写作 Article: My Bullied Life: Max Lee Moore's About Me

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My Bullied Life: Max Lee Moore's About Me

posted by iHelloUniverse

Hello to the cold world, I was named Max Lee Moore 由 the parents who absolutely despise me. I am sixteen years old at the moment, will be turning seventeen on June 27th. But who gives a crud? 你 know what I receive for my birthday every year? For how old I am, like sixteen. I get sixteen whips from a belt. My dad doesn't live with me anymore to whip me, so there's my mother. She gets a kick out of every whip. It seems to make her ecstatic. Each whip equals to one of her evil laughs. She whips me any chance she wants to. It pains me so much that I'm surprised I haven't committed suicide yet. Hell, I've been contemplating suicide for almost three years now. 你 want to know the real reason why I haven't killed myself yet? The reason is, I have the hope of one 日 being able to speak to the girl of my dreams. Her name is Ally Nicole Vernon. I 爱情 just everything about her. She's kind. She's beautiful. She's smart. She's funny. She's... perfect. She's not a 流行的 girl, but it seems that everyone loves her. Ally treats everyone how she'd want to be treated. She's always helping out at school. I've loved her since she attended Pave View when she was in the ninth grade. I was at my locker with my Black Veil Brides bag over my shoulder. I heard a voice... so beautiful, so I turned. There she was... the most beautiful girl I've ever seen in my life. The thing is... she doesn't realize I exist. I'm invisible to her. We're in the same biology and drama classes, though she still sees right through me. It's like I'm nothing but air. When I'm bullied, it seems she notices me, but I'm not for sure. I'm still sure she sees right through me. Just wonders what the bullies are angered about. Getting to the bullies, well, they tape insults on my locker about me being 情绪硬核 and a fag. That makeup is for fags. That I should kill myself and cut myself. And crap like that. I get beat up in the bathroom. Because they know the teachers never go in there. They just go to the teachers' lounge 或者 whatever the hell it is.

My life is pathetic. Don't feel sorry for me. I don't effin' deserve it.

I-Luv-L, rose12345 and 1 other like this

LaDispute AW. You write this kid Max really well, with good voice so it's not at all cliche like someone else would've made it. Your story is going to be awesome. ^_^

iHelloUniverse Thank youuuuu!!! :D You're so sweet!

GreenLight24 Yeah i used to get beat up. :/ but it was mostly because of me being so small and being bi. im glad somebody's got the courage to write this kind of stuff. :) I published two articles in my Blacktie series that have to do w/ a kid who becomes a supervillain after being bullied....check em out their on this club!

GreenLight24 and poor max....

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Shoulders back
Legs slightly apart
Back straight.

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Knowing inside my heart
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Confident,
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posted by hgfan5602

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Catch my dream in the sky.

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Including me.

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Today,
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Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture 由金牌 Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)

Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)

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posted by dragonwriter

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