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posted by peacebaby7
This is for those who have just begun writing, 或者 for those who need helpful advice. I hope this 文章 helps you.

1) Spelling and Grammar

Spelling and grammar is the first thing 你 worry about. If there are many spelling/grammatical errors, the story doesn't flow very well. 你 don't have to be an expert, but 你 at least should have a dictionary nearby and know the basic rules of grammar. You'll pick up on 更多 the 更多 你 write.

2) Know Your Topic

First and foremost, after spelling and grammar, 你 must know what you're 写作 about. And I don't just mean a topic in general. For example, if 你 want to write about someone flying a plane, but don't know anything about how to fly one, do some research. But I also mean, know the general idea of what your story is going to be about. If 你 don't have the entire plot in your head, you're most likely going to encounter writer's block quite a bit. I'm not saying 你 need to know the summary of each chapter, I'm talking about the summary of your entire piece. It doesn't need to be specific, just the main idea.

3) Don't Stop Writing

Imagine yourself pushing a very heavy object across the floor (without wheel assistance). Once 你 can get going, it's not too hard. But if 你 stop and try to start again, it's extremely difficult. It's the same thing with writing. Once 你 start, do your best not to stop. Once 你 have a good bit of material, then go back and reread what 你 have written and make any necessary changes, deletions, and additions 你 wish to make.

4) Once You've Completed A Chapter and/or Your One Shot

When 你 complete a chapter, 或者 your story if it's only one chapter, reread it thoroughly. In fact, reread it a couple of times. Read it outloud to yourself. Check and be sure 你 don't have any spelling/grammatical errors, be sure 你 don't want to add/delete anything, and be sure it flows well and everything makes sense. The reason for 阅读 outloud is because this is your story. 你 know what it's supposed to say, and when 你 read inside your head, your mind will read it as what it's supposed to be. 阅读 aloud, your mind tends to pay 更多 attention to each word individually, so checking for errors is much simpler. (I learned this the hard way.)

5) Write About What 你 Like

I'm sure I don't need to include this, but I will anyway. If 你 don't write about what 你 like, your story probably won't turn out very good because you're not passionate about the topic. This is also including genre. If 你 don't like romance, then 写作 about it is probably not a good idea.

6) NEVER Ask For 建议 Before You've Written

Most people are afraid to write something and have people not like it, so they ask others what they think would happen 或者 how they would word something. STOP! Write it first, then ask others what they think. Know where 你 are going wrong and what 你 need to work on. However, be sure you're not letting other opinions get to 你 too much. If someone says that your 写作 sucks, don't let that stop you. 写作 good material takes a lot of time. And never let anyone suggest that something should happen instead of what you've written. If 你 allow this, then it's not your story! Trust me, I never asked for 建议 before I wrote something, and I'm a better writer for it. 你 will be, too.

7) Be Proud of Your Work!

I absolutely hate it when people say they don't write because they're no good at it. I hate it even 更多 when someone says that they used to write, but gave up because no one liked their stories. Maybe your story isn't all that great. So what? Like I 说 before, good 写作 takes time. My very first fanfiction that I wrote...Good grief, I couldn't believe that there was a time I thought that was good. But looking at my most 最近的 fanfiction, I think it's pretty good, in my opinion. Never let anyone stop 你 from 写作 if that's what 你 like to do. The 更多 你 write, the better you'll become at it. Learn from why your stories aren't as good as 你 want them to be, and make yourself a better writer 由 learning from them.

8) Writer's Block

The worst thing a writer can encounter is writer's block. If 你 ever find yourself staring at your piece of paper 或者 computer screen with absolutely no idea how to continue, put it to the side and go do something to keep your mind off of it for a while. Normally, when 你 return with a fresh mind, ideas will come 更多 easily. If that doesn't work, try to do things that bring 你 inspiration. Read something relating to your topic, 或者 whatever else 你 do to gain your inspiration. And like I 说 before, don't ask anyone what they think would happen. This is your writing, so it needs to come from your noggin. 你 can't be proud of your work if your ideas came from someone else.

