Sorry if the chapters come a little slow. Right now I'm traveling so... well 你 know how things are. haha
I have gotten a suggestion to make the story have 更多 emotion and action so I am going to try and add some of that. Hope it's good!
Disclamer: I....... do not............. own.......... Twilight......... 或者 any of its characters. Stephanie meyer does.
(I wish I did though) :(
One night it got bad so Zach invited me to go hunting with him. I was trying not to think of him So I distracted myself 由 focusing on my prey. A fully grown mountain lion. I lunged for it and drained it.I hadn't even noticed the hiker watching me untill it was to late. I had let our secret slip to a human! How could I have been so careless?
I quickly killed him but knew deep down that there would be a punishment for breaking the most important rule even though the human no longer lives.
Bella POV
I didn't want to kill the poor human and the 秒 I snapped his neck I felt a pang of guilt.
"I know it's hard Bella. That's one of the reasons that 你 are a vegetarian, but if 你 hadn't done it then Aro would have and then he would have suffered a 更多 painful death."
说 Zach, seeming to have seen the extra emptiness in my eyes. I looked at him and forced a smile.
"That's true. I suppose it was for the better but I still feel guilty. If I had been paying attention-"
Zach interupted me, "No! If we had been paying attention, then this wouldn't have happened. I am just as much of fault. I didn't notice him either."
Sigh.....
"Oh and I suggest we get out of here." he continued, "The volturi will be coming soon and I personally don't feel like dying today if that's what I even do."
"'kay let's go." I said.
Personally I don't care if the volturi find me. I'd rather be dead anyway. But I do have to protect Zach. He won't leave without me. He cares to much.
I feel a little bad. I have been with him now for about a 月 and a half and I can tell he likes me but I can't give him what he wants. My 心 is already taken.
We ran for about 2 hours but then had to stop and hunt. We didn't get to finish what we started because of our little run in with the human.
So after about three deer and a 熊 I was ready to go. I walked back to were I told Zach we would meet up after hunting but he wasn't there.
About an 小时 passed and still no Zach. I decided to go out and look for him. I soon came across his scent and followed it."AHHHH!"
ZACH! It was Zach's scream. I started running and about a 分钟 later I saw him. He was lying on the ground, dead. 下一个 to his corps were three men. Correction, three vampires. I froze in shock. My best friend!
"Who are you? Why did 你 kill him?" I shouted at them.
The one on the right with long, blond hair answered, "You have broken a rule so 你 must be punished. We are members of the volturi coven," he pointed to himself and the girl in the middle. "My name is Alec and this is Jane. Our leader here is Aro." He pointed to the tall man with black hair on the end.
"I've heard of you." I said.
"Oh well then, I guess we don't need to explain why we are here 或者 what our powers are." 说 Aro
"Let's just get this over with!" 说 the girl who is named Jane.
"One moment. I would like to know a little about her first." Aro 说 as he grabbed my hand.
Zach had told me about Aro's power to read minds and see into your past so I just let him look.
Good luck trying to see anything. I have my shield up and there's no way 你 are breaking it down!
There is no need to let anyone see into my past at my hurt. "hm... interesting," he mumbled. "I cannot read your thoughts. How is that possible. 你 seem to be immune to my gift.......................... I wonder, Jane dear. Shal we see if she is immune to your power as well."
Jane stepped forward, "we shal," she 说 then looked into my eyes. Suddenly I felt a sharp stabbing pain trying to penitrate my shield. Jane took another step 前锋, 期待 as she tried to push her power even harder. "It won't work," I said.
"Why is that? Alec?" asked Aro
"I'll try..." 说 Alec and I felt another sharp pain in my shield.
"Ahahahaha PERFECT!" Exclaimed Aro.
"Just get my punishment over already! Kill me!" I finally said. I can't take this anymore! Just kill me!
Aro spoke again, "My dear-"
I interupted him again. "Bella" he abviously didn't know my name.
"Bella," he repeated, "You broke the most important law of our kind but I am willing to oversee that if 你 are willing to 加入 us."
"But she must be killed! 你 know what she did!" yelled Alec and Jane together.
"True.... Well let's go back 首页 and we will talk about it. Here is not the right place." Aro replyed calmly.
Alec and Jane started running and Aro encouraged me to follow. "Let me say goodbye." I said. With that I bent down and kneeled 下一个 to Zach.
