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This is a response to the link. If 你 disagree with this article, instead of leaving pointless hate-spam, which is just a waste of time, please explain why 你 don’t like it, 或者 any points I got wrong.

“The story is written compellingly enough that a wide body of readers is able to fit into the persona of Bella and 爱情 Edward.”
I hate to break it to you, but that isn’t a result of good writing. It’s quite the opposite, actually. Bella is a very one-dimensional character. She has no real hobbies, defining character traits, 或者 even any specific physical appearance, and because of the series being written in first person, it requires essentially no brainpower to imagine 你 are her. Simply put, she’s a Mary-Sue, and that’s a sign of bad writing.

“Edward himself is written as the most desirable guy on the face of the Earth. He has vampirically enhanced features that are model-perfect, even 更多 so. It’s not just his handsome face that is described in worshipful detail, but the sound of his voice, the feel of his cold and marble-hard skin, and even the smell of his breath. Adding in the fact that he possesses super speed, super strength, immortality, and the ability to read the minds of almost everyone but Bella herself and he seems like a godly personification.”
How could I forget? Meyer reminds us almost every paragraph Edward is present. Yet again, a sign of bad writing.

He is a vampire, which means he constantly feels the desire to eat people, Bella in particular.
This is not a flaw until something bad comes of it. There is a rule in literature known as “show, don’t tell.” Now, Meyer has obviously never heard of this because we usually get either get “tell (x), 显示 nothing,” 或者 “tell (x), 显示 (y).” While Edward constantly says he’s dangerous, wants to eat Bella, and could kill her any second, he never acts on it. If he accidentally hurt her 或者 tried to drink her blood, I would count this as a flaw, however, he doesn’t. He always shows perfect self control.
I do not count (1) his thoughts at the beginning of Midnight Sun because that is, once again, telling, not showing, (2) him trying to drink Bella’s blood at the end of Twilight because he was trying to save her life and was able to stop very quickly, 或者 (3) the bruises he gave Bella during their honeymoon because he destroyed furniture instead of her, and bruises are not a serious/long-term injury.

“Bella, however, continues to pursue him and he changes his mind, deciding to indulge his obsessive inclinations 由 sneaking into her room at night to watch her sleep and covertly following her around, eventually seeking out a proper relationship.”
Unfortunately, the fact that Edward stalks Bella is somehow considered “romantic.” Words that come to my mind are “creepy,” “disgusting,” “sick,” “paedophilic” (he’s over 100 and she’s 17 = he’s a paedophile), etc. Take your pick.
This is an ENORMOUS flaw, and yet I feel I cannot count it. The 作者 does not consider this a flaw; therefore, it was not addressed as such. Characters need to work on their flaws throughout the book/series/movie/*insert form of storytelling here* in order for them to develop and grow. Edward doesn’t ever progress from this, as far as we know, and because this flaw doesn’t impede his character in any way (except for receiving a lot of hate from antis and members of Team Jacob), I will not count this as a flaw.

“What is attractive about Edward as a predatory vampire is, I believe, the dangerous power associated with the character and its potential to be used maliciously. There’s something enthralling about imagining myself in the position of Bella, infatuated with this dark, beautiful, and powerful man and knowing he could kill her should he lose willpower for just an instant.”
If Edward actually drank human blood I would accept this as a flaw, but since he has perfect control, this does not count.
Also, Bella is a masochist, and apparently 你 are too... I’m not entirely sure if that’s a good thing.

“Edward: And the lion fell in 爱情 with the lamb.
Bella: What a stupid lamb.
Edward: What a sick, masochistic lion!”

Now, 你 may have noticed my use of the word “masochistic” in the 前一个 statement. It is a prime example of Stephenie Meyer’s poor 写作 skills under the category us antis like to call ‘Thesaurus Rape.’
Masochism
mas•och•ism [mássə kìzzəm]
noun
1. sexual pleasure through humiliation: sexual gratification achieved through humiliation and physical and verbal abuse
2. psychological disorder: the psychological disorder in which somebody needs to be emotionally 或者 physically abused in order to be sexually satisfied
3. 搜索 for abusive sexual partners: the active seeking out of sexual partners who will dominate, humiliate, and physically and verbally abuse
4. enjoyment of hardship: the tendency to invite and enjoy misery of any kind, especially in order to be pitied 由 others 或者 admired for forbearance
Microsoft® Encarta® 2007. © 1993-2006 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved.

If this word was used to describe Bella, I wouldn’t even notice, however, Edward uses the word “masochistic” to describe himself. I don’t know about you, but I don’t think this is the proper 描述 of Edward, and Meyer needs to stop using big words that even she doesn’t understand.

