i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
你 were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh
i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house 或者 fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars
你 did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
你 说 your chance at 爱情 had past 你 由
i told i'm here so dont 你 cry
our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light
你 were like my juliet and i your romeo
你 爱情 me i 爱情 你 thats all i need to know
no longer will 你 dream of 爱情 thats true
no longer will i wander my 搜索 has led to you
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd 爱情 some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
你 are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as 你 lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are 心 at name.
你 may notice that only the 秒 verse rhymes, this is an attempt to 显示 the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
你 are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as 你 lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are 心 at name.
你 may notice that only the 秒 verse rhymes, this is an attempt to 显示 the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.