"Zach," I started, not even caring that Aro was listening, "I am so sorry I let this happen to you. 你 never should have befriended me. 你 took me in when I was broken and helped me learn to use my powers. But most importantly, 你 gave me a friend. 你 were the only one I could trust. Everyone else has abandoned me. I 爱情 you, like a brother. Goodbye." On the outside I probably looked like my empty lifeless self but on the inside I was breaking.
"Ok I'm ready." I 说 and started running in the direction that Alec and Jane had ran. I caught their scent and ran up to them. They were easy to catch with the speed I was able to run at. Aro was still far behind me.
I ran up beside Jane and she looked at me and slowed a little in surprise, I shot right past her but then started to slow back down to her pase, fore I do not know where I was suppose to go.
Ok this was short but I had to go. I promis that I will try to make the 下一个 chapter longer. 评论 always help!
Rate and Review please!
;)
I have gotten a suggestion to make the story have 更多 emotion and action so I am going to try and add some of that. Hope it's good!
Disclamer: I....... do not............. own.......... Twilight......... 或者 any of its characters. Stephanie meyer does.
(I wish I did though) :(
One night it got bad so Zach invited me to go hunting with him. I was trying not to think of him So I distracted myself 由 focusing on my prey. A fully grown mountain lion. I lunged for it and drained it.I hadn't even noticed the hiker watching me untill it was to late. I had let our secret slip to a human! How could I have been so careless?
I quickly killed him but knew deep down that there would be a punishment for breaking the most important rule even though the human no longer lives.
Bella POV
I didn't want to kill the poor human and the 秒 I snapped his neck I felt a pang of guilt.
"I know it's hard Bella. That's one of the reasons that 你 are a vegetarian, but if 你 hadn't done it then Aro would have and then he would have suffered a 更多 painful death."
说 Zach, seeming to have seen the extra emptiness in my eyes. I looked at him and forced a smile.
"That's true. I suppose it was for the better but I still feel guilty. If I had been paying attention-"
Zach interupted me, "No! If we had been paying attention, then this wouldn't have happened. I am just as much of fault. I didn't notice him either."
Sigh.....
"Oh and I suggest we get out of here." he continued, "The volturi will be coming soon and I personally don't feel like dying today if that's what I even do."
"'kay let's go." I said.
Personally I don't care if the volturi find me. I'd rather be dead anyway. But I do have to protect Zach. He won't leave without me. He cares to much.
I feel a little bad. I have been with him now for about a 月 and a half and I can tell he likes me but I can't give him what he wants. My 心 is already taken.
We ran for about 2 hours but then had to stop and hunt. We didn't get to finish what we started because of our little run in with the human.
So after about three deer and a 熊 I was ready to go. I walked back to were I told Zach we would meet up after hunting but he wasn't there.
About an 小时 passed and still no Zach. I decided to go out and look for him. I soon came across his scent and followed it."AHHHH!"
ZACH! It was Zach's scream. I started running and about a 分钟 later I saw him. He was lying on the ground, dead. 下一个 to his corps were three men. Correction, three vampires. I froze in shock. My best friend!
"Who are you? Why did 你 kill him?" I shouted at them.
The one on the right with long, blond hair answered, "You have broken a rule so 你 must be punished. We are members of the volturi coven," he pointed to himself and the girl in the middle. "My name is Alec and this is Jane. Our leader here is Aro." He pointed to the tall man with black hair on the end.
"I've heard of you." I said.
"Oh well then, I guess we don't need to explain why we are here 或者 what our powers are." 说 Aro
"Let's just get this over with!" 说 the girl who is named Jane.
"One moment. I would like to know a little about her first." Aro 说 as he grabbed my hand.
Zach had told me about Aro's power to read minds and see into your past so I just let him look.
Good luck trying to see anything. I have my shield up and there's no way 你 are breaking it down!
There is no need to let anyone see into my past at my hurt. "hm... interesting," he mumbled. "I cannot read your thoughts. How is that possible. 你 seem to be immune to my gift.......................... I wonder, Jane dear. Shal we see if she is immune to your power as well."
Jane stepped forward, "we shal," she 说 then looked into my eyes. Suddenly I felt a sharp stabbing pain trying to penitrate my shield. Jane took another step 前锋, 期待 as she tried to push her power even harder. "It won't work," I said.
"Why is that? Alec?" asked Aro
"I'll try..." 说 Alec and I felt another sharp pain in my shield.
"Ahahahaha PERFECT!" Exclaimed Aro.
"Just get my punishment over already! Kill me!" I finally said. I can't take this anymore! Just kill me!
Aro spoke again, "My dear-"
I interupted him again. "Bella" he abviously didn't know my name.
