she glanced sideways at the blood covered man, he returned her gaze calmly. His composure was meant to be reassuring, but it chilled her to the bone to see such a relaxed reaction after the macabre scene he had created. Eight bodies, cut to pieces 由 bullets, stabbed to death 由 daggers....

Can 你 Keep A Secret? AU Two-shot

posted by XxKFforeverXx

AU for Ciel and Jaime, my friend originally gave me the idea when she mentioned she mentioned a 日本漫画 and thus, this was born.

Hi! My name is Jaime Adams, and I'm currently sitting in a blood donation center about to have my arm poked and prodded. Quite comical, really.. I hate needles, but I have a disease that causes my bone marrow to produce 更多 blood cells, called polycythemia vera. I hate coming here, but today is different. Very different. I typically have blood drawn from this cranky old lady who gets annoyed about the fact that I don't like needles. Today, there's this tall, white-haired...

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Twist of Fate pt 2

posted by SilverWings13

前一个 parts (I finally named the series to keep it organized because duh):
pt 1: link
pt 1.5: link

Deals After Midnight

Only pools of moonlight streaming down from the clerestory windows offered guidance down the long hallway. Callaghan's boots clicked loudly against the polished floors, making him tense at every step. He nearly jumped out of his skin at the whisper of air that signaled movement to his right.
"Fancy meetin' 你 here," purred the feral cat that had materialized 由 his aide.
"What do 你 want, Casey?"
"I just wanted to ensure my 最喜爱的 big brother returned with his prize...which...

For Victory End

posted by Robin_Love

He resisted the urge to look back. His usual unwavering demeanor was not with him as he walked away. She was on her own from here. It wasn't fair; but neither was what awaited them. He wanted to protect her from it, shelter her from the pain that was to come. But that wasn't his role to play anymore. He grit his teeth and took the last few steps into the one place everything left. No 更多 voices. No 更多 fear. Nothing but him and his demons. They hissed and mumbled amongst themselves. He shut his eyes and concentrated. From here on, he'd be tested to his very limit. Everything would be lost....

Uncertain Death 17

posted by XxKFforeverXx

"How did you?" Alex ran her fingers through her hair, shaking her head in disbelief. Her brother looked up, peeling away the plastic off the back of the monitors. Blake chuckled before he began to explain. Blake slid down the snowy bank, looking at the body that was slowly being covered with snow. "Jeez.. Why am I doing this?" The male grumbled, brushing the snow off before lifting the corpse with a grunt. Throwing Fang over his shoulder, he made his way back up the mountain side. "After examining, the nerve endings were so severed that there was no way he'd be able to use his wing, even a...

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Return of Akito: The war begins

posted by khanna266

嘿 guys so, I realized that I never continued the story on the Aries Army so, I figured this would be a good way to start off the New year. I also remembered the boss' name which is Akito (smh Khanna. 你 had one job.) Well Enjoy and Happy New 年 to everyone.

4:00am Mount Justice
Khanna just woke up and walks around the place until, she notices 加菲猫 sleeping on the couch. His mouth is wide open and drool is falling out.
"Omg." she snickers and pokes the back of his head.
"It's not a school day. I don't have to wake up yet." he says still sleeping and turns to the other side of the couch....

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Uncertain Death 14

posted by XxKFforeverXx

Scott kicked up some sand, looking out over the desert terrain. He slid a 披肩 around him and covered the bottom half of his head, the 兜帽, 罩, 发动机罩 covering his usual snowy hair. Goggles were 下一个 and he looked at the map on his watch, eyes moving back between the electronic and the terrain. "Let's do this.." He mumbled and took a deep breath before the wind began to pick up, scattering sand in every direction. He started off in a slow sprint before picking up the pace, arm holding the face mask in place. Within a few 分钟 Scotty reached the 墙 of the School, feeling around before latching his...

Character Chart 3

posted by Eclipse-YJ

It should only be 2 parts left after this one so stay tuned :3

TRAITS

-Optimist 或者 pessimist? Strangle she is an optimist just in a very pessimist way (if that makes sense XD)
-Introvert 或者 extrovert? Introvert but not in a shy way, in 更多 of a distant way

-Talents (hidden 或者 not)? Plays the piano, good story teller and if 你 can get her to she not half bad at singing. She helps Zero dance too as she's good at remembering dance steps and her gymnastics helps.

(Things like her fighting styles and knowledge over weapons is what I class as a skill not a talent)

-Extremely skilled at: The piano...

Uncertain Death 5

posted by XxKFforeverXx

Trystan ducked under one of the punches, zipping away from Zoom for a brief 秒 before being grabbed once again. "You're weak, not nearly as strong 或者 fast as Wa-" Zoom stopped mid-sentence, only to look over when Impulse ran in. "Whoa, it's actually Zoom! Totally crash!" He grinned, speeding around the two. "Totally not." Trystan glared, swinging his leg up to kick himself from the other's grasp. "I'll be back for you, Trystan." He grinned before running off, leaving Trystan in a confused and muddled state. "Wha?" He shook his head, taking Bart's hand to pull himself up. "How fast were...

Cross' Past Revealed

posted by khanna266

3:45 AM Paris, France AmourCafe
Cross has been sitting at the 表 closest to the exit for about 5 分钟 now.
"Where is that idiot?"she sighs aloud drumming her black fingernails against the table. She looks at the clock and sighs again.
"Hey there toots,I'm here now." Bart stands 下一个 to her in formal attire.
"Don't call me that. Why are 你 late?"she gives him a dirty look.
"I was freshening up. Do 你 know how hard it is to find a cheap tux in France?" he sits across from her. 交叉, 十字架 rolls her eyes annoyed 由 Bart.
"Where's Artemis and Wally?"she asks,and just then they come in.
"Right here."Wally...

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Nudge

posted by XxKFforeverXx

Civvies

Name: Alexandria (Alex) Douglas-Michels
Alias: Nudge
Age: 18
Occupation: Hero
Appearance: Alex has natural blonde hair and blue hair, standing at 5'8 she has snow white wings with small brown freckles. While they aren't nearly as big as Fang's, they are 13 ft across. Alex is always found is some sort of leggings 或者 skinny jeans and an oversized hoodie. The blonde has always been insecure of her wings and keeps them well hidden to produce the image that she is "normal".
Powers/skills: As mentioned above, Alex has white wings and they are used for flight. She is also an expert hacker with the ability...