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16/5/09

Tick-tack…tick-tack… ok… just face it, 你 only have 23 days left for the final exam revision, it’s your destiny after all. 你 have promised yourself that 你 would be able to get an all-pass in this exam.

I really know that I should be 更多 hardworking, but laziness always defeats the eagerness of revising, what’s wrong with me?? I once saw failure as a shame, how could someone possibly get an ‘F’ even after revising? It’s 不可思议的 and ridiculous, the student must be a retard…yes, that’s how I used to think… well, I still think that is true now.

Well, mum and dad 说 I could not blame teachers for teaching poorly, I can’t deny about that.

Why, tell me why, physics and chemistry are so difficult?? Why, why, tell me why that one could possibly understand what Mr K K Lo 说 in class?? 35 out of 43, not a small number, 35 classmates (including me) out of 43 shamelessly failed in the 2nd term physics test. It was a historical moment, a new world record...

26/5/09

Such a rainy rainy day, stuffy...

Why on earth are we 给 so much work before exam? Don’t teachers want us to revise? 或者 do they simply 爱情 torturing us??

My 24-hours day:
6:20 am: in a sleeping state, wandering in a heavenly dreamland…
6:21: suddenly an alarm invaded this perfect piece of kingdom and disrupted my body nervous system, something strike my brain hard, a song is waking me up…
6:22: still in an unconscious state, just then the sudden ringing of my alarm clock bangs my eardrums to deaf
6:24: lying flat on bed, clearing my mind, at the same time, pursuing every parts of my body to start working…
6:25: suddenly remember I still haven’t revised today’s Chinese dictation
6:25 30 sec later… get up reluctantly, crawl to my rolling chair
6:27: gosh I have to recite two 100-words poems
6:27 40sec later… open the textbook…
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posted by Caleigh210
The feeling's unusual as I walk around
The sights are as strange as the sound
It's hard to believe that the beauty around me
Isn't beautiful in reality

How would 你 feel if all 你 know's a lie
That the truth is really hard to come by
When you're told that it's all alright
But all 你 see is the darkness of the night

When 你 realize
That the truth and the lies
Are separated 由 one thin line

Where can I find home
Even though I'm all alone
How can I say the right words
When I can't even 显示 the would
Who I am
Why I stand
That I'm completely 迷失 and I can't
Find my way
In this dreadful shade of grey

Hopelessly...
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posted by problematic124
***Please don't copy***
Chapter 6
Death Targets
"From the Predator to the Prey"Aurora questioned 阅读 the note.
As soon as I read this I called them all to my house I also told them about the (bio) dad situation.
"So that's the same the person who turned off the power at Tweety's house" Ariel asked
"Had to be"Fable nodded "who else could it be"
"Should we tell the police"Owen asked
"It's like Gregg 说 we need hard cold facts this can also be counted as a joke"Tweety reminded us
"And it's like the note says he's never been caught before"Gregg told us
"We should fight back"Aurora 说 suddenly
"What!Fight...
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posted by lovepop
Everyone was 写作 it down on their calenders as alerts of it popped up on the news, internet, and in big bold letters, on a newspaper! The time has come for it to be known to mankind and liked! The movie, Brenda and Luci's Night, was premiering on that weekend, the 25th of November.Everyone wanted to see it! There had been commercials of it since August, and the stars had been anxious. Speaking of the "stars" Whose names were Hillisia Jones, and Ponya Kricketiz. They were bff's since the kindergarten, and now they were in 7th grade. They auditioned for the movie without the other knowing! They were astounded when they learned they were auditioning for the same movie. They were mad, but when Ponya got the letter she was Brenda, and Hillisia was Luci, they were overjoyed, and began screaming with cheers! Now they were in New York being filmed for the movie... wait for more!
posted by DxCFan123
I woke up at 5 AM. Not suprising. I went to the bath room and got ready. I grabbed some clothes and put them on. A white short that 说 "WHO CARES?" and black shorts. I put On knee socks with converse. I put my hair in a bun. I grabbed my backpack and glanced at the clock. 7:45?! Holy crap! I ran to school. When I got there, only 5 分钟 left until class. 7:55. Wow. Arent 吸血鬼 suspossed to nbe as fast as a bullet? I walked down the hall nervously. Everyone was staring at me. "How's that?" "Who the heck is she?" I wanted to tell the I was Samantha Fitzpatrick of The FitzPatrick Family...
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posted by para-scence
I got, yet another, chance of being adopted when I was fourteen. I was in my room, drawing when there was a soft knock at my door. I looked up to see Ms. Bayer smiling sheepishly. I grimaced. That woman can give children nightmares with that smile.

