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posted by ambers1999
Ring, ring. “Hello”? ”Hannah I need 你 to come to my lab today”! “Doc”? but I thought”
…” I know, I’ve been working on something and I need your help”. “OK nice to talk to 你 again…bye”. In excitement I jumped out of my chair and put my best clothes on. Wondering what Doc was up to? I haven’t seen him in over a year, now that it’s the summer I finally have something to do. I raced down to Doc’s lab. The door creaked as I opened then I knew I was at the right place! “Hello” I 说 softly, “anyone here”? “Ah here 你 are I haven’t seen 你 in awhile how are you”? Good schools’ hard but good….you? I didn’t want answer like good 或者 fine but he gave me unusable one. “Well I’ve been studying chemicals and found the perfect mix and I pick 你 for the job. The thoughts that rumbled in my head, I thought that man was crazy! I was thinking that he would try to poison me 或者 knock o-u-t out for something else. “No, no, no I’m not drinking that stuff. He came with a cup of that stuff and the smell was unbearable! Plugging my noise I spit out. “Have 你 tried that on your rats”?” Yes I but they didn’t do anything then they died”. Ignoring the fact that it stuck the color of the stuff was kind of a neon and green that had smoke coming from it.”Hm I don’t know. “I promise….If 你 die I’ll have pat benatar sing a song at your grave”.“More like have Johnny depp give me flowers. Deal. I took a big swig of that stuff of the stuff and tasted like liquor and Kool-Aid, I was coughing so hard I thought I was going to throw up.” Hannah 你 OK he 说 sweetly”? I nodded my head and reached for a bottle of water I hurried that down but there was still an aftertaste.”Sorry I can’t drink anymore I think I need to go home”.”No worries just as long as 你 get to feeling better” he 说 with a smile. I walked 首页 thinking that this 日 wasn’t the most eventful day. I kicked some rocks and went 首页 and got to bed.


CH2 THE SYMPTOMS
The 下一个 Moring I woke up screaming and ran to Doc’s lab.”Doc”! “Open this door”.”Opened the door in shock”. “Hannah what’s wrong”? “Look at my nail’s”…”So” .Doc 说 annoyed. ”there black soooo I didn’t paint them last night”. Scared he sat me down on a 表 then looked at my nails.”Wow I sure didn’t see that yesterday”.”Doc don’t play games”. “Well I think it’s common”. I gave him a sharp look. “Common, Common Doc does this look common to 你 Doc something’s happening”.“Well did anything else happen last night”. “Not that I remember.” “If anything happen I’ll look into in more”. “Fine”. “I went out the door when it slammed shut. It was around 2:30am as I went back to bed”.”Hannah, Hannah I’m waiting for you”. I can see Doc at the end of this black rough road the same one we have in front of our school calling for me. Smiling creepy at me he says.”I know what’s happen to 你 now, it didn’t take long for me to figure it out.”What do 你 want from me, figure out what, what happened”. “You should know 你 DRANK IT!!! Suddenly I almost jumped out of my bed, as I get a hold of myself I notice I was shaking I looked at the clock 5:23am I glared around I notice that I can see 5:23 at night I can see in pitch-black dark. I could go to Doc’s then I would only have 1hour to get to school. Then I got up and got dressed walked to Doc’s lab I knock on the door and he opened it again.”Let’s have a look shall we”. “I woke up this Moring and I was in pitch-black dark and I could see it look like I had dark vision goggles on”. He looked in my eyes in surprise and found that it was a little glow inside my eyes. “OK I see a little glow but nothing much”. When he picked up something off the 表 he scratches me on the arm.”Ow what was that for”.” sorry I didn’t know. He looked at me in the face and notices something different.”Open wide”. He look in my mouth and found that my K-9 were sharper than before then he look in my eyes and it look like someone went into my eye and cracked a glow stick.“Now that’s different if it’s OK I would like to run a test on you”.” I got to get to school sorry, maybe later”. “OK just come back when you’re done”.

