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Ah, the dreaded cliché! The worst feedback a writer can get is, "Well, it sounds sort of cliché, doesn't it?"

All authors want to be original. If someone even mentions that a writer's work reminds them of someone else's, the writer tenses up. "No, no, no, I'm nothing like him," he says swiftly. "I've never even read him."

"Yeah, but it's kinda like him," the reader persists, believing she is giving a compliment rather than an insult. "He's incredible, 你 should read him!"

The thing is-- it should be a compliment when a reader compares your work to a published writer. We all have our influences. It is important to know that there is no new idea. If you've considered something, odds are there was someone before 你 who considered that very same idea. It doesn't make 你 unoriginal 或者 a copy-cat. It just makes 你 human.

你 as an individual are very unique. Our experiences, family, friends, and personality combine to make a fingerprint that no other can replicate exactly. And even if 你 came up with the idea of a scientist and his alter-ego without ever even hearing of Robert Louis Stevenson, 你 can still write that story and add your own personal perspective on it. T.S. Eliot once 说 that "Mediocre Writers Borrow; Great Writers Steal."

And who do we consider to be great writers? Shakespeare. Steinbeck. Dante. Poe. Do 你 really believe their ideas were completely their own? Shakespeare, for example, wrote numerous plays with creative plots that he borrowed either from history 或者 from stories much older than he was. Romeo and Juliet was a retelling of the old Roman Romance, Pyramus and Thisbe, with smatterings of history. He does not try to hide the roots of his plays. In fact, he often celebrates them. In A Midsummer Night's Dream for example, the Mechanicals parody this tale 由 putting on a poor performance of it. If 你 think that it ends with that, Twelfth Night is based on an old Italian story, Gl’ Ingannati. Othello's tale comes from Cinthio's Desdemona.

If Shakespeare's 写作 was not original, why is he celebrated? For the way he tells these classic tales and makes them his own. His language, his characters, and the way he strings together history and fiction into beautiful pieces of theater. To say nothing of Steinbeck and Dante who used the Bible 更多 often than once, 或者 Poe who used classic poetic patterns to make his prose 更多 interesting. Every good writer steals from one another.

This includes what we call the "cliché." All a cliché is, in the end, is an old idea. Now 你 have two choices when it comes to clichés: embrace them 或者 reject them. Do not dilly-dally between the two. Because if 你 write something and believe it's a cliché, and 你 didn't want it to be a cliché but 你 leave it as it is, it will come off as poorly executed. No one will be interested in it. They'll say, "It's been done before, and I don't care." This isn't to say that clichés don't have their uses! In fact, embracing a cliché and remodeling it can make a very interesting work. These can come off as a critical text, a parody, 或者 even a complete reevaluation of the original cliché.

Let us take for example the classic tale of The Stinky Cheese Man, which completely deconstructs the old fairy tale, The Gingerbread Man. Fairy tales are often remodeled because they are the oldest and most familiar cliché of them all. Gregory Maguire has created a career out of transforming old, two-dimensional fairy tales into political commentaries. The appeal of clichés is that they are so familiar to us, when we find them in unfamiliar territory, it startles us. Another example of remolding the cliché in 电视 and film is the work of Joss Whedon's Buffy, the Vampire Slayer. Not only does he change the meaning of the word "vampire," but he changes our idea of a "slayer," not only 由 making her female, but making her a blonde cheerleader.

Certain schools of literature and theater have made a whole genre out of parodying clichés. Existentialism challenges things that the world takes for granted (Camus, Calvino) and Beckett and Ives drafted Theater of the Absurd out of cliché concepts.

So the cliché is not something that we necessarily need to avoid at all costs. Every cliché can be retold and remodeled into something new. If 你 find that 你 have (accidentally) written a cliché, don't just abandon it! Embrace it! Take for example, the following short, short story.

Once upon a time there was a princess. She had beautiful long blond hair and loved skipping out in the woods on the weekends looking for adorable woodland creatures to call her pets. Then one 日 she stumbled upon a frog. She found it to be so cute that she kissed it and it turned into a prince!

Rather than ending this tale with a "Happily Ever After," try to think of a few 更多 interesting endings other than that.

Examples: The princess dragged the prince to the 城堡 to be married immediately. The prince, still dazed and confused 由 the fact that he was suddenly human, went back to his usual ways of lounging about and eating flies until the princess began to nag him incessantly. Furious, he decides he loathes the whiny beast and marches back 首页 to his swamp, where he lives still, sitting on a rock and eating flies, doing as he pleases.

The princess screamed and began beating this stranger with her 钱包 before pulling out her mace and threatening to call the police and running back to her castle.

It is not difficult to put a new spin on an old idea. Those examples were just off the 最佳, 返回页首 of my head, but if 你 put 更多 thought in it, just imagine the ways 你 can twist an old cliché for your own devices!

Just a recap: It is not a bad thing if something 你 write reminds someone of something else. "Mediocre Writers Borrow; Great Writers Steal." And embrace 或者 reject a cliché. If 你 waver in the middle of each, then it will come off poorly. It is a perfectly fine thing to embrace a cliché, and plenty of good works of literature have come out of such a practice.
posted by I_DONT-KNOW
So this is part 2 i hope 你 enjoy!


