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Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a 披风, 斗篷 walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When I got up to the surface my family wasn't there, I got out of the ocean and looked around. Then a man in a 披风, 斗篷 came up to me, "Can I help you?" I asked slightly shaking a bit. Not because of the cold feeling 你 feel when the air blows on 你 after getting out of any body of water, but because of the fear I was feeling. He walked up closer to me, I dived into the water, and swam out to sea. Then I saw a fin, a 鲨鱼 fin, I screamed and swam back to shore. I was lucky I lived, I ran to my house but let out a loud scream when the man grabbed me. My family came outside and went pale, mom got the phone and called 911 but the last thing I saw and heard before the man knocked me out was, "Olivia!!!!!!!" And my parents and brothers running after me.

Narrators POV

The man came to the rough and tough city, where biker gangs, criminal activity, and the houses looked like total shit (pardon my language... but it's true) the sound of 摩托车 rumbled around. But the old man soon came to a school, he walked into the school.

Jason's POV

I walked into class, "mr Johnson?" The teacher asked me, "Yeah?" I asked. "It's 4th period" she 说 angrily. "Yeah so what?" I asked and sat down, "you're loosing your education!" The teacher 说 glaring at me. "Yeah so what?" I asked again, "why were 你 in so late?" The teacher asked me. "My Alarm clock didn't go off, I had to take my motorcycle to the shop, I had to get my hair done, and I had to get 更多 clothes so I can look cool" I chuckled. "That's all 更多 important than school?" The teacher asks, I nodded yes. "Who's he?" Cole asked, I turned around to see an old man in a cloak. "How did 你 get in?" The teacher asked, the man walked up to me, "what do 你 want?" I asked him glaring at me. "Even when he glares he's hot" Justine sighed dreamily, I flashed a smile before turning to the guy again who then knocked me out.

Narrators POV

The old man walked to a huge huge mansion where 你 could hear screaming, the old man snuck through the back door.

Tatiana's POV

"I 说 I wanted a pony!!!!!!" I screamed angrily, "honey we looked for a pony" dad 说 to me. "Then why don't I have one?" I asked angrily, "the places where they sell ponies are going through a rough winter and they can't be brought to us" mom said, I let out a scream. Then a guy in a black 披风, 斗篷 walked into the room. "Who are you?" I asked him angrily, "security!!!" Dad screamed, but he knocked me out and vanished before the security guards came.

Narrators POV

The man in the 披风, 斗篷 came to the neighborhood where Cathy lived, the sound of loud screaming echoed through the neighborhood.

Cathy's POV

I ran after my cousin who was visiting, he had taken my bag of candy!!!! I screamed and screamed at him running and running. "Cathy stop being so loud!" Dad called, "then make Donny give me back my candy!" I called angrily. Dad came down, Donny gulped and gave me my 糖果 back. "Thank you" I 说 but glared at Donny. "Now be quiet" dad said, but literally 3 秒 Donny took my hair brush and I was screaming and running. But then Donny and I stopped, there stood a man in a black cloak. "dad?!!!" I screamed, "no figure it out yourself!" He called. Then mom came back from work, she saw what was happening, she let out a scream. Then the man grabbed me "mom! Dad!" I cried. The last thing I heard before being knocked out was "Cathy!!!!!"

Narrators POV

The man in the 披风, 斗篷 came to the town where Xander lived.

Xander's POV

I groaned in annoyance when My sisters let out a loud squeal from the room 下一个 to mine. It's hard being the only guy in the family, I looked at a picture of my dad and I. He and I went hiking in the woods, that was the 日 before he headed into the army. Then 4 months later he was killed in while in battle, I felt some tears fall down my cheeks. He died when I was 6 and it was on my 6th birthday too, but ever since dad died it was just my mom, my sisters and me. Then there was a knock on my door, I opened it to see a man in a cloak. "Uhhh hello" I said, mom came running up quickly. Mom knows when we're in trouble. She let out a scream, the 秒 I look at the guy I was knocked out.

Narrators POV

Now the man came to the village Lexi lives in, people looked at him suspiciously.

Lexis POV

my friends, Jane, Nevaeh, and Anna were over at the house for a sleep over. "I brought snacks" mom 说 coming in with chips and humus, fruit, pretzels, cotton candy, cookies, and crackers. "Thanks mom" I 说 smiling at her. "No problem honey" mim 说 and walked out. "So do 你 still have a crush on Felix?" Jane asked me, I nodded yes, "then why don't 你 talk to him?" Nevaeh asked me. "You know I'm nervous and can get shy when I even go close to him " I sighed. "We'll help 你 out with that nervousness and shyness" Anna 说 smiling, "thanks" I 说 smiling. Then there was a knock on the door, thinking it was mom, I called "Come in!" But it wasn't mom It was a man in a cloak. He walked towards me, I was afraid. I scooted back, but then i was knocked out.

Narrators POV

The man in the 披风, 斗篷 came to the Big beautiful house in the country where Cameron's dad and mom bought so they could go and preform in the country performance.

Cameron's POV

I smiled brightly as I took dance lessons from my teacher. I had finished 唱歌 lessons so I'm doing my dance lessons. "excellent Cameron" mr Francisco 说 smiling, I smiled back. Mom and dad then came in, "now lets practice on the stage" mom 说 smiling. I gulped a big, I'm very afraid to go on stage 你 know and I can't do anything about it. Mom and dad took me on a stage with no one there, they put 音乐 on but I was too scared to do anything. Mom and dad came on stage with me. I hugged them crying, "I can't do it!!" I sobbed. "It'll be Okay" mom 说 smiling at me, then a man in a 披风, 斗篷 came on stage. He threw my parents away from me and knocked me out

Narrators POV

"Last house" the man in the 披风, 斗篷 说 as he came to a school, Asher's school.

Asher's POV

I smiled as I solved the hard math problem on the board, "you never fail to impress me Asher" mr Franchise 说 smiling. I nodded happily, but couldn't help but think about that girl at the pool. She always visits the pool, even in the winter with an indoor pool. Then the 火, 消防 alarm went off and I 冶炼, 闻到 smoke. Everyone walked out, but before I got to the door I was knocked out 由 some guy in a cloak
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