CH3 THE START
As I got to school I moved my tongue around to feel my K-9 teeth and I didn’t feel anything but teeth so I guess that it went away. After a few classes I went to lunch hungry because I didn’t have time to eat breakfast.”Hannah are 你 ok, did 你 eat breakfast” Anna 说 concern with a smile. After finishing my last bite of my chicken 三明治 I said. “Of course I am I feeling fine, and no I didn’t eat this Moring”. When school was over I skip the bus thinking that I can walk to Doc’s lab faster. Doc was cleaning up wondering about me look at the calendar July 15 and at the bottom it 说 full moon.” Oh no Hannah not Hannah”. Doc runs out of the lab hurrying to get to me running down to my road as for I down the black rouge road feeling weird. All I see is blur then I notices I drop down to my knees scared thinking that I’m going to have a seizure. Doc is running as fast as he can pushing people and stumping from rocks when he got at the beginning of the road I was on. For all the madness that happened to me I passed out but the only thing I remember is that I felt my K-9 teeth come out, I could see in pitch-black dark, then I heard a voice about a mile away say.”Hannah hold on I’m coming don’t close your eyes yet I’m coming to help you”.”Doc”? I 说 very faintly. Then I 迷失 it I thought I was another person I ripped thought bark and jumped off trees. The 下一个 Moring was of course was a Friday and 你 would think that they would plan out us coming back from summer carefully but anyway I skip school to find that I was in Doc’s lab.”Hannah, Hannah 你 feeling are right”. “Yeah….I had the weirdest dream last night I was coming 首页 and I started jumping off trees and howling”. “Hannah do 你 remember going to sleep in your 床, 床上 last night”? “No….Doc what happened last night”. “Hannah” he 说 with a sigh I ran some tests and a checked for most everything adrenaline rush, seizures, rabies, then I checked for something different something I wouldn’t have try before.”Doc what happened last night tell me and get over with”.”Well unfortunately 你 can’t get this over with….Hannah what happened last night when 你 drank what I gave you”. “Spit it out Doc.” You’re a werewolf” Doc 说 then there was a long silence.

CH4 WHAT, HOW, WHY
“What, what do 你 mean I”….”The stuff that I gave 你 somehow turn 你 into a werewolf”.” Don’t say I’m not a were-whatever 你 说 I can’t be”. Doc ripped off the calendar from the 墙 and showed me that at the bottom of July the 15 it 说 full moon.”I don’t understand why me… 你 说 你 tried on your rats”? I jumped off the 表 the 表 he had my on and ran to the room that he kept his rats.”Don’t open that door Doc yelled so loud I thought he was going to tackle me 或者 something but then I open it and I looked around the cages a found that one of the cages had a big hole in the middle of it I turned around and look at Doc.”What happened to the rat’s cage and where is the rat…you lied to me didn’t you”.” No I didn’t I thought the 鼠, 大鼠 was dead I didn’t know”. “Well now 你 know I was screaming and sort-of turn into a howl. Then I slammed the door so hard I might have broken some hinges. I ran down the stair but Doc was coming down with me.”Hannah 你 don’t understand I can help I need 你 to calm down I bit I’ll explain everything”. “You tried and failed leave me alone I finger it out myself”. He finally caught up with me and blocking the door. “Get out of the way I don’t need you”.” No come up to the lab and I’ll help you”.i pushed him out of the way then went thought the door and ran home. Not knowing what to do I can do a little research. I sat down at my 台, 办公桌 and calmed down then did research. Like I wanted to I was just afraid that I couldn’t control it again so I did some research. it turns out that is only happens during a “full moon” so I’m 安全 till tomorrow night I’m scared of what Doc would do to me if I see him again. For now I just what quiet so I can think about what just happen. Knock, knock.” Hello”? I was thinking about what 你 说 yesterday and 你 were right I’m sorry about what happened I just needed sometime alone for a while to finger things out a bit”.” Hannah I’m so glad to see 你 and I’m sorry to I shouldn’t have told 你 right up front.” It’s ok, may I come in”? “yes 你 may I’m also very sorry for not telling 你 about the 鼠, 大鼠 I thought he just wouldn’t do anything and die”.” Again it’s ok I’m sorry for yelling at 你 like that”.”I’ve got to go Anna and I am going to the park just wanted 你 to know that I was sorry”.