Alexis sat on the 草 chewing happily on her sandwich, listening to the chatter that was going on around her. Elyon was kneeling not far from her laughing at one of Astrids crude jokes (again), Lily was talking to Rose about some boy in the class above them.Alexis's mind wandered to the time when she was able to talk to the girls and have fun. Like a normall teenager. She closed her eyes, breifly, letting the memories of her past overflow.

A group od girls sat on a large bed, in a large room. Laughing and gossiping. Alexis was there laughing too.The image...
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posted by mona_me
what a stupid! love! love! love! "i 爱情 love" "everybody needs to be a lover" "true love" all those stupid words! "bla bla bla"
爱情 is a legend, there's nothing u can call it "love" , 你 can't even define it. 你 know why? because it isn't there! that's why 你 can't say i am in 爱情 and say the same word after two years 或者 two days.
你 see, if it worked with your lover, 你 'll say 你 loved each other, and if it didn't work, you'll say it wasn't love!!!
你 are all stupid, lovers!
你 aren't even "lovers"
because "lovers" is a word from "love" and love's a legend.
when i heard this once when i was young, i didn't believe it.
but know i believe it's the truth, and there's nothing else truth.
你 may not believe me now, but 你 will, in few years in your life.
爱情 is a legend.
posted by rAsberrStrarS
Taylors strong and muscular tonned shape made him an ultimate 星, 星级 in his football career.So it was'nt a suprise that i was craddled to that chest know,as he examined me.
'Taylor,seriously i really don't know how i fell, i must have caught my foot on a loose root 或者 something.you know what i'm like'I spoke as softly as i could with my injuries.
Taylor did know what i was like,most definetly, thats how we met-with me being accident prone.It had been a close call,the first 日 of school. When Taylor caught me before i tumbled my way down the first hundred steps of our school, outside reception....
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posted by hannah_vampire
Thanks for all the 评论 plz keep commenting :) this is a long one

I had not been to school for two weeks, had not seen Damon and his family for ages, It was like a prison here and i couldn't get out 由 myself it was always Sefo follow her studpie mutt.


The whole 日 I was followed 由 9.00pm ' 嘿 i'm kinda tried so I'm gonna go to ur bed' OMG would Oni ever get his son away from me ' Sefo Im getting changed unless 你 wanna stay and get hit the the head i suggest 你 leave' He turned and walked out thank goddness, Now Time to go out the window. I got out of the window and started to run Damon...
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posted by thirteen_times
There he is just standing there, starring at 你 with 小狗 dog eyes. He smiles briefly at 你 breaking your heart. It’s all too much so 你 so 你 slam the door. Before the door shuts he sticks his foot in the door way stopping it.
“I just want to talk.”
“There’s nothing to talk about.” 你 lie. 你 don’t want to hear him apologize 或者 even see him. What he did hurt 你 like nothing else could, still 你 knew that 你 loved him and 你 心 ached for him. 你 wish 你 could turn back time to when 你 both were happy but 你 know that what’s done is done.
“How about us…”...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
At lunch I went over and sat 下一个 to Liz, she looked up at me and smiled. “So, you’re talking to me” I said, I opened my can and took a sip out. “Yeah, I forgive you” she said, and then she turned and looked at Adam. “Is that why?” I 说 nodding at Adam. She smiled at me, and giggled. “He’s happy” The word shocked me as they came out of her mouth; I had forgotten that Adam was as Liz tells me ‘unhappy’. I gave her a light smile, I had made him happy. When the 钟, 贝尔 went it frightened me I was too 迷失 in my thoughts to even care about being late, so for a while I just...
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posted by GoRgOnxx
TIP-TAP-TIP-TAP....,thunder,car horns...All those noisy sounds were vanishing away from my earshot as i entered the dark valley full of garbage and drain pipes.The smell was unbearable.My running shoes made slippery sounds and I was soaking wet in the rain.I was wearing a black shirt,and jeans with my 最喜爱的 夹克 and stopped only to spare a 秒 to catch my breath.But there was no time to waste.I always wanted this job,it was my dream since i was a child and i couldn't mess it up!But all my hope,courage and the little confident i had left me when i saw what's in front of me.There was...
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posted by Skitty_Love
I awoke in a sprawl. My 床, 床上 sheets were 魔发奇缘 around my ankles, my 床, 床上 spread tumbled on the floor. "Whoops, I must've had a rough dream last night.." I jumped down and began fixing everything. Just then, Professor Rhinestone walked in. "Oh! Pardon me Soul, I was just searching for one of your old ROMs from long ago." He 说 as he started looking through my maple-wood drawers and shelves. "Thats alright! But- Why would 你 need my old ROMs? I thought I got new ones." He nodded in reply. "Correct, but these older ones will help with many things, things 你 might not understand." He held a...
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posted by cutiegirl01
We were the first ones back downstairs and sat and watched a 显示 about something that I wasn’t really following. A few 分钟 later Sarus came down in a white t-shirt, blue jeans, and 网球 shoes. He looked over at me and smiled, and we couldn’t help but laugh at each other.
Sarus looked over at Jenny and Annabelle, “You know 你 two are going to be dead right?”
“Yeah we know it was just fun to have to tie her hands behind her back and 鸭 tape her mouth so that we could even change her. Getting the lip gloss on was interesting having her almost bite Annabelle’s finger off.”...
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posted by mitchie19
10. M A K E I T H A P P E N