9) Novel Format vs. Script Format

A lot of people find script format easier to write than novel format. It's less to write, right? Well, that's the problem. When 你 write less, it doesn't put a picture in your reader's mind. I wrote my first fanfiction in script format. In fact, I wrote my first two and a half fanfictions in script. All it told was what my characters 说 and weak descriptions of their actions. In novel format, 你 can give so much 更多 life to your story. For example, instead of:

Jim: [leaps down stairs in a panic] "Mom?! Are 你 okay?!" [reaches bottom of stairs and looks around frantically]

turn it into this:

Jim took off toward the stairs, almost tripping on the first one. Taking them 由 two's, he nearly tripped over his own feet as he frantically called for his mother.

"Mom?! Are 你 okay?!" he called. His 心 pounded with worry, and upon throwing himself past the bottom step, he frantically turned back and forth in 搜索 of his mother.


I know it's not a very good example, but I think 你 understand what I'm getting at. Though, if you're a beginner, 你 might consider 写作 your story first in script, then converting it to novel format. It might be an easy start for 你 until 你 get used to jumping write into the novel format.

10) Creating the Image

Most of 你 have probably heard of the phrase "show not tell" in school. That's much 更多 significant in writing. Don't just say, "He was very nervous about the exam." Say instead, something along the lines of, "His exam was in an hour. He fidgeted with his fingers and found his 心 accelerating with each 秒 that brought him closer to what could be the beginning of his life, 或者 the end of it." Again, not a very good example, but my point should still be clear. This is especially important in 写作 because if 你 don't create a clear image, the 写作 becomes boring for lack of flow. However, don't use overly descriptive terms that will only confuse your readers. Use terms that you'd probably use with a teenager. That way, most everybody will know what your talking about and your flow of 写作 will remain constant and unbroken. One thing that helps me in creating an image is stopping what I'm 写作 for a moment, closing my eyes, and imagining the scene in my mind. It helps 你 understand what part of the scene is causing the suspense, and which parts of the scene 你 need to focus on.

11) Know Your Audience

Which age group are 你 写作 for? A toddler? A teenager? An adult? A senior citizen? 你 want to use an appropriate language, plot, and genre for your audience. 写作 using grown up terms, but with a storyline that adults wouldn't want to read would be pointless. I'm sure an adult wouldn't want to read a story about a talking 蝴蝶 and his friend, the bumblebee, but a young child might. So, know who 你 want to write for.

12) Combine Sentences, Don't Repeat

I've mentioned several times about your flow of writing. This can take the topic in several different directions. I've already covered the issue of knowing your audience, your spelling and grammar, and imagery. But there's one 更多 area in which flow is important. Repetition. That's another one of the worst things that a writer can do. For example, if you're explaining what someone is doing, one thing that drives many reader's insane is something like this: Jim ran out of his room and went to the stairs. Jim darted down the stairs, taking them 由 two's. When Jim reached the bottom of the stairs, he frantically looked around for his mother. Notice how I use Jim's name in every single sentence as I described his actions. The reader already knows you're talking about Jim, so using his name over and over is unnecessary. Instead, using what I wrote under the Novel Format vs. Script Format tab would be much better. That's another reason why rereading may be important; 你 can be sure that none of your 写作 is repetitious.

13) Don't Give Too Much Visual Right Away

So, you're sending your character into a new setting. 或者 maybe your introducing a character. When 你 bring him/her into your writing, don't take too much time explaining what the room looks like that they're in, 或者 what they look like, 或者 who they are. Especially if the setting/character isn't something you're going to mention too often in your story. Bring details in gradually, if important. Instead of saying, "She wore red-rimmed glasses," say, "She looked down at the boy through her red-rimmed glasses."

14) The Ending

The hardest parts to write in a story are the beginning and the end. The weirdest to write, however, is the ending. It's kind of like when your 最喜爱的 显示 或者 book series ends. It's just...Over. When 写作 the end, consider the main character's goal throughout the story. Consider the message 你 were trying to portray through the reader. Don't just tell the reader that the character has reached his/her goal 或者 not, end it with a message that will stick in the readers' mind. If 你 just end the story without some kind of message, whether it be a message connecting to the world 或者 to the character him/herself, then the story is just forgotten. Though, I'm talking the ending to your entire piece, here. If you're 写作 in series, end with cliffhangers until 你 reach the ending.