"Hecate, there's someone here to see you." I cocked my head to the side. The only person I was interested in seeing was Officer Truman, and he always just came to my room. I shook my head and returned to my sketch. "Hecate. Get your butt up and go down to the front 台, 办公桌 this instant!" I sighed and got off the bed, and followed Ms. Bayer down to the...
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posted by para-scence
Along with the excitement of having a baby, I also became very worried. What would happen if I had a seizure during the pregnancy? What if my medication harmed the baby? I went on the computer and began searching for answers. Blake stood behind me, 阅读 over my shoulder.

"It says 你 can continue, 或者 stop your medication... It's up to 你 and your doctor," he read aloud. I nodded.

"It also says major seizures can be dangerous..." I sighed. He patted my shoulder. "But, if I do take the medication, there's an increased risk of birth defects."

"What are 你 going to do?" he asked. I sighed.

"I...
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posted by para-scence
Hera got out of the hospital a couple days later. Since it'd be too difficult for her to use crutches, because of her broken arm, she got to use a wheelchair. Kara 说 she was terribly depressed now, and blamed herself for her friends' deaths. I visited them often, sometimes with Blake if he wasn't working. It was kind of unnerving to see Hera like that.

She was still bruised and scarred up pretty bad, like she just got out of a brutal fight. The casts and wheelchair made her seem even 更多 fragile than she already was, and her stare was blank; out there. She didn't talk much now either. Before,...
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If only 你 could see the world through my eyes,
the rushing wind, the darkened skies.
And it just might take 你 由 surprise,
to learn this life is merely a disguise.


The band continued to play on as I sang the lyrics over and over in my head. I had heard it a million times before. My best friend, Chikara Wang, wrote it and practiced it every 分钟 of every 日 with his band. In other words, how could I not?

They were called SloMo Suicide. Chick was the main singer, not to mention 写作 most of the songs. He and his other band members stood on a platform that had been built in front of the old...
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posted by rru33
As i was giong to sleep i could not stop thinking about what would happen if i was the only one that was on the world.slowly i finaly fell asleep,but then something woke me up, like a big bang. i was getting out of 床, 床上 when i noticed that my momand dad weren't in the house, so i thought they took a walk together.after an 小时 或者 so i started to get scared. i finaly went outside but insead of seeing a calm 街, 街道 i saw 草 two feed high houses coved in mose.now i was real scared now.i ran around the whole 街, 街道 trying to find at least my mom 或者 dad to get this thing figured out.Soon i looked...
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posted by Funnygirl77
 letting go of the one's u 爱情 is like jumping out of an airplane with no para shoot
letting go of the one's u love is like jumping out of an airplane with no para shoot
7:00 Am
I woke up, and rubbed the sleep from my eyes. Alec was still asleep, so I quietly tip toed out of his room, and in to the bathroom. I didn't turn the light on, because I didn't want it to wake him up. I couldn't believe that i slept over at his house, nothing happened but still. It would be hard explain this to my aunt, I mean what am I going to say. "Hey Aunt Maggie, I slept over at Alec's, now i Know what your think but it wasn't like that we just slept in the same room, and used the same cover."

