写作 Article: Broken Dreams Chapter 37

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posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

I hated seeing her cry. Knowing it was my fault immediately made me hate myself, not that I didn't already. I needed to hear her voice, know she was really here.

Some part of me registered the fact that I'd sat down, and that I had touched her, if briefly. I had said, "Tell me."

She met my gaze, looking terrified. She closed her eyes firmly, as if she was living a nightmare. Maybe she was.

"I know I hurt you, and I'm sorry," she whispered, looking anywhere but at me. "I thought it would be better that way, 你 had your whole life ahead of 你 and I couldn't take that away because of my stupid mistake - " she stops.

"Never say that. It is not your fault. Accept it, because it's mine. 你 only took my life when 你 left." I am not lying.

I realise that I have pinned her to the wall, but worse, she isn't struggling. I immediately release my hold. What right would I ever have to hold her captive?

She didn't seem to care. She leaned 前锋, 期待 and kissed me with surprising force. I was paralysed for what felt like am eternity before I kissed her back.

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Gilbert's Story Part 3

posted by grissomsgirl

Please read Parts 1&2 或者 this won't make any sense.
This isn't a timeline story Gilbert is three and this is my first try at fanfiction, so please be gentle!

All 犯罪现场调查 characters owned 由 CBS except for Grissom Junior, he's mine, I hope!

I have no idea what went on after I met the rest of my family but I understood some of it, something about going 首页 a week off and Stevie, Daddy does not look too well so I asked him who Stevie is whilst I sat on Grampa Jim’s lap “Gilbert, Stevie is my 狼蛛, 塔兰图拉毒蛛 and he lives in a tank in my office” 说 Daddy “what’s a 狼蛛, 塔兰图拉毒蛛 Daddy?” Daddy...

The wierd and wonderfull life of Belle: Chapter 4

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

WELL IM A BIT STUCK ON THIS ONE , BUT ILL GIVE IT A GO, SORRY IF IT SUCKS...........................

I Quickly got changed and ran down the stairs, I paused at the door to shout to Mike, "im just going out i'll be back before it's too late," and ran out the door before he could reply. I wasn't sure where I was going, all Stephan 说 was that I was to head towards school. So thats what i was going, heading to school. I was on the egde of the old wickory bridge, when i saw them. A group of five boys standing tall, and weary. As i approached they signalled for me to pull over. I stepped out the...

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Not Alone

posted by bri-marie

Warning: Abuse
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Picking up a stick, I struck it across old Emily Simpson’s white picket fence. The noise was sharp and loud and would most likely be heard. Smirking, I kept walking, trailing the stick along behind me. A low growl sounded and I turned my head. Sure enough, a huge, brown and white mutt crawled out of the dog house, bearing his teeth and snarling. I tossed the stick to my left, away from the fence, and turned away into the street.

The weather was nice – warm and sunny, with just...

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch.9]

posted by HarryPLover

"Ms.Love!"
I banged my head against the 台, 办公桌 when my science teacher, Mr.Underwood woke me up from my sleep with his slave owner voice.
"Do 你 care to 加入 us?" I personally didn't really feel like it but then again I wasn't in the mood to argue.
"Sure." I yawned. He went on teaching his boring lesson on frogs. As if we need to know about frogs. What career requires 你 to have frog knowledge as one of your skills?
The 钟, 贝尔 rang louder and longer than usual. Lucky for me that was my last period.
Usually Matt is waiting 由 the car 由 the time I come out 由 this time he wasn't there. His car was...

Solitary [Chapter 1]

posted by NoahxCourtney77

It's Funny, I Use To Be Popular. At First Some People Loved Me And Others Hated Me. Now Everyone Hates Me. Even My Old Best Friends. 你 See, I Always Found A Flaw In Everyone And Used It To Hurt Them. Not Physicly Hurt. I Made Them Feel Horrible About Them Selves. I Was The Reason 你 Cried On The Way Home. The Reason 你 Fake Sicked. Of Course Karma Came And Hit Me Like A Ton Of Bricks. I Try Hard To Be Nice, But No One At School Pays Attention To Me. Except Teachers. I Even Tried Sitting With My Old Friends.
"Hey, Guys!" I Said
"What Are 你 Doing Here?" 说 Lexi Illing
"I Just Wanted To Sit With You."
"Well, Their's No Room"
"Yeah, Right There." I 说 Pointing To The Empty Chair At The End.
"Well," 说 Victoria Khan Placing Her 图书 On The Seat. "Now It's Taken."
Everyone Laughed. Except Me Of Course. I Just Walked Away. Wishing, I Had Never Been So Cruel.