CH5 THE PARK
“It’s so beautiful out to 日 isn’t Hannah”!”Yes I think it is I miss going out to the park with you”.”Yeah me to I wish we can do this 更多 often”. Anna and me are talking about what fun times we had out at the park. Then I hear a rumbling noise going from my left then I can smell gun-powder.”GET DOWN ANNA”! I ran as fast as I could to two little kids playing with a ball. BOOM, BOOM, BOOM. Shots were fired then I could hear Anna yelling to me.” THERE GOING TO GET AWAY”.” not if I can help it”. I jumped though benches and play-ground areas, I made a huge leap on 最佳, 返回页首 of the car with the 枪 punched the gun-men, went inside and killed both the driver and passenger. Fell on the ground not knowing if I was dead 或者 not. Screams filled the air, blood everywhere, and people rushing to my side to help me up. Right in the distant I see Doc come running at me just then I past out. I wake up in the hospital with doctors all around me.” what happened”.”You saved a lot of lives and past out from all the blood”. I thought for a moment to think of what had happen.” Oh my gosh, who all saw”.” Don’t worries no one saw 你 didn’t even turn”. The doctor comes in,”you have 迷失 a lot of blood and we found some bullets in your arm but you’ll be ok”. Doc comes over with a little cut with a lid on it with 5 bullets in It.” wow I had no idea it was that much”. The doctor left and the two little girls that I saved came over with a box.” Here for saving our lives we didn’t know what to get”. “Aw well thank 你 I really appreciate this”. I open the box and inside was this little 项链 that glows in the dark.” Thanks so much 你 don’t know how much I 爱情 this”.” Your welcome” the two little girls 说 at the same time. Doc and I go back to the lab and he looks at the 项链 then he put it on my neck and says “now I know when it’s 你 during a full moon”.” 你 were strong and 你 can really take a punch”. “Thanks”.” We are reporting here live from Georgia Macon, sweetLy can 你 tell us 更多 the news reporter says”. “All I saw was my friend told me to get down then I heard gun-shots I look over to the car that had 枪 on it and their blood everywhere and I stay where I was till someone got me up”.” Thanks for the info can 你 tell us who this person was”.” Hannah Hindi she’s a friend from school”. I grab the remote because I didn’t want to hear anymore”.

Ch6 polices
“Anna I hope she is all right”.” Anna she told on you”. Wait I hear something”. I could hear Poilce about a few feet away.” They’re going to my house I’ve got to go”.” No you’re not going out there you’ll get killed”.” I have to if not then they’ll tear up my house and go though my stuff please I’ll fun though the trees they won’t notice me”.” Fine”. He had no chose to let me go 或者 not. Anyway I was in the woods running as fast as I can and caught up with the police. They didn’t tear up my house like I thought they would they just knocked went in and came out. I came back.” We have to tell Anna”.” Are 你 crazy if she knows she’ll tell everyone”.” No she will not I know her well than that she wouldn’t”.” I finally got Anna to the lab and witched freaked her out.” Anna sit down”.” What happen at the park how did 你 know that the gun was going to shoot”?” Anna listen very carefully what happen at the park that I could smell gun powder and when I leaped on the car that’s because I’m a werewolf”.” What, how, why didn’t 你 tell me, when did this happen”?” I drank chemicals that somehow turn me into a werewolf and I didn’t tell 你 because I didn’t want 你 to run away 或者 laugh, but I’m still learning about it”.” Oh Hannah I would never ever do anything like that, come here”. We both hug and waited for the news about me killing people to die down and went of with our lives.
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