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posted by minniemeg
Siblings fight.

Siblings argue.

Siblings hit.

Yet they always forgive.

But..... what if the sibling was cold?

What if the sibling was cruel?

What if the sibling treated 你 like scum?

What if the sibling was heartless?

What if the sibling worshiped the ground another walked on, while tormenting you?

What if the sibling constantly mocked your social standing?

What if the sibling called your fears ''dumb and irrational''?

What if the sibling would never help you, even in a dire situation?

What if the sibling wanted to hurt you?

What if the sibling blamed others for their hatred of you?

What if the sibling made 你 cry, and then refused to apologize?

What if the sibling hurt 你 like a 刀 in the heart?

What if the sibling made 你 nearly burst into sadness every time 你 see them?

What if the sibling caused 你 to think why bother living?

A sibling like this is not a sibling at all.

It is a monster.

A terrible, ignorant monster.


Note: This is dedicated to my brother. I mean every word Sam, every word.
Bane’s POV

I laid in the grass, watching the clouds. I was beginning to dose off, right before sleep took me, a body pounced on me. I groaned, and looked up. A shaggy haired boy was sitting on my chest, giggling. My best friend, Christian.
    “Get off!” I yelled rolling over. He slid off me.
    “Party pooper,” Christian stuck his tongue out at me. He was so childlike, but that was something I had always loved about him. That’s also why we got along so well. He was hyperactive and loud, while I was cynical and quite.
    I...
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posted by Hades223
CHAPTER 1


Jason Card sat at his 台, 办公桌 in his science classroom bored out of his mind. He hated science. It was his least 最喜爱的 subject. Mainly because it was the last subject of the 日 and 由 that time Jason was usually ready to go home.
Mr. Form droned on and on about chemicals 或者 something. Jason didn’t listen. He just sat at his 台, 办公桌 and drew on some paper. He was a very good drawer.
Jason Card was a fourteen 年 old as of yesterday. His black messy hair never gave in to a brush which usually meant it was mangled and messy and went down to his ears. He was wearing a simple red t-shirt...
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posted by lindizzle215
hi so im a new writer so please tell me if i should contine 写作 this story. Please comment!!!!!
Rated: M


Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to the family camp that we help with every 年 and went here when we were kid’s but know were all teenagers so were counselors now. My brother Joey and I drive together every 年 and all of our other brothers drive up in there own cars 或者 the young ones with the others. There was a new guy this 年 his name is Eddie. I think that I will like this kid as I get to know him. I don’t have to share a room because I am the only girl...
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posted by cullens-rule
Chapter 4 Tom

“it would be easier if 你 knew, but I will try to explain, as well as I can, 你 know my name is Tom but my 秒 name is Cullen”
I interrupted him now
“Tom Cullen? Sounds old fashioned”
“It is, any way I’m just seventeen”
He looked away sheepishly like he was lying this made me curious would he really lie about his age.
“my real parents are dead now, they died of an illness I don’t really know much about them”
“I sorry that must be 心 braking”
He looked miserable he looked into my eyes and I could feel his pain, but he carried on
“I take after my father...
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posted by e2mma2weasle3
How to Add Emotion to a Story

1.    Understand 密码 或者 Key Phrases. Key Phrases are phrases in a story that triggers the waterworks. They are sentences that make people cry. Such as, a pet dies. 你 could write, "Goodbye, Old friend." A Key Phrase could also be an action. Such as, there are two pets. One pet dies. The other pet tries to sleep with the other one 由 cuddling up to the dead body.

2.    Add a lot of relationship between the one who dies and another character, whether that is a human 或者 an animal.

3.    Add comedy to the...
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posted by sapherequeen
*Sigh* Okay, this is the first piece of 写作 I will ever share with anyone. Rarely does the idea of a poem ever enter my dark mind. But tonight, just two 分钟 ago, this one came to me, and I had to...write...it...down...