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch.8]

posted by HarryPLover

We were walking through the mall almost about maybe, 20 feet from the door. He hadn't 说 a word to me since the whole Jose thing half an 小时 ago. Matthew was purposely walking behind me, though only a few feet away, still I wanted him at my side. I stopped and looked back at him. He was stopped his walk with his head down. I walked over to the side of him. I reached for his hand that was poking out if his pocket. Then he did the most crazy thing I think Ive ever seen. He actually stepped back so i wouldn't touch him. He seemed to think it was funny, 或者 maybe it was my startled face that...

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch.7]

posted by HarryPLover

Those words pierced me like thorns on a rose.

"Happy Anniversary." His smile was absolutely priceless. I had to laugh just a little at his nervous grin. I knew the that it had been a 月 since we had gotten together but I don't think he exactly remembers whether that 日 was today....or yesterday. I wanted to make me sweat it out. But he was right, it was today. I gotta admit that I was kinda surprised that he even remembered.
"Aww, 你 remembered." I saw the nervous grin turn to relief. He earned a kiss.
"Of, course I remembered." I still wanted to make him sweat though. I couldn't resist.
"What happened to the whole " I don't remember...

Are We Right For Eachother?

posted by jacob_lover5253

*New character! Kayla Known as Karleigh's cousin*

I turned around and saw Nick waving from outfront. Oh, okay. I grabbed two water bottles, one for me and one for Nick. I picked up my phone to take with me.

(Kayla-underlined karleigh- italics)

so wen u getting here?

Uh...not for another 小时或者 so y?

bcuz i was gonna play frisbee with Bri Nick nd others

UGH! Nick! I h8 him!

I don't get it y? y do u h8 him?

cause he pulled my hair in the pool!

I thought we cleared this up...he thought u were his annoying loser sister, Leigha!

ugh! his sister is too cute to h8 nd just cause u like nick...

Just another Crush Chapter 5

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

While she slept I caressed her satin cheek. Connor stares down at her with 爱情 and I lean my head back on his chest. One night in May Damon calls me shouting into the phone. “ Keaira Callie’s pregnant with a baby girl with blonde hair and green eyes.” “ That’s great Damon.” “ Yea we have already decided on the name Avril 你 know after the singer kinda but I live the name too it sounds like a flower.” I smile even though he can’t see it. He then tells me to put Dawn on the phone and he tells her that she’s gonna have a cousin. She says she is happy and then says “ Is...

Just another Crush Chapter 2

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

I pull on my Rocking Paris 衬衫 and Jeans. I then pull my dirty blonde hair into a 小马 tail and then brush my teeth and then wait in the car till Gabriel comes. When Gabriel does come out I see he is wearing his green vest that brings out his eyes. Gabriel sits in the passenger 座位 of the 野马 and lounges there. I look at the radio and groan its 7:15 and we have to be at school at 7:45. “Where’s Kaden” I ask? “I don’t know he’s probably fixing his hair again.” I snicker and then turn the key and start to drive down the street. “He can drive the 粉, 粉色 corvette.” I and...

日期 Night*sequel to prom night* (Chapter One: the night of my life)

posted by moolah

日期 Night *sequel to Prom Night*
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter One: the night of my life
Anne was sitting at the 厨房表 when Jordon came in with Lucy and the twins, Mia and Joey crawling behind. Anne said, “What’s up?” Jordon didn’t answer. He looked mad at Anne. Anne sighed. “Jordon-talk to me.” She begged. He rolled his eyes and went upstairs. Anne got her cell phone and called Hannah. “Hannah, its Anne. Call me back. Thanks.” She left a message. Then she called Haley, “Hey.” Haley said. “What’s wrong?” “Jordon stopped talking to me.” She said. “Oh,...

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Nick & Grace: Chapter One

posted by CullenProperty

He made me stay in the car while he checked us into the room. I had barely noticed that he carried in two packs of 啤酒 with us. We started off just watching 电视 and sucking on a beer. Then soon enough he had too many drinks and he started 接吻 my face. The bad thing is, is that I let him and I kissed him back. He touched me to, but again, I let him and then he pulled my 衬衫 off. I didn't mind it much until then and that's when I knew that this wasn't the best choice I'd ever made. The smell of his breath penetrated my neck and filtered in through my nose, making my stomach wrench....

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Are we right for eachother? Chapter 4

posted by jacob_lover5253

After Nick cheered me up I decided to go home. "I'm gonna head home. I'll text 你 when i'm coming back out. I have to eat dinner." He frowned. "Alright i'll be waiting." I laughed. "Bye." I walked my bike back to my trailer. My friend Briana came running up to me.

