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Uprising/The Forgotten One~

posted by Luna-Lacrimosa

A lonely skeleton, the body and mind may be dead, but the 心 isn't. It won't die until it finds its love.

A lonely skeleton, the body and mind may be dead, but the heart isn't. It won't die until it finds its love.

"Ad occursum futurum....but for now, Eien ni kimi ga shiawase de iru koto Tada negatteru... Tatoe sore ga donna ni sabishikututemo.tsurakutemo..." "Your sins are burried in red and black roses.."

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!"
A pair of eyes shot open as the dark-haired boy jolted himself out of his nightmare. His eyes searched the room fearfully as he clutched the pristine white sheets between his white knuckles. His breathing was erratic and his 心 rate was beating at the rate of an animal being chased 由 a vicious predator. He continued 表演 this way for a few 分钟 before he began to calm...

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Modern 日 Princess Ch. 13

posted by para-scence

Ace was still at my house a week later. I'd managed to get no information from anyone on when Echo was coming back. It couldn't be much longer, right? She had to come back sometime. I began to worry. They were bound to find out why she cut herself. What would happen when she got back? Would they take her and Ace away? Would I ever see her again?

I became very lonely.

I ate lunch alone. I went 首页 alone. I did everything alone at school. I had no other 老友记 at school; not that I was complaining. I didn't really want any other friends. Echo was the greatest friend I could ever ask for. It'd...

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Imaginary

posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830

With this new story, I wanna write a horror story.

It's called Imaginary:

Sierra, a young six 年 old from Ocean Gate, New Jersey, dies from a car accident and a broken skull. Meanwhile, Molly, from Bayville, gets a new friend. Her name is Sierra.

As Molly's parents notice their daughter 表演 strange, they start to worry. She always asks to set the 表 for an extra person, and she always talks to herself in her room.

Sierra is being fueled 由 something that's in their house, and she's feeding supernaturally off of Molly's body, and strange things start to happen in the house.

Anonymous laughing, horrifying screams, eerie whispering, problems with the power, and worse. Molly gets weaker.

On this 邪恶力量 journey, Molly's parents will try to fight something that's beyond them, whatever it takes to save their daughter's life.

In loving memory of Sierra, a childhood friend. I still miss you, and I know your brother does, too!

更多 Than This Ch. 16

posted by para-scence

I managed to get out of the house, with Dad and Kara thinking I was going to work. But instead, I went to Blake's house. He took me to the horse ranch again, and we rode horses. It was much easier than the first time.

After that though, I decided I should probably take my punishment. I stayed 首页 all day, except the days I was actually working of course. Also with my punishment, I became Hera's chauffeur. I was stuck driving her to the movies, with a discount because of my employment there, to her friends' houses, and wherever else she wanted to go basically. She was so annoying. I took my...

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更多 Than This Ch. 10

posted by para-scence

Blake

It was Valentine's Day. I'd never really liked the holiday. Girls always thought it was a "romantic day" and it was just.... annoying. This year, however, I was actually happy about it coming around. This year, I had Irina. She wasn't like most girls. She was different, and I 爱情 that about her. I bought a bouquet of flowers; I was going to give them to her at lunch. I started eating outside with her, and that Briar girl that she introduced me to. That girl is strange, but sweet. I'll never forget when I met her:

"Blake, this is Briar," Irina introduced one 日 after school. This girl...

X Academy Excerpt - Chapter 6 - Blood Lust

posted by Vampiyaa

Toyo was slumped over, half on the 墙 and half on the floor. He clutched his throat with both of his pale hands, coughing uncontrollably. In a useless attempt to get up, Toyo stumbled and fell on his side, almost completely paralyzed 由 the desperate pain in his lungs and throat. If only he could get what he craved so badly...
Aiko has it. Aiko can give it to me.
"NO!" Toyo screamed, throwing himself at the door. Instead of it opening he crashed onto it and slumped on the floor again. His legs were utterly useless to him in this state. Panting heavily, he felt the pain lessen, and finally...

