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This is A story of tragic, betrayal, and romance blooms through a time of desperate and dark times. This story has no relation to any actual historical events, and anything depicted in this story is not true and did not take place in actual French history. This story was made for entertainment purposes, and only a name of a few locations actually exists.



In the late 1800s, Alchemy was a major part of European Culture, but was prohibited 由 the Church, for Alchemic teachings went against God’s teachings and the Catholic beliefs. In a Small town off the borderlines of Paris France, a middle aged Alchemist, Victor Alexander Damè conducts strange experiments in secret, for his tests required human sacrifice, which was forbidden 由 all Alchemists alike and abolished use of alchemy 由 the church of Catholics. He hires exiles of the Country of France to find potential sacrifices, which mostly ranged from higher up classmen in which he had strife against to various members of the French Court.

His curiosity and lack of a Heir lead him to discover a peasant boy named Nathaniel and his older brother Simon. Both boys had been abandoned from their English father after their mother died when they were both fairly young, and ever since they lived on the streets relying on stolen 食物 and any 安全 water they could find. Nathaniel at the age of 10 had obtained the illness known as Thantosis, a serious disease that caused the slow decay of the inner organs.

Realizing that his baby brother’s time was short, Simon desperately tries to find shelter for the both of them 由 going around various houses in England trying to get families to take either both of them 或者 at least his ill ridden brother in. No one would take them in, in fear of catching the disease themselves, Simon pleaded for them to let them stay, but only found disappointment, One 日 as Winter is fast approaching, Simon’s patience grows fairly thin with people as his brother starts to 显示 更多 signs of the disease taking affect when Nathaniel starts to cough out large amounts of blood.

The boys soon gather attention from two fairly intoxicated men. They start to boast about their healthy sons, and pick at Nathaniel’s weakened and ill stricken state, out of anger and his weakened will power, Simon grabs a rock and pins the taller and larger man to the ground and with one hard swing, smashes the rock against his head, instantly killing him. The other man had escaped after this, and Simon, realizing what he had done, out of fear that he would be trialed and sentenced to Death 由 the British Police, he runs off with Nathaniel, stowing away on a Merchants Carriage heading to France where he manages to get a job in the small town of Damèberg.

For a time, the man Simon worked for let him and his younger brother stay in the 谷仓 in which Simon worked in the most as payment for Simon’s work. Simon is relieved of this case, feeling like he and his brother can live a semi normal life, without the struggles of life on the street. 5 years past and word starts reaching the French Court of a Boy who was a suspect of murder escaped England and was hiding somewhere in France.

Terrified of someone finding them, Simon runs away from the Farm, leaving a note, which simply stated his regrets, and his sincerest apology over the murder of Alfred J. Jones. Now back onto the streets, Nathaniel’s condition starts to worsen even 更多 so then it had been, Simon tries desperately to keep his brother out of the harm of the crime-ridden streets of Damèberg. One night, drunken men, who claimed that they 偷了 their money and food, corner Simon and Nathaniel; Simon tries to explain to them the situation. Not bothering to listen, one of the men hits Simon, and continues to beat him senseless while Nathaniel watches helplessly.


Simon facing the fact that this man was going to kill him, starts to accept death, for his death would redeem his sin of murdering Alfred, before the final blow the man is stopped 由 an elder gentleman, who the men recognize as Victor Damè. Victor saves the boys and brings them to his 城堡 on the borderline of Paris and Damèberg. Once Simon has recovered, he discovers that Victor is an Alchemist and he pleas for him to save his brother from the grips of the wretched disease, having known that Alchemist were known to do any miracles that succeeded the current knowledge of medical research.

Victor informs him that he cannot perform such Alchemy, but had something that might keep his brother alive for a bit longer then what he would have had. Simon Insisted that he gave him the antidote, proclaiming to do whatever he wanted him to do. Victor seizes the opportunity to make use of the young adult. For the 下一个 couple months Victor has Simon retrieve former convicts from the prison in Damèberg, Simon doesn’t 问题 this request at first, but he grows 更多 confused as time progresses.