“Jacob and Quil are not creepy pedophiles, but rather boys who feel the kind of 爱情 of an older family member feels toward their young imprintees. They’re like the model babysitters and preschool teachers who seriously 爱情 their kids and want to see them happy, albeit with their 爱情 situated on specific people. When the kids age to the point that the average adult would find them attractive, it can be assumed that the shapeshifters will want to pursue a romantic relationship, but at that point the playing field is pretty much level and age is no longer an issue.”
This is called child grooming, and it’s a form of paedophilia.
I’d also like to point out here that Jacob would (most probably) begin having sex with Renesmee when she reaches the age of 7. Now, while 你 may argue that she looks 17, firstly, that’s a stupid argument because she’s still underage, and secondly, it’s not about how old 你 look, it’s about how many years have passed since your birth. It is still paedophilia!

“In response to the common complaint that Twilight is written poorly, I would have to say that the concept of good literature is highly subjective.”
You’re confusing “quality of writing” with “entertainment value.” Twilight is full of grammatical errors, misuse of words, dry dialogue, repetitive and long-winded descriptions, etc. This is poor writing. Now, 你 may still find entertainment in a piece which is written poorly, just as 你 can find a well written book to be completely boring; that’s how it works. Enjoying something does not mean it’s automatically good. For example, I’m addicted to the TV 显示 ‘The Secret Life of the American Teenager.’ It’s my guilty pleasure. However, as I watch, I recognise that some of the actors are substandard, the plot is full of clichés, there are many cheesy lines, and whoever is editing this together is absolutely shocking, but that doesn’t mean I can’t like it, I still find it entertaining.
There are some pieces of classic literature which bore me to tears too, because everyone enjoys different things, but the quality of the 写作 is not completely dependent on the enjoyment someone gets from 阅读 it; it’s based on the technical aspects of the writing. Stephenie Meyer is not a good writer, that’s not an opinion, it’s a fact.

“Finally, I have read numerous blog 文章 criticizing 作者 Stephenie Meyer’s decision to incorporate religious themes and messages into the book series.”
I don’t have a problem with religious themes and messages in a book, but once male supremacy becomes one of those values promoted, I have to draw the line.

In conclusion, I find most of the hate against Twilight running rampant on the Internet to be overblown. Surely, Twilight is not the kind of epic, involved, and progressive story like Harry Potter 或者 Buffy the Vampire Slayer. However, for what it is, which is an intimate fantastical romance story that can be appreciated 由 a large quantity of people, it is of high enough quality to achieve high popularity. This should be respected even if the story doesn’t appeal to everyone.
If everyone knows Twilight is nowhere near the standard of Harry Potter, why does Breaking Dawn have “Move over Harry Potter” printed on the back? Twilight is what it is: a cheesy paranormal romance for teens. It’s not a saga, it’s not the best 爱情 story since Romeo and Juliet, it’s not well written. Now, 你 may see this “hate” as being overblown, but that’s what it looks like when lots of people all feel the same way about it, and I doubt it will stop until the Twilight fad dies down.

We're not on Team Tyler's 面包车, 范 for no reason.
Warning: Thist is just my 幻想 coming through. And some information to you; the story plays before Bella became a Vampire and there is no Nessie in sight. So its just for our little Jacob's sake, he needs some luving.

...and so the story goes on

Right into it
I was alive, 更多 than the past few months. I was able to sleep and 更多 important i was willing to face the world. And why? All happened two days ago, when i had only one wish: To forget. But instead of that, my pain got washed away 由 a human girl. I didnt know her name, and i wasnt sure if i ever got a chance ot find out.- but she was...
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She was 接吻 him back…

She kissed him back…

Did she really?

No….

NO!!!!!!!

I covered my eyes with my trembling fists then moved to cover my ears and tried to muffle the agonized howling.

You were the one howling idiot!

I shut my mouth and squeezed my eyes shut as my body convulsed with pain. Pain like I never knew before.

Damn it! This is too much.

I gritted my teeth as a tortured moan escaped my lips.

“Jake!” Nessie gasped. She stepped away from him and tentatively walked towards me.

I took a deep breath and counted up to sixty before I looked up to her. I was on my knees on the ground....
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All right, if 你 have read the series and 爱情 them. Then 你 will absoultly 爱情 the series called

The Mortal Insruments
由 Cassandra Clare

link

If 你 want to skip this and just read the summary just scroll to the bottom, I took quite a lot of time 写作 this!

"The Mortal Instruments series is a story world that I 爱情 to live in. I hate to see the story end, but if it has to end, then City of Glass is the most perfect way for that to happen. Beautiful!"

– Stephenie Meyer, internationally bestselling 作者 of TWILIGHT-

-and it is also alike Twilight; hot main guy: named Jace Wayland...
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posted by kristine_cullen
Warning: This is just coming from me, and was done out of boredom and maybe some motivation. Its just a fiction, so nothing is real. So dont be upset if 你 wont find Bella in that story, it wouldnt make sense otherwise. Enjoy.