Promises, Chapter 2

posted by POPclogger216

"I..I didn't see you..you were over there, now you're here..oh my God," I say, pacing before he grabs my arm, stops me.
"Chill. Would 你 like to dance?" he asks. I say yes.
Hesitantly.
We dance, sometimes close, sometimes dancing so crazy we can't even see each other. But something weird happens during one of the dances. He pulls me close. I barely know him. And then, his hand around my waist, he almost grips me, as if in pain. And then burning, almost like a msall scratch a dog would give you. A sharp prickling runs through my lower back. I moan, softly, and I look at his face. His eyebrows...

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The Texts part 6

posted by wolfkirby

Me and Brittany got scared when the police 问题 us and got push toward the cop car.
The boys got is trouble because of the 啤酒 since they tried to make us drink.We had to tell them because u know there the police we didnt fell right when they got to rude and pushy.We got sorry for them since they went to jail for 3 days.
Luckly they werent part of the K.K.K.Kevin got alot 更多 nice after there jail time.They were not bullying any kids we have been dating so long that its a record for our town.The school was rebuilt,but Me,Brittany,and them knew it wasnt over yet.

Promises, Chapter One

posted by POPclogger216

"Why in the heck are 你 wearing that?" my mother asked. I looked into my full-body mirror in my bedroom inside this tiny apartment, studying the short, yellow, frilly gown. I sware to God..I gleam in this, Mom! I thought. "It looks 更多 like a scrap-of-a-dress." I ignored her.

It was the 日 of my high-school prom, the last prom I'd ever go to. I was going to graduate this summer. I sorta wanted to come out with a bang. My eyes, just like moms, looked bigger, darker, and gorgeous when I was wearing yellow. My choppy black hair seemed to shine more. This IS the perfect dress, I thought. My...

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On the wings of powerlessness

posted by irena83

Days go 由你 like a shadow,
你 don’t live this life,
you’re becoming a shadow
of your destiny.

This cruel fate hates
your laughter,
loving your pain that
sleeps inside your
broken heart.

Broken and tired
of all these 迷失 fights,
your life becomes
invisible
and 你 don’t care anymore,
but 你 do,
你 still do.

You’re trying to see
through this fog,
you’re still fighting
for that day,
the 日 of your peace.

Your path is full of
thorns that are stabbing 你
directly into your hope,
tearing your soul apart,
you’re on the wings of powerlessness.

The Line Between Dreams and Reality (Chapter One)

posted by M169

I sit up straight in the middle of the night; my forehead is stained with cold sweat, my breathing is heavy. Pure darkness is all around me. Just another dream I mentally convince myself, but I’m still shaking. I can’t calm down, no matter what, the dream felt so…real. Trembling, I get out of 床, 床上 and go into the bathroom. Looking at me in the mirror was painful. It looks like I just got in a fight with a rabid cat. My black hair frizzed everywhere, mascara and eyeliner smeared around my eyes, tear streaks on my face. God I could use some exercise I thought as I examined my body shape....

The falling emerald( working title, i may change the 'emerald' to amethst)

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

Im going to put a teaser of the first chapter up, if people like it i will continue. 评论 PLZ!!

Elyon stirred in her sleep, causing her thin blanket to slip off. Slowly her bare arms were covered in goosebumps, as her eyes began to futter; her peacfull face turned to concern, she sat up and looked around.
"Where...?" she managed to mutter through her dry lips. She didnt know where she was. She had never seen anything like it before. Somehow she was sitting in the middle of a medow sorrunded 由 flowers. Elyon stood up and wrapped the small blanket around her shoulders. She looked down at...

change prologue

posted by kitkat709477

I was normal once 或者 i thought I was, at least, until I knew otherwise,then I didn't know how i could have missed it i mean it was so obvious but i suppose that was just it, it was to obvious and sometimes i wonder what it would be like if what happened that night never happened but it probably wouldn't have mattered what happened that horrible night because it just sped up what was already there, sure maybe it would have been easier if i had known what I was but maybe it wouldn't have been.
你 see before all this happened I lived a very good life we were very rich and we lived in a palace,like...