One 日 when returning from an errand, Simon notices his brother is nowhere to be found, he imminently confronts Victor, slightly angered with this, but calms down slightly when Victor states that he merely had brought Nathaniel into a room in the basement in preparation to receive the antidote. Simon grows slightly suspicious when he asks to see his brother and Victor states that Nathaniel was in no condition to be seen in, and soon he begins to investigate behind Victor’s back.

Simon having conducted research from every book he could find in Victor’s library, he comes to a horrifying conclusion. Victor was using the forbidden alchemy of Human Transmogrification in an attempt to create a relic of ancient times, which granted the user immortality. Realizing the danger he had put himself and his brother in, he realizes he must find his brother and escape.

Late at night Simon sneaks from his room and tries to make his way to the basement to retrieve Nathaniel, when Victor catches onto his intentions and imminently tries to kill him, Victor burns down the castle, trying to take Simon down with it. Simon barely escapes the wreckage engulfed in flames, and tries to find shelter in a near 由 forest.

Unsure of rather 或者 not his brother is alive; he collapses from exhaustion, once 更多 ready to face his death. He wakes up several weeks later, finding himself in a unfamiliar room. He learns that a man named Alphonse Heisenberg, a German/French merchant who had connections with Victor, rescued him.

He informs Simon that ore then likely Victor had his brother locked up in his main building of operations, the deepest bowels of the Cathedral of Notre Dame in Paris. Urgent to get there Simon tries to make his way to the door, but is stopped 由 Alphonse, who states that he was in no condition to take on Victor. He went on to explain to Simon that Victor was far beyond a normal human, he was already on his way to immortality, and that it would take a equally skilled Alchemist to take him down.

Simon begs him to teach him Alchemy, Alphonse simply disagrees, not having any knowledge of Alchemy, but sends him off to a friend. Thus Simon spends 7 months training and learning Alchemy, under a elder Alchemist named Johann, who sought refuge in Berlin, Germany. Simon returns the 首页 of Alphonse, only to learn that he been kidnapped and taken as prisoner 由 Victor as described in a note left 由 Alphonse which stated that Victor had already gotten to his family.

Simon vows that with his newfound strengths he will redeem not only him, but save his brother and the man who saved his life, and to end Victor once and for all. During his travel to Paris, he runs into a young female, named Joanna, who he bumped into as she was running from the police due to that she had 偷了 some 面包 from a local merchant. Reminded of how he used to live before Victor, he takes her and hides her in a near 由 Ally, and distracts the Police with his Alchemy allowing both to make a quick escape.

Realizing he was an Alchemist and his purpose she begs him to let her join, and it’s revealed that she is the only living daughter to Alphonse, who managed to escape Victor’s raid of their 首页 two months before. He reluctantly agrees, as he had no real choice and couldn’t leave her behind. Both take on the Journey to make their way to France, along the way getting into all sorts of trouble, with the German Police on their tails, they reach the outskirts of France, and take refuge in a near 由 Inn, and begin to plan out their means of attack. What awaits them at Notre Dame? Will they be Reunited with missing family? What happens when things get a little out of hand? Will Simon manage to see his brother Alive?
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posted by ZekiYuro
After an upbringing in New Zealand and a spell 表演 in her own country,Nyree Dawn Porter made 伦敦 her home.Interview 由 Alan O'Kelly.

Nyree Dawn Porter made her first stage appearance at the age of 3.Playing the part of a ladybird in an amateur production of Noah's Ark,she walked onto the stage and into the lights to delighted applause and laughter.

'It stopped me dead and instead of joining the other performers I walked down to the front of the stage to find out what that noise was.'

'That noise' has 圣女魔咒 her ever since and in a long,successful career,both on the theatre stage and on...
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'It was March 1957 and I was taking photographs in Paris.1 afternoon I went up the Bastille and I saw 2 爱人 on a balcony.They were standing very near each other.They were talking.I took just 1 照片 and they didn't hear me.I called it 爱人 at the Bastille.Luckily for me this 照片 became very 流行的 in France.Soon posters and postcards with my picture of the 2 爱人 were everywhere.But I never knew who the 2 young people were.They never contacted me.'