"So, I have a question?" I looked at her. "Alright ask away." She smiled a little and let out a little laugh. "Who do 你 like?" I stopped walking all together. She asks me now? "Uh, come to my trailer with me and i'll tell you." I 说 walking again. I walked inside with her following me. Cocoa, my puppy, jumped up on Briana, "Alright...

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A Lesson Learned(by me!!)

posted by dexisawesome

A lesson learned

Once upon a time in the small town of Eighdensburgh there were 6 small children. 5 of the children loved to play all 日 and sleep all night. The sixth one did not like what the other kids liked, he liked chemistry and science plus a little bit of paranormal things. One 日 the first child, that was a girl, came up and asked the sixth child if he wanted to play. He said” No, of course not! Why would I want to spend all my time prancing around like a fool!”. the first child then said” What’s your problem, 你 got something against us!”. then the first child ran off...

Lucid Dream: Chapter One

posted by AliceKinsley

“Lev, 你 left your book on the table.” Boris rushed over to me, handing me my English textbook. I grabbed it reluctantly, sighing. I meant to leave it there. English isn’t my strongest subject. 或者 Language.
“No, I meant to leave book there.” I replied, rolling my eyes and shoving the textbook into my satchel. Boris chuckled and patted my shoulder. America was such a strange country. The language was hard, the people were different, and the weather was unpredictable. At least in Russia 你 could understand what the people were saying, and when it was going to snow 或者 shine. “Why...

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Learing to let go Ch. Four

posted by Funnygirl77

learing to let go is like jumping out of an airplan with no para shoot

8:00 am Saturday
I woke up, I felt way better then I had in years. I 爱情 the ending of my dream, I could still fill the warmth of Alec's arms. I smiled to myself as I made Breakfast for Aunt Maggie and me. I made pancakes, Bacon, and eggs, Aunt Maggie walked down stairs and smiled at me. "what's gotten in to you?" I smiled, thinking of what Alec said. Aunt Maggie looked at me, and 说 "alright who's the boy?"

I pretended like I was offended, "boy, what boy?" Aunt Maggie laughed, "do I get to meet him?" I smiled, "You may? it depends." I stopped talking then, When I'm with Alec I fill so alive,...

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Evil, Darkness & Light

posted by juicyjossy9

Did God Create Evil?

The 大学 professor challenged his students with this question:

"Did God create everything that exists?"

A student bravely replied, "Yes, he did!"

"God created everything?" The professor asked.

"Yes sir", the student replied.

The professor answered, "If God created everything, then God created evil, since evil exists, and according to the principal that our works define who we are, then God is evil".

The student became quiet before such an answer.
The professor, quite pleased with himself, boasted to the students that he had proven once 更多 that the Christian faith was a...

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When Criminals become Hero's?

posted by Marcus_Ghent

Rahar and the Three Bandits
(aside the three bandits bit. I originally intended this to be a longer, full story but I sorta like it as just a lil moral short /shrug)

Rahar seemed a plain fellow but should 你 ask his 老友记 they would all tell 你 he had the makings of greatness, that he was designed to fullfill integral roles in important events. Indeed there was nothing obviously special about him...unless he chose to 显示 you. He wore his black hair long, down past his shoulders to about mid-back. Many loose-fitting rings adorned his calloused hands, though usually these had the impresion...

John Muir Middle School Character 列表

posted by steph1011994

John Muir Middle School

Alexa Lightman: a girl with braces who wants to make a difference. Age 11
Deandra Cody: a formerly chubby Hispanic girl who loves drawing. Age 12
Katie Eckert: a pigtailed 篮球 player who wants to be 星, 星级 forward. Age 12
Emma Walsh: a young brunette girl who plays 足球 to win. Age 13
Colleen Tepper: a blonde girl who strives to be a champion figure skater. Age 13
Hannah Slater: a girl with curly brown hair who is a violin prodigy. Age 14
Brooke Paxton: a Hispanic girl who play guitar. Age 11
Brigit Banks: a bun wearing blonde Irish dancer who is very serious and competitive....

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Character Development!!!!

posted by breebree446

Although JP doesn't really describe his characters that much, he gives enough about Iggy to know he's blind, a pyro, and has 草莓 blonde hair!

Although JP doesn't really describe his characters that much, he gives enough about Iggy to know he's blind, a pyro, and has strawberry blonde hair!

So, we have the plot line and idea prepared. But what about the thing that makes it all come to life? The characters. This is a little 文章 on character development.

Appearence!

你 know the old saying, "Appearence is everything."? Well, it's not! But it IS important when writing. As 你 go along, think about what your character looks like. What's thier hair color? What kind of body type do they have. What's thier eye color. I'll admit i'm not a big 粉丝 of the "Hi. My name is _____ I have brown hair and blue eyes." What I do is describe the characters subtly. Like if one character describes...