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No Matter How 你 Bleed - A Poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

We're all human.

A/N: This is not much my type of 写作 style, but I'm going to try it out. Hope 你 like it. Please rate !

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This is a new day, a fine clear sky

Trades the sun to mock our sight

With these eyes, I see no blue

He’s clutching my arm, and yelling

Yelling what? I don’t know

But I’m falling, we’re falling

Falling into a hole, digging our my souls up

For someone else to find

If this is what I get for having one

I don’t want it anymore

And there are rose-less thorns

Biting my hand,

It hurts, and I’m crying

You’re hurt, and you’re dying

I don’t know...

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Forbidden 爱情 - Chapter 8

posted by ashesandwine

Ok, sorry for not 写作更多 sooner but I wasn't home! Ok... so thanks to patrisha727 for the help...
Thanks to Emmett4ever as always for that first push...
And thanks to everyone for the support...

"Daniel's POV"

I'll wait for you... I promised 你 that, I promised myself that and I'm keeping my promise... But, please, find a way to let me know that 你 are all right...
Find a way to keep my hope up...

I staied 首页 for three days... Waiting for any letter from her. I just needed to know that she was safe...
I never went down, unless for breakfast, lunch and dinner. I hadn't talk to my father...

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Forbidden 爱情 - Chapter 6

posted by ashesandwine

Not much to say, just thanks to DxCluvr for the help....
Thanks to Just_bella for all the help as well...
Thanks to Patrisha727 for helping me find the banner and the 图标 for my spot...
And thanks to everyone for the support...
This time the lines are all mine... No song to inspire them

"Daniel's POV"

Can I fight when there's no hope? Can I smile when there's no happiness? Can I still 爱情 when the one I 爱情 is gone? Can I live when I hope for death?
I try to stay awake not wanting to dream of her, not wanting to see her eyes, her lips, her face begging to stay with me! I'm trying to go back...

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"Benny" - Chapter One

posted by marissa

"It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of 橙子, 橙色 and 粉, 粉色 in it."

"It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of orange and pink in it."

Chapter One:

Benny:

Benny climbed onto the bus, giving the bus driver a kind smile as he paid his fare. It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of 橙子, 橙色 and 粉, 粉色 in it, very reluctantly giving way to gray-blue. It was cold out, so Benny pulled his brown 夹克 tighter around him as he took his 座位 near the back of the bus.

He sat in the 座位 nearest the window, like he always did when he was sitting 由 himself. He cracked it open a bit. The breeze, however cold it was, made him feel a little less cooped up, a little less separated from the rest of the world that...

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Fallout: Kind of a Drabble.

posted by Sweet_Pants

He was yelling again.

    I’d close my eyes, letting his voice fade over my ears, pleading my breath to go even. My ears traveled out, hearing anything but my father’s yelling, anything but his harsh insults, anything but his mocking...

    Tick, tick, the clock was ticking. It was an 天使 clock, hanging over my head, hanging over the computer I was sitting in front of.

    He was saying something about towels, towels left on the floor in the bathroom...

    “...left towels all over the damn floors...someone...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Sixteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Sixteen

The 下一个日 and after Church, Sean came over to see the girls and while seeing him playing happily with the girls and with Boyd on the right side of her chair, Jamie was thinking about breaking Mac’s promise and going ahead with the 晚餐 together with Sean but she couldn’t because she promised her little girl and don’t want to see her 心 being broken and so will Michael if he finds out about the 晚餐 with Sean and his wife.

Also, when Sean turned to her and gave her a slight grin on his face before heading back with the girls, Jamie also smiled at him and after...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Fifteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Fifteen

Later that 日 and after 晚餐 and playing games with Mama and Sean, Mac knew that after Sean leaves their 首页 to go back to his own house and once Jamie cleans them up, put them in their pajamas, and read them a story 或者 two, then she can ask her mother about that odd thing she saw that 日 between her mom and the man who hangs out with them any chance he got.