SideNote: I know that Edward isnt as straight 前锋, 期待 in the books, and in the 下一个 chapter he will change. I just wanted Ashley to fall in 爱情 with him for the right reasons, instead of being obsessed.

Waking up didnt feel right, being here was somehow strange. I sat up in my bed, stretching and tried to remember what had happened last night. Letting out some low sigh,...
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As I was going 首页 I suddenly was hit 由 the reality that I really was going to be a mother... a mom at last.
A mother wow... I thought to myself. I'm going to be responsible for someone. I shook that thought out of my head quickly, since I had always been a clutz like my mom. I mean what if I accidently hurt my unborn baby, I thought to myself before quickly shaking that thought off too.
It was 6 a.m. and I had just awoken to discover Jacob sitting at the foot of my bed. Jacob... I began- I need to tell 你 something I'm...I'm... Pregnant. "Thats great", he replied to me reaching up to stroke my growing stomach. "How far along are you?", he asks me. "I'm 3 months now Jake but... the baby's not yours.", I tell him... he slaps me and gathers all his things and bolts out the door leaving me to face reality i]alone.[/i]
posted by just_bella
I am horribly addicted to 写作 this, it's so much fun and interesting to write. I hope 你 guys enjoy this chapter:
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Quick refresher:

I need to go now, the lights are coming back on. I will try hiding my book better this time so that no one will find it and take it away. I need this, this is my only lifeline right now."

The last paragraph was slightly smudged, I ran my finger over the spot when I realized what would have made the ink run. I sat there staring at the tear marks realizing that my 心 was breaking twice. Once when I wrote it,...
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I stared at my tiny room’s ceiling. The paint is starting to peel off and Dad’s been bugging me to work on it. I don’t want to. I just wanted to lie in 床, 床上 and do nothing. Do nothing but think of her, dream of her.

Once again, her beautiful face flashed before my eyes…

“D-do 你 want me to l-leave? So 你 could be free?” She asked brokenly.

I winced at the memory of her lovely face torn with pain. That look on her face haunted me for months now.

“Do 你 want me to haul your stupid butt out of this room, Jacob Black?” Leah growled from the doorway.

I glared at her.

“Get lost, Leah.”...
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“Vincent Salvatori asked about you.” Jenny 说 as I joined her for lunch today.

“Who?”

“The recluse. He introduced himself to me during class.” I decided to ditch class this morning. I don’t want to spend an 小时 and a half beside arrogant Vincent Salvatori.

“I told him 你 overslept.” Her eyes narrowed as she took in my bloodshot puffy eyes. “Care to explain to me what last night’s sobbing was about.”

“Some other time, Jen. Don’t want to talk about it.” I murmured then picked up my cup of coffee and took a sip.

“Okay….Listen, do 你 want to go to Jessie’s for...
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“Don’t 你 really want to go?” Jenny asked. All freshmen were invited to attend an acquaintance party that will be held in the gym.

“I don’t feel like partying, Jen.”

“Come on, Nessie. It would be fun. Don’t tell me you’re still mad at me?”

I sighed. I am not mad, just annoyed out of my wits. I still can’t believe Jenny had pulled that cheap stunt in the cafeteria during lunch.

* * *

We were looking for a table, carrying our tray when she started babbling about her misery about her boyfriend Paul. He still hadn’t called her. I was thinking of something to say to soothe her...
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His penetrating gaze made me shiver, a mixture of fear and anticipation. Anticipation for what would happen next, now that he’s finally shown himself. Shown me that he is real - TOO REAL.

My nightmares didn’t give his ethereal face justice. His light hair shone like spun gold, his brows were arched aristocratically, his nose perfectly sculpted, his full lips almost femininely enticing. I saved the best for Last – his eyes. They were like blue fire.

Never have I seen such an enigmatic beautiful face. There is an air of arrogance around him. Yet somehow, he seemed melancholic, quiet, and...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
The 下一个 日 Jacob and I went to the store and bought everything that was 破烂, 垃圾 food. Then we went to a movie store and got The Covenant, Sweeny Todd, and The Messenger. “Hey Jake what about 面包车, 范 Helsing?” I 说 trying to lighten up the mood. I looked over at him and he just stared blankly. “Chill, I was kidding.” He had gotten so serious and worried about me, I just missed seeing his big smile that showed all his snowy white teeth. We got 首页 and dumped every thing on the living room 表 and slipped in The Covenant. We wat ched every one of them. Suddenly I stood up forceful and...
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posted by iluvtwilight123
Grandpa Carlilse came over to the house with all his equipment, then my Uncles and Aunts came. " Honey are 你 ok?" Aunt Rosalie asked and she started to touch my face.
I didn't say anything i was cradled like a baby in my father's arms. I couldn't speak i only coughed and sneezed a few times. " She is just stunned. Remember her old friend on the island well she had a dream that he bit here and killed Jacob." Dad 说 swiftly. Tears started to trickle down my face and when he 说 Jacob it rang a 钟, 贝尔 in my head. " Dad i need to see Jacob. Please let me go i need to see if he's ok!" I struggled...
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I'm sorry this took so long but i have soooo much homework. the 下一个 one might not be out till 下一个 week because thats when my holidays start. i will keep going though even if its not updated for a while (my internet connection is a little bit dodgy).



