Okay this fits to be 文章 worthy. I have this budding idea for a story about a girl named Skye(real named skylar) who discovers that she and her two 老友记 are Sirens ( a different kind than 你 think). They all have ibdividual powers like Skye can use other peoples power, Hazelle and Gabriel,s powers are conjuring 火, 消防 and Hazelle can shapeshift objects. Their parents were 老友记 and there dads, and hazelle and gabriel have one parent while skye has none, she lives with her aunt and she has this 迷失 sister who thinks she is a Siren but is their kinds' enemy. Meanwhile Hazelle and Gabriel are dating but skye and him are close because their moms were 老友记 and wjen her parents died she lived with them for a while as kids. So eventually they like each other. This story is confusing and jeeds work but its what i have. Tell me should i tweek it 或者 leave it alone. Also give me insight into what to do to fix it. Thanks.

Falling...

Sometimes she’s down 由 the river
或者 other times 由 her tree
Sometimes she thinks about the things she can never see
But when the rain falls down, she’d cry
There’s no reason why

She’s always walked alone
No one’s ever shared her ride
No one’s ever felt close to her, no one’s ever 由 her side
She’s avoided 由 everyone
And never has any fun

Now darkness is her favourite thing
She thinks there’s no hope
No on ever throws her a rope
When she’s falling…