"Bella," he repeated, "You broke the most important law of our kind but I am willing to oversee that if 你 are willing to 加入 us."
"But she must be killed! 你 know what she did!" yelled Alec and Jane together.
"True.... Well let's go back 首页 and we will talk about it. Here is not the right place." Aro replyed calmly.
Alec and Jane started running and Aro encouraged me to follow. "Let me say goodbye." I said. With that I bent down and kneeled 下一个 to Zach.
"Zach," I started, not even caring that Aro was listening, "I am so sorry I let this happen to you. 你 never should have befriended me. 你 took me in when I was broken and helped me learn to use my powers. But most importantly, 你 gave me a friend. 你 were the only one I could trust. Everyone else has abandoned me. I 爱情 you, like a brother. Goodbye." On the outside I probably looked like my empty lifeless self but on the inside I was breaking.
"Ok I'm ready." I 说 and started running in the direction that Alec and Jane had ran. I caught their scent and ran up to them. They were easy to catch with the speed I was able to run at. Aro was still far behind me.
I ran up beside Jane and she looked at me and slowed a little in surprise, I shot right past her but then started to slow back down to her pase, fore I do not know where I was suppose to go.
Ok this was short but I had to go. I promis that I will try to make the 下一个 chapter longer. 评论 always help!
Rate and Review please!
;)
Hey,
Sorry i haven't wrote in a while it's just that i think people dont like my stories and i dont want to write things for no reason.
I just think it's better this way and i might start again but dont count on it. i know 你 guys are gonna be mad but i dont think that i'm gonna write anymore cause i'm not any good:(
Sorry again!!
If 你 want 你 can give me ideas that 你 have and ill make a story for 你 but thats 'bout the only way that i'll be 写作 stories.
Sorry,
Bella_Cullen902
Sorry i haven't wrote in a while it's just that i think people dont like my stories and i dont want to write things for no reason.
I just think it's better this way and i might start again but dont count on it. i know 你 guys are gonna be mad but i dont think that i'm gonna write anymore cause i'm not any good:(
Sorry again!!
If 你 want 你 can give me ideas that 你 have and ill make a story for 你 but thats 'bout the only way that i'll be 写作 stories.
Sorry,
Bella_Cullen902
Last one for today. ^_^
Jasper's Pov
"What's wrong Alice?"
Alice looked as if she were faint 或者 something.
"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"
I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.
"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"
"Why would I want to help you?! 你 tortured me once already!"
"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"
"I don't think I should tell them 或者 should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"
"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.
Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.
Jasper's Pov
"What's wrong Alice?"
Alice looked as if she were faint 或者 something.
"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"
I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.
"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"
"Why would I want to help you?! 你 tortured me once already!"
"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"
"I don't think I should tell them 或者 should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"
"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.
Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.
This was short for a reason. CLIFFHANGER!!! hehehehehe......
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black 城堡 to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black 城堡 to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
I confuse Sunrise with
the Twilight
A Start Ends
an ending begins
She changed my life
my dead heartbeat
my 《冰雪奇缘》 heart
She made them Hers
with her sweet flying heartbeat,
her honey gaze
she makes me 爱情 Her face
and the moonlight does not compare Her
I want her Forever
not to 移动 on
to stay here, in the
Dead Moonlight
But I Can't
the sunrise came
and we have no choice back
P.S this time i tried as hard as i could!i work it from the morning!i hope 你 like it!it is a bit sad but it is the best i can do!
the Twilight
A Start Ends
an ending begins
She changed my life
my dead heartbeat
my 《冰雪奇缘》 heart
She made them Hers
with her sweet flying heartbeat,
her honey gaze
she makes me 爱情 Her face
and the moonlight does not compare Her
I want her Forever
not to 移动 on
to stay here, in the
Dead Moonlight
But I Can't
the sunrise came
and we have no choice back
P.S this time i tried as hard as i could!i work it from the morning!i hope 你 like it!it is a bit sad but it is the best i can do!
EDWARD'S 豌豆 COAT
''Everybody wants to know where his 豌豆 涂层, 外套 came from!'' exclaims the costumer. Unfortunately, it is a one-of-a-kind piece (er, sort of: three to four were made for filming purposes) which Chuck herself crafted after not being able to find the perfect one. ''We needed the right fit, [and] I couldn't find anything in the right shade of gray,'' she recalls. ''Catherine [Hardwicke, the director] is really big on back story for her characters and anything that can help that, even if it's in a texture 或者 color of clothes.'' After considering ''probably 20 swatches,'' Chuck went with one from Mood Fabrics and based her final 设计 on a combination of other styles of 豌豆 coats. In the end, his turned out as ''a classic shape with a modern twist.''