'30 years later I had an exhibition of my 照片 in Paris.I was talking to some 老友记 when suddenly a man came up to me and said,'I know your 2 lovers.They live near here.I can take 你 there if 你 want.'I immediately decided to go and meet them.This was their story.'
A new 报道 on life in 2020 was published yesterday.This 报道 predicts big changes,not just in technology but also changes in the way we live.These are some of the predictions for work and family life.

Family life:
1.One in five fathers will be househusbands,while the mothers go out to work.
2.People will live near other people who have the same interests as them,for example in golf villages.
3.There will often be 3 generations living in the same house,e.g. grandparents,parents,and children.
4.People will live until their mid-eighties,but women will still live slightly longer than men.



Work and...
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Chapter Two: "Give and Take"

Only after Zero finally left through the window did Kaname try to rise from where he was sitting. He wavered slightly, gripping the 墙 beside him for support. Could never have let Zero see that, couldn't let anyone see that. Of all the things that Kaname Kuran was expected and required to be… weak was not one of them. No one could see him weak.

He was still bleeding. Damn that boy and his stupid gun. Slowly shrugging out of the dark, now bloodstained 衬衫 he was wearing, Kaname threw it into the fireplace, letting it burn, like he'd burnt the white school uniform...
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I was lying in 床, 床上 choking back another scream of pain from the horrific contraction. I was defiantly grateful that Patch couldn’t feel my touch.
If I had been clenching a humans hand they would have passed out from the sever amount of pain from my grabby hands the very first time.
Patch held still every time I grabbed for his hand. He just waited, being the perfect 天使 he was.
I heard someone run into the hospital room, in the middle of my contraction. My eyes were clenched shut; I wasn’t able to see who it was.
“This is so exciting, I can’t believe this is happening, I can’t wait...
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posted by ellie_bellie135
Character Profiling

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I was sitting on the floor along the outside of the gymnasium. It was the night of the winter dance and I just had the most embarassing moment that anybody could ever experience. After being rejected 由 Mr. Popularity, cheated on 由 my date, and the nasty, rude encounter with Ms. Popularity, I never wanted to 显示 my face at school again.

The tears were just coming down. They wouldn't stop. Each time I tried to hold them in, 更多 tears came down. I sniffled, hoping that they weren't so loud. They were just as loud as ever.

Suddenly, somebody was out of the door. I crawled into a mini hallway....
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posted by EminemAddict09
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    I was on break at work, when my friend Becky came running into the room jumping up and down, waving her arms about with three strips of paper in her hand. I work at Ladybug Child Care in Minnesota. “MELEAH!” she screamed. I stared at her annoyed. “I won, I won, I won!!” she screamed causing our coworkers to stare at her like shes nuts. Which was pretty funny, because she is nuts. Haha.
“Won what?” I asked annoyed at her freakishly hyperness.
“Tickets!” she 说 with a huge smile, he handed me a ticket. I stared at it.
“Oh, uh… oh,” I said. I didn’t...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
It was only a couple 分钟 after the reception and Aunt Alice was practically jumping out of her skin. “Esme can we 显示 them please, please, please?” Aunt Alice begged. “Ok but calm done Alice we don’t want to give it away.” Grandma told Aunt Alice. They tied a peace of cloth around Jacob and my eyes. We walked a mile and Grandma and Aunt Alice took of the blindfolds. Jacob and I stood in front of a beautiful three story house. “Grandma, Aunt Alice its beautiful. Thank 你 so much.” I 说 turning back to them giving them both the biggest hug I’ve ever 给 any one. They...
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posted by Insight357
When the selfishness,
Has 你 in its grasp
And 你 cannot break free
Nor admit to it
You must stay silent

When 你 want someone
To be yours
Yet they are anothers
Does it make 你 selfish
To want the one they have?