No couldn't say that she would kill me. I didn't hear Alec get up, so when he knocked...
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posted by ScorpiusHMalfoy
Callie and Damon are first to pick up their kids. They see Avril hurt and Avril milks it and say’s “ its all my fault.” Damon rolls his eyes but Callie yells “Keaira we left them with 你 and 你 return one damaged just because Debbie’s your 最喜爱的 doesn’t mean 你 shouldn’t pay attention to Avril.” “For your information Callie your daughter is a little brat and lazy little one too she’s not even very pretty and I can only guess that’s because she looks like you.” “ Keaira don’t talk to her like that” he says with a very light voice that has little to no meaning...
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posted by cutiegirl01
下一个 morning I was woken up to my Little monkey brother Joey jumping on my back and my mom and dad screaming at each other say stuff like “I can’t drive the kids to school” 或者 things like “shut up kids and go to your rooms.”
Well technically my brothers have their own rooms I have an attic but in the past me and Joey had to share a room until I grabbed my stuff and moved in to the attic and cleaned it out.
Next thing I know I am being dragged out of my 床, 床上 由 monkey, my dad, and monkey’s chimp friend Jeff Miles. With only a little trouble they got me out of 床, 床上 and slammed me on my...
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posted by Choco7
Made this into a 问题 but not lot of people 评论 hope this will get response


i had dream about a island that's is not mapped and a plane crash there with a class and their familys.That all i got and the information of the island- An island with ruff jungle that contain unknown species, including the 《绿箭侠》 蟒蛇, python 或者 A.P., for short, but these aren’t animals. There are humans but they wilder, 更多 tune to nature and have culture that relates to no God except for the 最佳, 返回页首 Eight “Lords”(or what I like to call them T.N.T, 最佳, 返回页首 *nane**tentei,yeah that dangerous ) and their sons and daughters(Spoil...
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Okay so if 你 like this I'll write more. 评论 plz?


Valerie flew down the hallway, shoving her way through the crowd of people. The piece of paper in her hand getting bent and ripped as she yelled out "West! West! West!"
Valerie's curly brown hard( just past her shoulders) swung in her tan face, making it harder to get to her best friend
West was walking with his two 老友记 on the 8th grade football team. Hearing Val calling his name made him stand on his tiptoes to see her racing at him. He laughed as she swooped through the highschool crowd as if she was a sernior. Her deep brown eyes...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
11: Never Too Late

“Wha…What?” Alice said, her eyes going from one person in the carriage to another.
“It’s true. I have a way to turn a vampire back into a human-heartbeat, color, blood pumps-whole nine yards.” He smiled. “But none of my boys want it-for different reasons though.”
“How?”
“Simple and not…See, when 你 are changed 你 are poisoned and that travels through the body and eventually stops the heart. I needed a way to extract that poison and alter the body so that it goes back to a prevamp stage. I found a way shortly after Jack was changed, with the help...
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posted by sweetpea92
    CHAPTER ONE
    Ugh. I groaned internally as I woke up. My head was pounding, and broken 图片 were swirling around behind my eyelids. I had no idea where I was, 或者 how I had gotten here. I refused to open my eyes and find out, 或者 give any other sign that consciousness had found its way back to me again. Not knowing exactly where and when I was a dangerous business for me. Very dangerous.
    You see, the last thing I remember before the blackness hit, is that I was running…
    My legs were on fire. They...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I 说 and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how 你 do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm 颜色 like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my...
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posted by Spotty_Vision21
"Hey baby, where are 你 going?" growled a deep voice.

Tammy resisted the instinct to turn around and walked faster.

"Just keep moving and he'll go away. Just keep moving."

She was now hyperaware of her surroundings. The man's quickening footsteps. The cool but smoggy air whoosing in and out of her lungs. Her heartbeat speeding up. The clacking noise her heels made upon the sidewalk.

Her eyes darted left. The store window reflected a woman in her late 40's, blonde hair fading.

"C'mon, baby, turn around."

The voice sounded much closer. Tammy's hands began to shake.

What could he want with her? She...
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