It was coming closer and closer. After Sean had left, four of the Thomas family is heading into their ‘getting ready for bed’ routine which means taking a bath, taking sure that the kids had brushed their teeth, used...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 27

posted by BellaSwan636

Ashleigh

I see lotsa stuffs on TV. Like how big kids have to look out for the littler kids. And how kids always have mommies and daddies.

I don't have a daddy. Mommy never says why, but I think she doesn't want me to ask. So I don't.

I notice a lot 更多 than she thinks I do. Like how whenever she sees a 紫色, 紫罗兰色 (I asked her what it was called) she smiles a little. Like it reminds her of something. I know she likes them because she has some of them framed in my room.

I also see how she always ignores everyone but the people she's talking to and me.

And she always knows when Jamie and me play spies...

The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 7

posted by BiteMeCullen107

I left Jason at his house while I drove to work. When I first walked into the building and straight to the elevator, floor twelve. I got of the elevator and waiting there was a woman with a clip board smiling at me well I don’t know if she was smiling at me 或者 if her face was stuck like that but I greeted her.
“Hi I’m April Meyers; I’ll be your assistant.” She held her hand out and I took it. “Vanna is waiting for 你 in her office. Do 你 need anything?” She walked and talked. “No thank you, not right know.”
She opened the door and I stepped in and shut it. I couldn’t believe...

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Trapped in my own time Chapter 7

posted by dragonrider

"So Starr what is going on?" my mom asks me when Elliot and I sit on the 长椅, 沙发 "And who is this?" she motions to Elliot
"I'm Elliot from 2009. I'm excited to be here Mrs Makenzie I 爱情 your daughter," he says
My mom raises her eyebrows "Oh wow already? Starr please explain,"
I sigh "I chose the wrong job mom. Oh sure I chose the job where it sounds the most interesting but little did I know I was working for the bad guys,"
My dad walks in with 爆米花 and sits down "Please start at the beginning Starr I want to hear everything," he says
I sigh "Okay so 你 guys know I was in 2009 right?"
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The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 1

posted by BiteMeCullen107

I’m finally on my own, alone. I just turned eighteen a couple of months 以前 and I got a job offer in Los Angeles California. I’ve been 写作 since I could write and when I reached junior high I joined the new paper and I did the same in high school and in my 秒年 of high school I was offered a job as a reported for the Salem New Hampshire news paper and I accepted. My job threw the years had grown and now that I’m done high school I can take the job offer.
Ya my parents were pissed when the found out I wasn’t going to collage but if 你 think about it...

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Who are the real monsters: Chapter 1: The Antiworld Part 2

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

“There 你 are, man” 说 Marley. Opal had blood dripping from her mouth; her eyes were shining red as the shadows off the 树 darken her whole body. “Looks like we’re all done here, let’s 移动 out before they wake up” 说 Alec. Later on while Marley was lying on his bed, the same thought came across his mind, should the others know about their secret. “Marley, someone’s here for you” 说 Marley’s mum. “Hey man””It’s us”. This is Lindsay and Slone Sudiro (Lindsay 14, Slone 12) Lindsay level is higher than Opals, Slone’s is no better than Nathan’s. They are...

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黑夜传说 Chapter 5: Road trips

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Tayce’s p.o.v

“Training time for Lilly” I sneered looking at the small blond. She nodded. “Let me get ready” She said. I shrugged and then turned to go, but was stopped 由 Hayden. “She already trained today” he informed me, I nodded. “I know, but Rebecca wants her to have 更多 of it” I told him, he rolled his eyes. “Why is she being such a bitch?” he asked me I laughed. “It’s Rebecca, she sees her as a threat” I told him, he tensed up. The he turned to me. “You’re not being so bad” he said, pointing out that I’m usually a bitch. “She didn’t do anything...

