raymond/gilbert

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Well Done My Freind

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posted by DxCFan123

Since I will usually end up leaving 潮流粉丝俱乐部 for a 月或者 two then come back with a new story, each chapter is going to represent a month. So, let's say, 由 now, Kat and Sadao are really close friends, they do everything together, AND FRICKITY FRACKITY FROOK

Kat's POV
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"No, 你 idiot, your doing the bow-hand all wrong!" I yelled at Sadao, and fixed the positioning of his fingers on the violin bow. "Even I know how to do it correctly, and I just started a 月 ago!" I got out my violin and did all the positions, then counted down. On 2, he asked me, "Can 你 sing it to keep...

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Peter Pan Meets The 21st Century

posted by Triscia95

I was sitting in my hotel room minding my own business 阅读 a book when all of a sudden the glass window doors flew open. The 床, 床上 room was dimly lit and the sun had completely gone down leaving no sunlight to light the room.

I fell off my 床, 床上 leaving my 床, 床上 in between me and the window. I would have gotten up to shut the window doors but that was before a figure entered the opening.

There was enough of a shadow cast over the body that 你 couldn't make out any features. But I could tell that it was a man. He stood with a sturdy pose his legs locked in place, his arms on his hips, his head...

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True 爱情 Revealed

posted by Triscia95

“Caroline I’ve tried everything to prove my self time after time that I 爱情 you, that I would do anything for you, I’d never let anyone hurt you.” Klaus paused as Caroline stood in the door looking down at the hardwood floor tears rolling down her eyes. “That I would die for you.” He finished. Klaus took one step towards Caroline but as he did she took two steps away.

Klaus’s grieved face turned 酸, 酸奶 and full of anger. Nothing he did 或者说 made her realize that if she asked anything he would do it with out a 秒 thought. She shook her head and raced out the door.

He wasn’t...

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The Writer's Block: Starting a Story and Character Develpment

posted by dragonsmemory

In this series of guides, I'll be 展示你 the best techniques for 写作 your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what 你 may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, 你 have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before 你 decide on a plot, 你 should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...

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The Wrong Place At The Wrong Time - Chapter 3

posted by Triscia95

"Aw, it's pretty close." Tyler McCarthy and Shawn Detham were standing side 由 side. Both held a gun in a head, but Shawn also held a machete. My hand flew up to my mouth to try to hold back a scream as I realized that the blade was dripping with blood. What if it was a friend of my 或者 Nick's, what if it was a teacher? I buried my face in Nick's back trying hard not to picture it.

"Tyler . . . Shawn, what the hell are 你 guys doing." Both of them had grown up with Nick; they use to play together in there neighborhood. They had, at one point, all been inseparable, but high school hit and like...

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A Dark Mark and a lightning bolt scar.

posted by GryffindorGirl2

Jasmine's POV

The freezing darkness pressed down on me,Harry,and Dudley.
"S-stop it 你 two.Now.It-it's not funny." Dudley stammered.
"We're not doing anything Dudley!" I shouted over the wind.
"I swear,if 你 don't stop it,I-I'll hit y-you." Dudley 说 again.
"Shut up Du-.." Harry began.
WHAM!
The sound of Dudley's fist connecting with Harry's jaw sounded beside me.
"Ow! God Dudley!" Harry shouted.
Before I had time to react,my feet were kicked out from underneath me and I fell to the ground,slamming my already hurt head on the ground.My spine seemed to jolt out of place,then back in,making me moan...

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A Dark Mark and a lightning bolt scar.

posted by GryffindorGirl2

Jasmine's POV

Harry and I walked to the park.The hot,dry,humid summer air blowing at out backs.My hair wipped around me,hitting my face and getting in my eyes.No sooner had I moved it away,that the wind blew it back.My sweat 衬衫 fell around my shoulders,but I pulled it back up.The wind continued to blow,and as I listened,fell into a rythem.The sound of Harry and mine footsteps falling on the quiet 街, 街道 sounded like clapping.I raised my arms to the sky and began spinning in circles as I walked.I began to sing,my voice blending with the wind and our footsteps.
"What doesn't kill 你 makes...