“Yo, Sean, what up?” I shouted. Sean’s a football player, the quarterback of the team. Mostly he likes shaking his blonde hair. Sean’s living room was filled with my friends, Toby, Jason, Michael, and Chris. “I’m great, man. God, Melissa nailed me!” Sean said. We did a high five. The guys were watching Sports Channel.
I drank the can of Pepsi I was holding. “Look, look, look!” Toby was pointing at the flat-screen. “Another round left then the Toro’s will be champion!” Chris and Michael were shouting. I joined them.
“That was a two-point...
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posted by TDI100
你 sit there and listen. 你 hear what has to be said. When suddenly 你 hear somthing that appeals to 你 we are going to be preforming romeo and juliet your fav play 你 close your eyes and begin to wander 图片 flash in your mind of 你 on stage gazing out speaking your lines as if they are your own people clapping standing oveation 你 bow 你 curtsey they all enjoyed it 你 made them happy. 你 are a 星, 星级 people loved your prefomance 你 become 更多 流行的 at school everyone whants to be your friend


then 你 stop a cold hand wrappes around your 心 I will never get the part I will...
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posted by LialSanders
A bead of sweat rolls down my face and splashes softly on the ground below me. My chest rises and falls softly. I breath in and ex hail. The grey sky above me mimics my mood. Thunder booms and lightning bolts threw the air. I 交叉, 十字架 my legs, put my hands on my knees and begin to meditate. 颜色 flash threw my brain, visions fill my mind. My eyes snap open and I see a ghostly figure hovering in front of me.
It's a child. A young girl, 8 years of age at the most. She draws me towards her with a tiny pointer finger. My soul escapes my body and flies threw the night... the little girl holding my...
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posted by problematic124
Prologue                        Look at the world, yeah go on and look at it. Now tell me, What do 你 see? Home? Life? Secrets? Death? Anything? Well most people always see it differently. But they never see what’s right in front of them.
    When 你 look at the world 你 always see the small things. 你 never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner    .
    Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised 由 ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… 或者 never will.
    And I know we shouldn’t be telling you, but 你 ought to know.
    So look at the world, that’s right look at it. Because it’s going to change forever…
posted by charmingGirl13
Okay this fits to be 文章 worthy. I have this budding idea for a story about a girl named Skye(real named skylar) who discovers that she and her two 老友记 are Sirens ( a different kind than 你 think). They all have ibdividual powers like Skye can use other peoples power, Hazelle and Gabriel,s powers are conjuring 火, 消防 and Hazelle can shapeshift objects. Their parents were 老友记 and there dads, and hazelle and gabriel have one parent while skye has none, she lives with her aunt and she has this 迷失 sister who thinks she is a Siren but is their kinds' enemy. Meanwhile Hazelle and Gabriel are dating but skye and him are close because their moms were 老友记 and wjen her parents died she lived with them for a while as kids. So eventually they like each other. This story is confusing and jeeds work but its what i have. Tell me should i tweek it 或者 leave it alone. Also give me insight into what to do to fix it. Thanks.
posted by para-scence
"I knew it," I said, tears filling my eyes. I ran away from them, even though Mother begged me to come back. I ran upstairs, slamming my door behind me. The house seemed to rattle, but my anger was still there. I wanted to 冲床 something; to just get it all out.

I collapsed onto my bed, and stuffed a 枕头 into my face. I screamed, with everything I had. I screamed because I was scared... unwanted... guilty... a mess... I screamed until my throat was sore, and I could feel my diaphragm trembling.

Then there was a soft knock at the door. I clutched the tear-soaked 枕头 to my chest, afraid...
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posted by emmett
Falling...

Sometimes she’s down 由 the river
或者 other times 由 her tree
Sometimes she thinks about the things she can never see
But when the rain falls down, she’d cry
There’s no reason why

She’s always walked alone
No one’s ever shared her ride
No one’s ever felt close to her, no one’s ever 由 her side
She’s avoided 由 everyone
And never has any fun

Now darkness is her favourite thing
She thinks there’s no hope
No on ever throws her a rope
When she’s falling…
posted by fire_ice
What is the greatest 吻乐队(Kiss) in the world to you? Is it the ol "let's just be friends" peck on the cheak, 或者 maybe it's the "let's just finish this, I have places to see and people to do" kiss, it could be Mom's 最喜爱的 吻乐队(Kiss) the "we'll finish this later" 吻乐队(Kiss) 或者 the one that my brother, Tyler gives his khloe eyed tamagotchi girlfriend, Misha.
I'm not exactly sure how to discibe this 吻乐队(Kiss) to 你 and I can't guarenttee that what ever 你 have previously eaten wont decide to 显示 itself again but I can tell 你 that I'm sick of sitting in the living room during one of their sucking face sessions....
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