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Gods: Chapter 10: Adam's 苹果

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I woke up, still in Ethan’s arms; my face was up against his chest. I slowly moved up, Ethan noticed this, he let go of me. I got up and walked over to the 厨房 table. Why was I in Ethan’s arms? But then I remembered. ‘Adam.......he’s dead’ Dawns words came to my head. I nearly fell down again, but arms caught me. “Whoa....come on” Ethan 说 pulling me back to the couch. I was now sitting on the couch, Ethan sat beside me. “How did he....?” I asked. I sounded angry but I wasn’t I just couldn’t feel anything else. “We don’t know” Ethan answered me. He was trying...

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Memories - A Poem

posted by Cuddles

A/N: My first poem I post here...I hope it is any good.

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Memories

Far distant seem to be
the things I now call memory.
The good and bad, the right and wrong
share a thing, cause they are gone.

Long forgotten feelings rise
each of them in their disguise.
They are not dead, so it only seems
waiting patiently to haunt me in my dreams.

Will it ever cease to be?
Even if it's called memory
Does that mean I always have to remember
to give up, to hide from them, to surrender?

Whenever I fight them I will lose.
I have nothing between I could choose.
No matter...

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Not really a scary story but a true story

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: okay i actually found this story in my local newspaer from 20 years back. And i'll put a symbol for town names. I don't want rapists 或者 pheaodifiles coming to my town... okay lets begin. And i shall have to give some background history. Well at there was a renovation going on at $ which was between # and &, for an old mental asylum to be converted into a power house musuem. Anyway so this story takes place then. I think i'm not sure of dates.
$ was a small town, very small as in like only three -5 thousande people

okay so in Australia out in the country there was a young couple travelling...

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Sample Chapter: Beyond a Dream

posted by xXDreamWriterXx

This is the rough draft of the first chapter of "Beyond a Dream" It's a book that I'm currently 写作 but it would nice to get some feedback about it. Its long but hope 你 like it!

Chapter 1

“What! We’re moving?!”

Aria stares at her father, Thomas, with disbelief and utter horror. Thomas sat in his 最喜爱的 seat; a maroon armrest chair with soft kind of fabric that made it hard not to touch. His shoulder length silver layered hair and black framed glasses that went over his gray eyes made him look like the plain glasses business man that he was. Aria stood in the middle of their living...

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"Weeds are Flowers, Too"

posted by ChiliPepperLuv

People say 花 are beautiful.
They're beautiful, that's true.
They also provide oxygen for us.
People say weeds are ugly.
They apparently have no value,
Nor do they deserve to live.
I'm not talking weeds that grow in the garden.
I'm talking about wild plants.
Well, weeds are flowers, too.
Just give them a chance.
Once 你 get to know them, they're amazing.
They can be just as pretty as flowers.
I may not be an orchid 或者 a sunflower.
I may not be a rose 或者 an iris.
I'm 更多 of a dandelion.
I may be a weed, but I'm not so bad.
Give me half a chance. I'm pretty neat.
So, weeds are flowers, too.
Get to know them. They're pretty great.

The Super Cute Crush

posted by mermaidgirl1010

Another 日 in paradise, NOT!
Just another summer 日 of hanging out with 老友记 and such.
Omg. He. Is. Hot. My friend and I were riding our bikes and I saw the cutest guy IN THE UNIVERSE. Well, maybe I am exaggerating but STILL! He is hot!
I must have been staring because the 下一个分钟 I was on a tree. OMG. He was looking at ME!!!!!!! ''Hi I'm Brady."
"I......I........." OMG! Sooooo stupid! My best friend was gone now and he leaned down. OMG. He kissed me! Then...... gone. I was in my bed. Was it a dream? Well, I think i'll check just to be sure.

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 31

posted by Insight357

Alexander stood in front of me. I was looking up at him from my spot in the shower.
    “Now what did 你 think 你 were going to accomplish 由 coming down here?” He asked, and looked around.
    “I thought 你 wouldn’t find me,” I admitted sheepishly. It sounded stupid when I 说 it.
    “Your thought process has yet to amaze me,” he chuckled. “This room is sound proof, right?”
    “Uh, yeah. Why?” I looked up at him curiously.
    “Just wondering if that maintenance...