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La última tentación de Poe

posted by shenelopefan

Dañada

Estoy quebrada. Lo que soy es lo que necesitas. Mi corazón se rompió mucho tiempo atrás, pero no me importó. En ti deposité toda mi esperanza. En ti proyecté, todo lo que odiaba de mí misma y traté de curarte.

Estoy dañada. ¿Qué no lo ves? A tu sola disposición estoy ¿No es así? ¿No ha sido siempre así?

Pero tú también estás dañado. Quizás más que yo. Yo quiero arreglarte, cuidarte, hacerte ver lo importante que eres y lo valioso que tú no ves en ti mismo. Quiero que veas lo mismo que yo veo en ti. Quiero que sepas lo importante que eres para mí.

Soy un desastre....

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Dañada

posted by shenelopefan

Dañada

Estoy quebrada. Lo que soy es lo que necesitas. Mi corazón se rompió mucho tiempo atrás, pero no me importó. En ti deposité toda mi esperanza. En ti proyecté, todo lo que odiaba de mí misma y traté de curarte.

Estoy dañada. ¿Qué no lo ves? A tu sola disposición estoy ¿No es así? ¿No ha sido siempre así?

Pero tú también estás dañado. Quizás más que yo. Yo quiero arreglarte, cuidarte, hacerte ver lo importante que eres y lo valioso que tú no ves en ti mismo. Quiero que veas lo mismo que yo veo en ti. Quiero que sepas lo importante que eres para mí.

Soy un desastre....

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Lo que nunca podrá ser

posted by shenelopefan

Lo que nunca podrá ser

"Tu… entiendes mi silencio

Sólo tú… conoces mis secretos

Sólo tú… comprendes cada gesto

Sólo tú…"

Apareces tú, la Oreja de 面包车, 范 Gogh

Me voy a morir. Arrastro mi cuerpo, adormecido por el dolor en los pasillos de este horrible hospital. La sangre brota de mi cuerpo mientras presiono la herida cerca de mi estómago, dándome fuerzas para seguir. Yo sé que no merezco lo que ocurrió, pero también sé que es completamente mi culpa. Dicen que cuando uno está agonizando, ve pasar su vida frente a sus ojos, que los mejores momentos son recordados. Eso me está ocurriendo...

Chapter One of 'Bloody Arrow'

posted by Dhampires

I was back at the covent and in Mai's office waiting for her to give me my pay."Like always 你 gets the job done in no time.I'll have to start giving 你 a raise my dear.After all I can't afford to lose 你 can a I?"She prasied me as she went into her 安全 retrieving a small sack of 金牌 coins.I smiled and 说 "No need to rasie my pay,I make enough and I'll never leave so long as 你 keep feeding me information like 你 promised." she sighed and turned with the 金牌 and a package of papers "Of course that's the purpose on why your here." I eyed the papers then shifted my gaze toward her."Yes...

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Spell me a Melodey

posted by Blazefan4life

I wrote this poem after I had a dream. A dream that I had powers. Fire, Water, Trees, Gravity, and Love. All of these... I controled.

Spell Me a Melodey, Flames and Fire,

你 are the one, I'll always admire.

Spell Me a Melodey, Water and Waves,

First comes sacerfice, then comes save.

Spell Me a Melodey, Plants and Trees,

Help me out, set me free.

Spell Me a Melodey, Gravity Float,

The Moon is why, we rock the boat.

Spell Me a Melodey, 爱情 is Power,

Our 爱情 will bloom, like a flower.

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My Beloved 小狗

posted by PotterLambert93

His name was Charlie Brown. We first got him in the fall of 1999. He was cute cocker 獚, 西班牙猎狗, 猎犬 with the color of brown and had dark eyes. For 13 years, he was a part of our family. We played with him, took him for walks, gave all the 爱情 we had and so much more. He was also a ruff dog as well. Whenever people would come over he would bark at them, thinking that he was trying to protect us from danger. He would also bark at other people's 狗 when we took him for walks and, he was very capable of biting badly. Despite all of that, we still loved him, and he loved us.

Around a few years ago, he...

What I wish I was?What I am not ?Who will I be?part 1

posted by Lismine

If 你 like this check out 更多 of my stuff.