''Everybody wants to know where his 豌豆 涂层, 外套 came from!'' exclaims the costumer. Unfortunately, it is a one-of-a-kind piece (er, sort of: three to four were made for filming purposes) which Chuck herself crafted after not being able to find the perfect one. ''We needed the right fit, [and] I couldn't find anything in the right shade of gray,'' she recalls. ''Catherine [Hardwicke, the director] is really big on back story for her characters and anything that can help that, even if it's in a texture 或者 color of clothes.'' After considering ''probably 20 swatches,'' Chuck went with one from Mood Fabrics and based her final 设计 on a combination of other styles of 豌豆 coats. In the end, his turned out as ''a classic shape with a modern twist.''
你 are my life sence
before you, my life was
a story without tense
yOU are the sweetest dream,
my nigh't's lullaby,
my only dream.
my only heartbeat
Bels,your sweet gaze
Cuts like a 刀 into the haze
I’d let 你 push me, make me frown
coz 你 are the most important thing
Your force of will now made unbound
YOUr 浓情巧克力 eyes,
can take me higher,
你 are the rason for me
你 are my light in the twilight
my light love
p.s : 嘿 guys!i like very much 写作 but i don't be a good poet!don't be mean with me!i hope 你 like it!
before you, my life was
a story without tense
yOU are the sweetest dream,
my nigh't's lullaby,
my only dream.
my only heartbeat
Bels,your sweet gaze
Cuts like a 刀 into the haze
I’d let 你 push me, make me frown
coz 你 are the most important thing
Your force of will now made unbound
YOUr 浓情巧克力 eyes,
can take me higher,
你 are the rason for me
你 are my light in the twilight
my light love
p.s : 嘿 guys!i like very much 写作 but i don't be a good poet!don't be mean with me!i hope 你 like it!
The Couples
Edward and Bella
Alice and Jasper
Emmett and Rosalie
Carlisle and Esme
Ashley and Kevin
Sonny and Joe
Selena and Nick
Lily and Mitchell
The first chapter will be 发布 soon.
PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE CCCCCCOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEENNNNNTTTTT AAAAANNNNNDDDDD RRRRRAAAAATTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please I know the trailor is long but it is finished.It had a lot of complications that I wanted to explain so 你 understood what was happening .Please tell me if 你 think it is good.
Edward and Bella
Alice and Jasper
Emmett and Rosalie
Carlisle and Esme
Ashley and Kevin
Sonny and Joe
Selena and Nick
Lily and Mitchell
The first chapter will be 发布 soon.
PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE CCCCCCOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEENNNNNTTTTT AAAAANNNNNDDDDD RRRRRAAAAATTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please I know the trailor is long but it is finished.It had a lot of complications that I wanted to explain so 你 understood what was happening .Please tell me if 你 think it is good.
These are the rest of the characters.
Lily Troscout a.k.a Lily Troscout
Jason Dolley,Jason Earle,and Mitchell Musso
Mitchell is with Lily.
David and Daniel Azel
Donna Azel is married to Chris Brown so she is Donna Brown.
Tiffany Thornton,Claire Thornton,and The Thornton Quints
Peter and Simon Azel
Ritchie and Marcia Thornton
The 下一个 one will be the family and friends.
I will make the 下一个 one really long.I wrote it in my book it is 3 pages but I am still not finished.
PLEASE COMMENT,RATE,AND GET PEOPLE TO READ AND DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lily Troscout a.k.a Lily Troscout
Jason Dolley,Jason Earle,and Mitchell Musso
Mitchell is with Lily.
David and Daniel Azel
Donna Azel is married to Chris Brown so she is Donna Brown.
Tiffany Thornton,Claire Thornton,and The Thornton Quints
Peter and Simon Azel
Ritchie and Marcia Thornton
The 下一个 one will be the family and friends.
I will make the 下一个 one really long.I wrote it in my book it is 3 pages but I am still not finished.
PLEASE COMMENT,RATE,AND GET PEOPLE TO READ AND DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
10. Ask about Mike.
9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that 你 and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her 你 are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
Source: link
9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that 你 and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her 你 are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
Source: link
10. Take her credit cards and shopping vouchers, hold them above your head and tell her to “jump for it”.
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever 你 can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When 你 go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what 你 will be doing in five 分钟 every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. 电子邮箱 her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
Source: link
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever 你 can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When 你 go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what 你 will be doing in five 分钟 every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. 电子邮箱 her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
Source: link