Demetri left us in the reception area with Gianna, who was sitting behind her highly polished desk. She really was very good at her job. She still retained her detached look even with her curiosity as strong as it was.
Demetri was anxious to get back to the feast. “Do not leave until dark.”
I nodded, and Demetri quickly hurried away.
I focused...
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posted by twilight-7
Guys, I'm really sorry this chapter took so long to be 发布 but my internet decided to take a holiday last wednesday and came back today. So for that I'm posting two chapters on.
Enjoy.









I woke in the morning alone. I wasn’t surprised. Edward wouldn’t have come back in case Charlie decided to pop his head around the door. I wondered if Charlie hadn’t come to my room, how far would Edward have gone. I was pondering this while I looked for some breakfast. Charlie had gone to work early. Someone needed to speak to him at the station. He was running around in a rush and looked kind of panicked....
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posted by ktbminnie12
Edward's POV

*30 分钟 later*
“So what does this mean, Alice?” I asked.
“I don’t know. Let’s just go back downstairs and see if the 狼 are here. Maybe that’s why I can’t see the party. If anything new happens, then I’ll let 你 know. I promise,” she 说 heading out the door.
    The whole family was gathered in Carlisle’s study, talking about the sudden disappearance of the party.
“Okay,” I said. I headed down the stairs. The first thing I did was look for Bella. I got down to where I left her. She wasn’t there. I walked to the 厨房 to see...
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posted by sh0rtiinedward
i hope 你 like it am working on it
and am working on the 标题 if 你 have a good one please tell me!!!!!!!


i was pretty sure that since the horrific experience with the voltuary, our happy ever after will begin but something strange is happening to me i been having visions and this is very weird, because the vision thing is Alice's jOb not mine, but what i realize is that maybe are just memories from my human life, so this doesn't bothers me anymore.
What i have to do is take care of my little 天使 and don't worry abOut this stupid visions.
im planning to spend 更多 time with Nessi, she just...
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posted by twilight_unite
!!!!!!ATTENTION ALL TWILIGHT FANS!!!!!!
If 你 are a MAJOR 或者 just a 粉丝 of Stephanie Meyer's most 流行的 Twilight Saga then pay attention.

On youtube.com there is a video of Stephanie being interviewed.She is going to 发布 Midnight Sun.If 你 have read her draft of Midnight Sun 或者 even if 你 haven't then 你 can right how 你 think it should be.She wants to see what her 粉丝 (aka- Us)think.And she also beleives that if we have a story in us then we should write it out and 显示 evryone what we're capable of.

-twilight_unite-(MAJOR 粉丝 OF TWILIGHT SAGA)
posted by just_bella
OK, quick recap:

"Benjamin, would 你 and Emmett please gather the remains of the 羊 and put them in the small 谷仓 until after lunch?" He 说 as he lead the way into the house.

We made our way to the first animal that the children had found. I picked the poor beast up in my arms, attempting to keep the blood from getting on my clothing. I made my way over to the smaller of the barns as Ben turned to go to the field in 搜索 of other casualties.

We managed to collected all 3 sheep, and made our way back to the house without ruining our clothing, and hopefully before all the lunch was gone....
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posted by Yoss
Chapter 5 – Plans

I woke up screaming. It felt like I have screamed my lungs out. My throat felt raw. I sat up and wiped my tears away with my 最喜爱的 blanket – a gift from Grandmother Renee. She was told the whole adoption “press release, “of course. That was a few years back when the rest of my family was convinced that it was 安全 to finally meet her. That was the 年 I stopped aging.

I realized my whole body was covered with sweat. I got up from bed, intending to take a cold shower. That’s when I saw my 最喜爱的 photograph lying face down on the floor. I picked it up and found...
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posted by Yoss
Chapter 3 - The Gazebo

My feet planted noiselessly on the warm green grass. The light that was shining on my face a while 以前 was the sun. The sky was clear blue, a rare event for Forks.

I stared around me – no gaped would be the perfect word to describe what I’m doing right now. Where am I? I’m sure I’m not in our cottage 或者 at the Cullen Mansion. This place is definitely not La Push. Could this place truly exist? Could I still be in Forks?

I noticed that the 床, 床上 I was sleeping on a couple of 秒 以前 was a different one. I frowned, there is no way that this magnificent 床, 床上 fit for...
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