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Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter three: Best ending ever!!
    Luke was lying in a hospital 床, 床上 the whole time Ashlynn gave birth. He missed the birth of his little premature little girl. He was upset and also dreaming about what his baby girl looked like. Ashlynn was aloud to come see Luke. She started crying when she saw him. She was sad that he was in a temporary coma. She thought he was cute in a weird way. She went to lie down. On her way back she fainted. She fainted because she thought she saw Luke trying to hug her in the hall. The nurse screamed, “HELP, HELP!!!” Dr. Dump came and took Ashlynn back to her room where her baby, Kat was in an incubator. She was so tiny. Dr. Dump put Ashlynn in bed.
        Hannah was in the room where Luke was. He was barely breathing when the monitor beeped. “AHH!” she screamed. She thought it meant he was dying. Jacob put his arm around her to calm her down-just as they kissed Luke woke up. “Where am I?” Luke asked. Jacob told him, “You’re in the hospital man.” Luke suddenly remembered Ashlynn and the baby. “HEY! Where’s Ash?” he asked. Hannah twiddled with her thumbs nervously, “Umm…she fainted.” Luke anxiously asked, “Is she alright?” “Yeah, I think she just woke up.” Hannah answered. “LET ME SEE HER!!!!” He demanded. He struggled around the IV’s hooked up to him. Hannah pinned him down. “No!” she said. “Why not?!?” He screamed. “Your not as healthy as 你 think.” She said.
        Haley was drinking coffee and texting Zach. She was walking back to the hospital. She walked in and Ashlynn was 接吻 Luke. “What’s up?!?” Haley yelled. “Thought 你 were in your room, dude!” She got a text from Anne.
Anne- Where’s Luke?
        “Hey, look at this-Anne’s alarmed!!!” Haley 说 and sat down in a cushy chair. “Leave!!!” Luke pleaded. “No.” she said. She rolled her eyes and continued texting.
        Later that week Ashlynn, Kat, and Luke came home. They first went to Luke’s house to 显示 his mom, Kat. His mom thought she was adorable. Luke’s dad thought she was so cute. She was really tiny, too. Luke loved his daughter a lot.
    3 years later, Ashlynn and Luke are married. They have 2 kids, Kat who is 3 and Ian who is 1 and a 1/2. Kat has long blonde hair like her mom and Ian has Luke’s blue eyes and his blonde brown hair. They’re adorable and so cute! Everyone loves them.
    2 years later, Hannah and Jacob have girl-girl twins, and a boy. They’re also married. The boy’s name is Cole, and the girls are, Jessica and Jennifer. Cole looks like Jacob, with his dark hair, and Jennifer and Jessica look like there mom, with her blue eyes and light brown hair. Jessica and Jennifer are 3 and Cole is 2.
    4 years later, Anne and Jordon get married and have 1 baby, Lucy who is 4 months old-she looks like her dad with his blonde hair. And Anne is pregnant with twins a boy-girl.
    Haley ends up marrying awesome DJ Sean and has 5 kids…sorry can’t tell 你 any more-but there might be a sequel coming soon!!!!

THE END!!!!! Hope 你 liked, guys.
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posted by DarkGirl23
The 日 my sister died, was the 日 I, myself, died as well.

She may not have knew it, but she was my hero.
I guess, however, all big sisters were kind of like that.

I remember seeing it, the body, the blood, the note she left in her own form of representation.
It was written, all across the wall, the note she left behind was in her own blood.

Hatred.
What a word, so different from hated; just a different form.
Which one am I? I should be described as both.
I hate you, and I know 你 hate me too. Everyone does.
Here are my final words to you:
Pain is welcoming
Crawling down my arm so slow
Blood that leaks...
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Zoeiz took a subtle relaxed deep breathe. And held it just for a moment.

Christ, 由 highest heaven adored…

The cold blistering air nipped at her exposed cheeks and the tip of her petite nose. A perfect atmosphere for the winters most important day, Christmas.

It was only 7:55 in the morning. Children throughout the modest town would be up 由 now, pouncing on their drowsy parents, eagerly anticipating on opening the wrapped gifts and stuffed bags.

She breathed out, the vaporous air revealing her breath.