When 你 want the one
Someone has
You are selfish
For that is theres
Not yours

Find your own
Although the one
You want
Makes 你 happy
When the rest cannot

The one 你 want
May do the same for others
Nevertheless, 你 want him
For yourself
However, it will not happen

You want the rest
To remain happy
Even when your heart
Cracks every time 你 see him
For he is with another
And she is expectant
Of your selfishness...
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The fiction story I wrote EXCLUSIVELY for Fanpop. Enjoy!

The great woods sat before Shadow, Zoey, and Summer. The towering family of trees was a wonder for Summer, but the 狗 saw it as familiar. Cozy.
Home.
Zoey barked at Summer with excitement and scampered into the woods. Shadow ran after Zoey, and Summer couldn't help but follow.
~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ ♥ ✰ ♥ ~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~
Some time later, they were deep into the woods and, being lead 由 Shadow's instincts, found a familiar field of flowers, followed 由 a clearing. Shadow sniffed the air as his mind began to wander.
I remember this place. I...
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posted by tigerseye43
That night Jake laid awake, staring at the ceiling. In his mind he replayed the horrific scene of Whitney falling out of the car and seeing her limp, lifeless body lay there. Tear once again stung his eyes but he tried hard to fight them back. He got up and went to the closet, opening it and reaching around for a shoe box. He found it and pulled out a small blue satan box. He opened it as he sat on the foot of the bed. In the box was a gild Tiffany diamond ring. He had planned to propose to Whitney but it was to late.
A few tears ran down his cheeks as he looked at the ring, the way it sparkled...
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posted by LeoPenguino
Alright, well as all 你 火影忍者 粉丝 may know, the new movie Blood Prison has recently came out. I finish watching the movie and it made me completely mad...
The main conflict in 火影忍者 Shippuden is 晓组织 and their plan to rule the world with the Eye of the Moon Plan. In this movie, the 草 Village wants to accomplish the exact same thing... but with a box that grants 你 any wish.
The 晓组织 is know to be the toughest and have the most skilled people in its clan... so why would they have not just used the box from the 草 别墅 the from begging if it holds such immense power. Why would the masked guy known as Tobi go through the process of capturing all the Jinchūriki when he could just grant a wish for all his plan to happen...
This is what left me thinking what in the world is this...
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Jasmine's POV

The freezing darkness pressed down on me,Harry,and Dudley.
"S-stop it 你 two.Now.It-it's not funny." Dudley stammered.
"We're not doing anything Dudley!" I shouted over the wind.
"I swear,if 你 don't stop it,I-I'll hit y-you." Dudley 说 again.
"Shut up Du-.." Harry began.
WHAM!
The sound of Dudley's fist connecting with Harry's jaw sounded beside me.
"Ow! God Dudley!" Harry shouted.
Before I had time to react,my feet were kicked out from underneath me and I fell to the ground,slamming my already hurt head on the ground.My spine seemed to jolt out of place,then back in,making me moan...
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The Demon Locked Into The Heart


Meggan was your average school girl.Blue glasses and short dark blue hair, Meggan was always the one they picked on.She only talked when her best friend was talking to her.Her name was Claire, Claire was the happy-go-lucky type of girl.Claire's joyfulness has gotten her out of arguements every time she tried.Meggan and Clair were walking down the hall as usual."Hey Claire?"Meggan 说 looking over to her."What?"Claire asked looking over to Meggan.Some 随意 kid walked 由 and knocked the 图书 out of Meggan's arms, Meggan gave a glare that just 说 "Drop dead,...
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Let's say your walking down the 街, 街道 and 你 see a girl on the other side of the road.Looks like a sweetheart 或者 a nice person wearing a light green sundress. At first glance 你 don't give the girl a 秒 thought but if 你 looked 更多 closely 你 would have seen the biker boots and the heavy jewelery. And yet her face and her dress looked like sunshine.
You may think the girl weird 或者 strange but that's just how she dress. Though 你 don't have the guts to go up and ask her about it. Why? Because it's rude to ask why she dresses like that and 你 just want to keep on going to your destination....
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