Darkened Bliss: 9th and 10th pages - Chapter One

posted by Heya

I looked back down and we sat in silence for a couple of minutes. I looked to my right to find Looi holding the child that was being stubborn in his arms. This, in fact, reminded me of myself in his arms a long, long time ago. Oh, I’d say about 16 years 以前 when I was 2 and he was 11. My mom and dad had Looi when they were only 19 years old, so It took a while for them to decide to have me 9 years later when they were 28. I laughed at how old my mom was now. I know it’s nothing to laugh about, but, I couldn’t imagine my mom at Looi’s age now that she is 46.
“So,...

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Umm this goes to my 问题 about me having an assignment....

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: okay well i finished the assignment and this is the final product...please don't hold back...okay here 你 go
ps. know that this is an religion assinment, and its about my interpretation of 耶稣 in an artistic form-ie-me using a collection of short poems and talking about the sea...okay i'll shuup now

Freedom
To feel the sand
The sun on your back
It’s a no man’s land
With no fear of attack
No chains of society
The sea frees all
Lose all your anxiety
And watch as the waves fall
God’s 秒 heaven under the sun
Surrounding all things being
The sea will be undone
For those people foreseeing...

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"Sometimes Goodbye is a 秒 Chance"[Ch.7]

posted by HarryPLover

Two things were killing me at the moment.The fact that It was raining like crazy on his horrible to school,the 日 of school where I had to face my dreaded ex and try to hold back either my tears 或者 punching him in the face.by the way,I completely wanted to do both at this moment.The 秒 was that whole desperately in 爱情 moment with Juaney.I was mad the the "mystery girl" that Juan had fallen so hard for and she have no freaking idea.I hate seeing Juan like this.Yes at the moment he is very proactive of me but I can tell now that he just doing that so I won't look into 或者 figure his true...

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That week Chapter 3

posted by dragonrider

Still the first 日 - Athena's perspective

I smiled as I walked back to my 老友记 and I's table. I sat down and looked at my friends.
"Where have 你 been?" Erica asked "I need make up 建议 and 你 know Emily isn't into that,"
Emily hardly looked up from her book "Make up is a complete waste of time," she said
"Not it is not. It attracts cute boys," Erica argued
Emily sighed "As I told 你 before your personality attracts them," she said
I held up my hands "Girls please! 你 want to know where I was 或者 not?" I asked
They both exchanged glances "Yes we do,"
I sighed "Alright. I was talking to...

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Spotlight part 1(english)

posted by Ms_Montana

Spotlight

1. Cold pizza

It was a cold and rainy 日 in November. Some people called this rain even snow, but not thus Helena. It was not the type Person all that varnished.
While she rushed 由 the crowded U platform, it rummaged about him of her pocket for her mobile phone. She tried to type in the scrum the number of her mother, however, without success.
Helena rolled irritated with her eyes. Their mother had 说 her at noon she must fetch her small sister Allison. And here only so she stood.
On the left from her a hard occupied looking man called up his mobile phone and before her there stood...

Serenity Chapter 3

posted by jasperwhlover

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Chapter 3

Now, Serenity on a happier note was learning how to defend herself and about Exorcism she wanted to help Father Bartholomew, even though she was forced 由 the church to conform to the earthly practices like everyone else and to hide her wings, Father Bartholomew encouraged her heavenly attributes, he made wings, of feathers, waxed together, they were perfect, and everyday, he would teach her to fly as she forgot how because of the number of years that she spent conforming to the earth. Father Bartholomew raised Serenity like a daughter, a few years later, when she...

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Strong

posted by iluvtheshow

嘿 Mom,
It's been a while
Since 你 sat 下一个 to me,
Since I saw 你 smile
I miss 你 Mom
I wish 你 were here
Giving me kisses
Holding me near
I can still see 你 Mom,
the laughing happy you
Not the ill broken women
Who broke my 心 in two
I'll always remember Mom,
你 taught me well
To do good things,
And with Honesty tell
I'm telling 你 Mom
Losing 你 killed me
Laying a rose on your casket
Trying hard to be
Strong.
That's what 你 were Mom,
Strong.
In everything 你 said
In everything 你 did
So now I'll be just that
Strong like a mother, not like a kid

I wrote this in honor of any child who has ever 迷失 a parent.