Christ, the everlasting Lord…

Naturally, fresh flakes of snow began to fall from the...
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posted by ashleigh-jadee
It was a winter’s morning when Nicola realised something strange. It was a peculiar morning, yet she didn’t understand why.
    Nicola called her mum from her bedroom, but she got no reply. She tried a 秒 time, and even third time lucky. Yet Nicola still got no reply.
    Finally, after a few 分钟 of what was an eerie silence, she jumped out of her 床, 床上 and ran across to her mum’s bedroom. She flung the door open with such force that it made a loud bang, scaring herself at first for sure.
    Nicola took a glance at the bed....
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posted by tigerseye43
Once I was finally out of the hospital I was afraid to sleep in my own apartment. Kyle asked me if I would like to sleep at his house but then I remembered that last time spent the night at kyle's house. It involved no clothes and a lotnof dirty things I don't want to mention. But I 说 yes anyways, I had nowhere to sleep.
When we got to kyle's house I remembered I had not bottom any clothes. So for pajamas I wore one of kyle's t-shirts and my unferware. For 晚餐 we ordered pizza, delicious. After 晚餐 I brushed my teeth and combed my hair.
I didn't knowtice when Kyle came in the bathroom....
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Simba sat me down on the floor as he pulled a chew toy out of his 涂层, 外套 pocket and started chewing it *squeak squeak squeak* I opened my eye's, I was hopeing it was all a dream "Mother...." I 说 as I sat up slightly, as I looked around I knew I wasn't it wasn't a dream, I looked over at Simba "....Simba" I 说 as I started cring, I grabed Simba and held him tightly, as my tears rolled down my face Simba put his arm's around "Max...." Simba replied crying a little as well, as we sat there crying over what had happen my chest started to glow again but this time it wasn't purple it was blue...
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posted by para-scence
I didn't know which way to run. One foot went this way, the other went that way. My knees faltered and locked. I fell to the ground in a mess of tears. I wanted to keep myself open, but instead I cowered in fear. I whimpered when two strong hands grabbed the tops of my arms and lifted me up to my feet. My cries came out in staggered breaths; I hyperventilated. The strong arms pulled me into a hug.

"Oh my fucking...." the voice said, but didn't finish. "Kodi, I swear if I wasn't so happy to see you, I'd kill 你 right now." I peered up through my blinding tears at him. Even though I could barely...
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posted by para-scence
It was when they handed me the motel room key that I realized I was way in over my head. The place was called Big Dan's Motel. It didn't sound great, but it was only thirty dollars a night. I went to the room they had for me, and contrary to the Motel's name, the room was not. The kitchen, living room, and bedroom were crammed into one room. Maybe this is usual for a motel, but I've never been to one. Ever. The carpet was a mossy green, and the tiles in the 厨房 were white squares with four black diamonds surrounding the center. The bathroom was a decent size, but it reeked. Mold was growing...
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posted by sawfan13
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posted by Angelcatz11
Jaycee's POV

I lay there besides Liana, she is sleeping, I rest my hand on her soft delicate face, she stirrs in her sleep. Her eyes flutter open and she gaze's at me.
"Mmmmm, Mommy wh-where are we?" She asks. "Texas" I reply. She looks around, blood is spattered everywhere no is around except the dead boddies. She screams stands up and starts to panic. "Li, Li Calm down!" I say calmly. "Wha-What happened!!!" I sighed, I couldnt belive she cant remember. "Were isolated in a tiny town in texas remember?????" I asked. She paused thought for a 分钟 and shook her head.
posted by kateeuy
It was a warm night. The shadow of the full moon shone on Scarlet as she stood on the edge of the cliff, overlooking the sparkling water of the Atlantic Ocean. 下一个 to Scarlet stood a tall man with black hair and eyes that sparkled in the moonlight. She turned to her left “To 你 Clyde, always know that I 爱情 you” she spoke gracefully. She turned slightly to the front, facing the light of the moon.

Scarlet held her locket tight in her hand, her purple dress swayed gracefully in the cool breeze. Her eyes closed as she began to walk closer to the cliffs edge. Clyde stood still, holding their...
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posted by CullenProperty
I sit in my car, contemplating on whether 或者 not I should go pick up Lola. I've driven her to school everyday since I've had my driver’s license, which has only been a few weeks, but still, would it be right to leave her to fend for a new ride?
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posted by jacob_lover5253
Heyy I'm back...if no one is going to 评论 I might not post anymore...so plz 评论 cuz I like this story a lot nd I Noe where I'm gonna head with it.
~Kayla

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posted by hannah_vampire
Its pretty Long thxs for the 评论 :)

I woke up to the sound of my phone ringing, I looked at the screen and I saw melissa.baker :) and no this was not Damons sister it was the melissa I got drunk with.

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posted by hikaru13
    Her chestnut-brown hair flowed down her back, reaching down to her elbows. When the sun shone its bright light rays on it, her hair shimmered like the way water does when light hits the surface. Her eyes were a pair of brilliant emerald-green orbs that held innocence and kindness. Her smile...Her smile told 你 that see was an absolute 天使 that was sent from the heavens above.

For allI cared, she was our new next-door neighbor.

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Running was an experience for me.I relished the brisk steady breaze flowing and tangling itself in my chesnut coloured hair.The way the thud of my Nike trainers seemed never ending and significant in the crispy rich dawn air. My crimson hue ipod的, ipod pounded song after song through the natural intake of beat passing into my ear.
The 音乐 gave me some preference to look around into my picturete surroundings.
The horizon was even 更多 exquisite than when i'd fisrt layed my topaz eyes upon it the morning.The sky seemed to be in its own heaven untwinched with clouds but flubouyant with natural colour....
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Prologue:
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Chapter 1:
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Chapter 1
Meet the Carrot-Tops

    A long, long time ago, in the 年 1850, there was a man 由 the name of Sam Carrot-Top. He was a well educated man, slender in build and always wore a dusty old 帽 that covered his 橙子, 橙色 hair and broken glasses. He was an honest and wealthy man, but 你 would never guess that he and his family were well off; he never showed his wealth 或者 bragged about it. He used his money to help the poor and needy.
    His wife, Jane, was oh so beautiful, with lush red hair, a petite figure, and smooth, creamy pale skin. She loved all...
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