15) 阅读 Helps

There are two parts to this tip. One is this: Read other published novels that interest you. Get to know what is good about the novel and what isn't. Know how novel format is written and structured. Read some reviews on the novel to get other opinions on the plot and structure. Take all of this into account in your writing. Just be sure not to copy someone else's work, and don't just write your story because 你 think it's what other people will like. Be sure what you're 写作 is something 你 would read if 你 weren't the author.

The 秒 part to this is 阅读 things that aren't professionally published. Think about your 最喜爱的 shows/books/movies and read some fanfictions on them. But don't just read them, think about what 你 would've done better if 你 would've written it. Pay attention to what 你 like and dislike about them, too. Both of these will help 你 pay attention to how 你 write your stories to differentiate it from other writings.

16) Stay On Topic/Make Sense

Be sure that 你 don't make random, irrelevant 评论 in your story. This also takes away from the flow of 写作 and makes it very confusing. Make absolutely certain that your 写作 makes sense. And if you're comparing something in your writing, make sure the comparison is clear. If you're somehow comparing a car and a bird, be sure 你 explain why, otherwise, your readers will become confused.

17) Reviewers

If 你 write something, and plan on asking someone to review it, don't get a friend to review it. I mean, if 你 want your friends' opinion, go ahead. But to get a 更多 honest, unbiased, review, get someone who 你 don't know very well to do it. Preferably, someone who has at least some experience in writing. And whether they say it's good 或者 not, take their review to heart. Just don't let it get 你 down if it's not the review 你 hoped for. Reviews will improve as your 写作 does.

However, I strongly suggest doing what I do. If someone is rude in their review (i.e. "You're 写作 sucks! Get a life!", "This is the worst thing I've ever read," "Jeez, 你 think this is good!?"), ignore the review completely. If someone feels that strongly about not liking your writing, then they shouldn't even read it in the first place. Taking those kind of reviews into account will only add stress to your 写作 process and lower your self-esteem and confidence. Only endure positive, polite constructive criticism.

18) Never Give Up

If 你 take anything from these tips, take this most to heart. Don't worry about who likes and dislikes your stories. Not every single one of your readers is going to like your stories. If it's because it doesn't flow, learn what you're doing wrong and fix your mistakes. If it's because they don't like the plot, just ignore it, because that's a matter of opinion. Don't let bad reviews stop 你 from doing what 你 love. Giving up is the same as not caring. If 你 really don't care about writing, then please, give up, because 你 obviously aren't passionate about what you're doing. But if 你 do 爱情 doing it, and it is something 你 care about, let nothing stand in your way. Even the most famous writers had to start somewhere, and there's always 更多 to learn.

If 你 have any questions, 或者 can think of any other tips, please share them with me. I've been 写作 for about a 年 now, but I'm still learning. Anyone who writes always learns something different.
posted by ScottishChic
The 日 of love,
Is here again,
This is tough,
From end to end,
A joyus occasion,
Is our salvation,
Without you,
I would be empty,
No one 由 my side,
No one to embrace me when I'm tired,
Stuck within a baracading window,
Wishing oh so much,
That 你 would show,
Just another day,
Where I would have to sit here and say,
Alone again,
Always alone,
Behind these eyes are tears of love,
你 are my one true,
Thank 你 honey,
For being with me,
I 爱情 你 so,
Please,
Never ever leave me

由 ScottishChic, dedicated to all whom I 爱情 x
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Hello my name is Cristina Xtri ,i am 15 years old and i 爱情 every singer's songs because SONG IS MY LIFE and also if singers wasn't even here exist then there would be no songs and i wouldn't even listen to song but now singers are here my life in on a ROCK AND ROLL!!!! WELL want to say something i 爱情 every singer's songs well they are GREAT for me it is my LIFE!!

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MOONWALKER THE SERIES
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hey what are yall lookin at?
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there... (practically drooling)

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