"Hello my name is 茉莉, 茉莉花 P. Love,"she 说 slowly while looking to the ground."Hello Jasmine," 说 the other people looking at her.Jasmine stops to look at everyone as if she was going to scream and hide.She takes three deep breathes.And says," I am her because when I was four years old I saw my mother and father die 由 a crazed man.His face still haunts me in my sleep that's why I don't sleep no more.I spent my whole childhood in an ophanadge with no 老友记 nor no enemies because no one noticed me.Not even my family who know about me and didn't...

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The Girl & The Demon Part 1

posted by PrincessHotEmo

Introduction
I was kidnapped 由 a horrible demon.It kill everyone I knew so no one would try to rescue my me.It rapes me everytime it can.Its busy killing people that 移动 in the house im in the basement..
well under the basement theres a cave.I'm not goingto joke the demon is pretty hot but still.He brings me little 食物 to keep me "fit".He loves me he says,but he lies.I lie awake thinking of how to escape.I'm scared let proud at myself for no reason.My Life is hell most of the time.When your life is terrible 你 never think your good 你 think your worthless.You feel fake,never like a real person.

The Demon

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Magic is Behind Every Corner. Pt 2.

posted by torixyz

So Analisa and I walked slowly through her village. I looked around as we walked and everyone looked very happy and cheerful. I was very confused. "Shouldn't they be sad?" I asked. "NOT happy-go-lucky?" Analisa chuckled and replied. " There is no need to be sad. For we have food, shelter, and each other." I felt very bad. Just a few hours 以前 I had yelled at my mom for getting mad at me and ran outside. I started to cry again. I sat in the 翠, 翡翠 green grass,we had walked into a field,
Analisa asked "What is wrong?" I replied "I want to go home" Analisa 说 "That would be easier if I knew where 你 lived. Anyways, we need 你 here. 你 cannot leave. I'm very sorry." That didn't help me at all. I layed down on the soft 草 and cryed my eyes out.

The Stolen ~ Chapter 3

posted by Kimi4312

Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
Roxana woke up one night to hear a loud howl outside her window, she slided herself out of 床, 床上 with her covers wrapped around her, she walked toward the window and saw a somewhat a large white 狼 outside, watching her then it turned its head to hear other 狼 howling, the white 狼 runs off to follow the howl, Roxana felt like she knew that 狼 for a long time, Roxana walked back to her 床, 床上 and lies down, but she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning but she couldn't sleep, she sat up, grab her wallet and pull out a 照片 of a beautiful, pale-skinned,...

The Stolen ~ Chapter 1

posted by Kimi4312

Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
A young and beautiful succubus named Roxana opened her green eyes as she sees the sun flooded her dark room with lights from her windows, she sat up in her twin bed, the mattress was tan and her covers were 浓情巧克力 brown color, she pulled herself out of the 床, 床上 and throws on her black tank top, then she slipped on her jeans on her long and beautiful legs, Roxana then walked in her bathroom and brushed her long red hair slowly as she stares at herself in the mirrior, she put her brush on the sink and walked outside, as she walks, she turns around as she feels like...

Death Wish part 1

posted by gumball789

I live in my opinion possibly the most ghetto town in the United States, Pittsburgh. People have been committing suicide all over town. Population all over town has been decreasing, fast. Some of my 老友记 were so depressed that they were thinking about "joining the crowd". I wouldn't live without my friends. I don't want my 老友记 to go as well as my mom and dad. Yes, I'm an orphan. I've been an orphan for about three weeks. My 老友记 have disappeared. I think they went to Clarion; but I could be wrong. There have been tons of fights at my school. Most of the people that were committing suicide were middle school and high school aged. I was getting really tired really fast. I climbed up in a 树 and found a comfortable spot and fell asleep. 下一个 thing I knew, I was tied up on a pole.

Sorry for cliffhangers....

Metting: a shinigami story.

posted by animefangirlz

I was 13 when i had my first love.not my first boyfriend but someone i actually loved.

My name is Elisabeth Maddison,but everyone calls me "shinigami" it means " god of death",for my 13th birthday my older cousin Geettto took me to his gig.He plays lead 吉他 and vocals for their band. He kept telling me how much they kick butt and all the battle of the bands they won. I just kept walking in the rain as it poured down flooding the sky. We got to the place,it was an old former shed for shipping trucks. The small factory behind it turned into a 音乐 store.They give local...