I’m aching here
I’m bleeding there

Pain strikes within
My every move

And there’s
Nothing
I Can
Do
To Make It
Stop

The tears roll down my face
And freeze there quickly
And stay until the time comes
Where they are no longer frozen
And begin to stream down again

My hurt was bottled up
But someone broke the bottle
And now it’s
Everywhere
And there’s nothing
I Can
Do
To Heal Myself

I’m...
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“Look at them, trying to figure it out. Trying to work out why a pure-blood has come to their school, Antiworld, huh? This could be fun”. There was a young man sitting on the 最佳, 返回页首 of a gargoyle wearing a white 衬衫 with a black 涂层, 外套 over it. His eyes where a light green with a black cat eye stroke through it. As the man stood up 你 saw that he had pitch black hair and his skin was white like paper. As 你 closed in on the man’s face 你 saw his eye drop a line of blood down his cheek, as if he was crying blood. The man looked up at the sun covering his face with his hand, he closed his...
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嘿 guys! I just wrote this poem. I haven't written a poem in quite a while, maybe a year, and this one's an attempt to get back on the poem 写作 path. Well hope 你 like it, and please, if possible, add a 评论 saying what 你 think.

Me and Those

Ever noticed that in this life
Everyone wants 你 to do something,
或者 be something
That sometimes 你 don’t want to be?

They are those!
你 know them!
你 probably have those in your house.
They are those who expect 你 to take a path,
Even though,
Sometimes,
你 don’t want to take.

They are those who expect 你 to be great,
Even though,
Sometimes,
你 prefer to be small and humble.

But do 你 think,
For the slightest second,
That they care about that?
They don’t!

They are your parents,
Your grandparents,
Your Uncles and aunts,
That since 你 were born,
Came up with a path for 你 in life.

But know this,
And say it to yourself:
They are those, they matter,
But me is I,
And I’m the main character.
posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

She screams every time a police officer 或者 strange nurse touches her. She refuses to hear them out. So, until further notice, she is staying in my apartment.

I glance at the clock in the waiting room. It's past midnight. Wow. Jamie and Ashleigh are asleep on a small green couch, with a receiving blanket draped over them. I pick them both up, since Kayla and I are free to leave, and we all walk outside to my car. Kayla opens the back door, and while I'm strapping the two little girls in, I signal for her to get in on the passenger side.

She's a broken person. 你 only need to look at her...
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posted by livethislifeup
It's harder to forgive than to forget,
vice-versa, either way, it's still a threat,
time passes, memory flashes,
you're rememberin'
thoughts are coming in
no way to escape it, its a no win.
drives 你 insane, 你 try to up your game,
tell yourself they'll regret it and they'll live in shame,
just cause they dragged your name,
across every damn lane,
and 你 got hurt every time, yeah 你 still in pain,
and it ain't the same, 你 all tense around them,
and 更多 anger do 你 gain.
Deep down it's still hurtin' you
like every wound would,
it's like a throbbing cut
that keeps your eyes tight shut,
and 你 sound out...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

On Friday, Tia had picked me up to go shopping.

Tia was ecstatic; for what reason, I had no idea. Tia was like a hurricane, she jotted down my sizes on her hand and then took of through the store at a pace that should've set her path on fire.

"You look great in black, white, and blue," she muttered. I saved that for future reference; she obviously knew what she was doing. Plus I'd been told that each of those colours looked nice on me before.

She pulled me into a dressing room, pointed out which outfits to try out, and exited to let me change.

I pulled a scary-looking black 羁, ter子, 吊带 neck...
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posted by fanfly
 Artwork 由 me
Artwork by me
Who are 你 to judge?
Sitting right where 你 are
你 have no claim on me

I know my own path
I am my own guide
你 are nothing to me
No matter how 你 try

What do 你 care?
If I'm not doing it right
I'm not following you

I know my own path
I am my own guide
你 don't know me
No matter how 你 try

Why are 你 here?
你 know I don't want you
I told 你 to leave me

I am my own path
I know my own guide
你 can't mold me
No matter how 你 try





Why do I feel compelled to write angsty poetry? I swear I'm not even that angsty. 哈哈 Oh well, I hope someone out there enjoys it.
posted by Epismatic
A whisper in the cavern that goes unheard,

and a glimmer in the sky that stays unnoticed,

like the start of a brand new life, at the peak

of a mountain never scaled, lies in wait.

It can't be moved 由 any cosmic mover,

so no passing wind 或者 fog will douse it.

Only your eyes can scratch out the image

或者 accept it, the light at the edge of your eyes.

Will 你 take hold of the key you're offered?

Stop 唱歌 of freedom; seek it instead?

To become a companion of the new

takes an ever expanding, soaring gaze.

But even 由 taking one step forward,

由 placing one hand onto the mountain,

as the wind tugs gently at your back,

你 will realize the cage has already been broken.
Your hair is long, wet, and wavy and clings to 你 as 你 rise from the lake. 你 get the sense that the water should be clearer. 你 don’t dwell on it though, distracted 由 your own hair. 你 don’t remember it being so long. With every motion the string of beads and shells woven into your hair bobs gently with a clicking noise. 你 don’t realize that 你 are topless until your hair settles against your back. But 你 are not ashamed, there is a sense of liberation, 你 can better feel what the earth and the wind are telling 你 this way. If 你 could see behind you, 你 would know that...
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posted by pLaStIcSUNDAE
It's gray. It's always been so gray.

The beating 心 that searched for what it believed to be a forever, only to be led astray.

The beating 心 full of warm belief,

Now an iceberg of 苦 regret, the surface a shallow reflection of the depths that rest beneath.

The smiling mask distorts the image of the surface, betraying the eyes.

The rigid, cold structure reduced to a cube of ice.

A problem crippled and crumbled into "I'm fine."

If the eyes are windows to the soul, then these windows have been fogged and cracked.

If the eyes are the windows to the soul, then within these, behind the mist,...
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8 Elements Of The Nutshell Technique 由 Jill Chamberlain via FilmCourage.com.
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PART 1- LETS HAVE A RANT

Hi. So yeah, from the 标题 I think you've gathered this story is about .... well let's just say a problematic 19 年 old struggling to find a meaning in life.

If you're a typical "Caucasian" you'll never understand the things we "brown people" have to face. Over-protective parents are just the start. The kinds of people are totally different. The type of "cheats", "betrayers", "heart-breakers".

Being born in a place 2% of the people worldwide knew is just the start of a slightly difficult life. For now, lemme just summarize my life for you. I'm a 19 年 old girl living...
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“Bow before oh bow before the Mistress of the Blade.”

She dances in shrouds of silk scarlet.

Heel over heel in spinning in time.

Fabric twisting ‘round her delicate ankles.

“Praise oh praise the Mistress of the Blade.”

The sword an extension of her graceful arm as she twirls it about in Mid-September air.

Crisp September air.

The blade slashes through leaves as they fall.

Hilt of 金牌 adorned in ruby and diamond.

Gleaming and glistening as it slides from her grasp. Wailing through that oh so crisp Mid-September air.

“Watch in wonder oh watch the Mistress of the Blade.”

By night she finds...
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THIS IS VERY URGENT AND NOT A JOKE! ALSO DON'T GOOF OFF!!!!

I really mean it! What would 你 be able to do if SOPA/TPP censors the internet? What would 你 be able to do if 写作 fanfics and drawing fanarts become illegal? What would 你 do if it's illegal to do a cover of your 最喜爱的 song on YouTube? What would 你 do if downloading things from the internet (music, movies, TV episodes, etc) became illegal? What would 你 do if SOPA/TPP wins the war and takes away internet freedom? Net Neutrality is already dead so far, we can't risk the freedom of internet...
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posted by ilu_rayray
 Liyah (me)
Liyah (me)
Aliyah-Me(18)
Alexus(18)
Jasmine(18)
Prince(18)
Roc(18)
Ray(18)

My pov
Wassup im Aliyah but 你 can call me liyah for short. I sing and im a backup dancer for mindless behavior with my two besties Alexus and Jasmine. I feel torn that prod left but ayyee Nobody knows this but i kinda like 射线, 雷 idk what it feels like to like someone bcus my dad always abused me and i never liked boys ever since but the past is gone and im living the life out in L.A.

Alexus pov
Hello im alexus but i perfer u call me lexi. I live with my sister 茉莉, 茉莉花 and bestie liyah in L.A me and my sister been through alot our parents...
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