Sorry if the chapters come a little slow. Right now I'm traveling so... well 你 know how things are. haha
I have gotten a suggestion to make the story have 更多 emotion and action so I am going to try and add some of that. Hope it's good!
Disclamer: I....... do not............. own.......... Twilight......... 或者 any of its characters. Stephanie meyer does.
(I wish I did though) :(
One night it got bad so Zach invited me to go hunting with him. I was trying not to think of him So I distracted myself 由 focusing on my prey. A fully grown mountain lion. I lunged for it and drained it.I hadn't even noticed the hiker watching me untill it was to late. I had let our secret slip to a human! How could I have been so careless?
I quickly killed him but knew deep down that there would be a punishment for breaking the most important rule even though the human no longer lives.
Bella POV
I didn't want to kill the poor human and the 秒 I snapped his neck I felt a pang of guilt.
"I know it's hard Bella. That's one of the reasons that 你 are a vegetarian, but if 你 hadn't done it then Aro would have and then he would have suffered a 更多 painful death."
说 Zach, seeming to have seen the extra emptiness in my eyes. I looked at him and forced a smile.
"That's true. I suppose it was for the better but I still feel guilty. If I had been paying attention-"
Zach interupted me, "No! If we had been paying attention, then this wouldn't have happened. I am just as much of fault. I didn't notice him either."
Sigh.....
"Oh and I suggest we get out of here." he continued, "The volturi will be coming soon and I personally don't feel like dying today if that's what I even do."
"'kay let's go." I said.
Personally I don't care if the volturi find me. I'd rather be dead anyway. But I do have to protect Zach. He won't leave without me. He cares to much.
I feel a little bad. I have been with him now for about a 月 and a half and I can tell he likes me but I can't give him what he wants. My 心 is already taken.
We ran for about 2 hours but then had to stop and hunt. We didn't get to finish what we started because of our little run in with the human.
So after about three deer and a 熊 I was ready to go. I walked back to were I told Zach we would meet up after hunting but he wasn't there.
About an 小时 passed and still no Zach. I decided to go out and look for him. I soon came across his scent and followed it."AHHHH!"
ZACH! It was Zach's scream. I started running and about a 分钟 later I saw him. He was lying on the ground, dead. 下一个 to his corps were three men. Correction, three vampires. I froze in shock. My best friend!
"Who are you? Why did 你 kill him?" I shouted at them.
The one on the right with long, blond hair answered, "You have broken a rule so 你 must be punished. We are members of the volturi coven," he pointed to himself and the girl in the middle. "My name is Alec and this is Jane. Our leader here is Aro." He pointed to the tall man with black hair on the end.
"I've heard of you." I said.
"Oh well then, I guess we don't need to explain why we are here 或者 what our powers are." 说 Aro
"Let's just get this over with!" 说 the girl who is named Jane.
"One moment. I would like to know a little about her first." Aro 说 as he grabbed my hand.
Zach had told me about Aro's power to read minds and see into your past so I just let him look.
Good luck trying to see anything. I have my shield up and there's no way 你 are breaking it down!
There is no need to let anyone see into my past at my hurt. "hm... interesting," he mumbled. "I cannot read your thoughts. How is that possible. 你 seem to be immune to my gift.......................... I wonder, Jane dear. Shal we see if she is immune to your power as well."
Jane stepped forward, "we shal," she 说 then looked into my eyes. Suddenly I felt a sharp stabbing pain trying to penitrate my shield. Jane took another step 前锋, 期待 as she tried to push her power even harder. "It won't work," I said.
"Why is that? Alec?" asked Aro
"I'll try..." 说 Alec and I felt another sharp pain in my shield.
"Ahahahaha PERFECT!" Exclaimed Aro.
"Just get my punishment over already! Kill me!" I finally said. I can't take this anymore! Just kill me!
Aro spoke again, "My dear-"
I interupted him again. "Bella" he abviously didn't know my name.
"Bella," he repeated, "You broke the most important law of our kind but I am willing to oversee that if 你 are willing to 加入 us."
"But she must be killed! 你 know what she did!" yelled Alec and Jane together.
"True.... Well let's go back 首页 and we will talk about it. Here is not the right place." Aro replyed calmly.
Alec and Jane started running and Aro encouraged me to follow. "Let me say goodbye." I said. With that I bent down and kneeled 下一个 to Zach.
"Zach," I started, not even caring that Aro was listening, "I am so sorry I let this happen to you. 你 never should have befriended me. 你 took me in when I was broken and helped me learn to use my powers. But most importantly, 你 gave me a friend. 你 were the only one I could trust. Everyone else has abandoned me. I 爱情 you, like a brother. Goodbye." On the outside I probably looked like my empty lifeless self but on the inside I was breaking.
"Ok I'm ready." I 说 and started running in the direction that Alec and Jane had ran. I caught their scent and ran up to them. They were easy to catch with the speed I was able to run at. Aro was still far behind me.
I ran up beside Jane and she looked at me and slowed a little in surprise, I shot right past her but then started to slow back down to her pase, fore I do not know where I was suppose to go.
Ok this was short but I had to go. I promis that I will try to make the 下一个 chapter longer. 评论 always help!
Rate and Review please!
;)
I have gotten a suggestion to make the story have 更多 emotion and action so I am going to try and add some of that. Hope it's good!
Disclamer: I....... do not............. own.......... Twilight......... 或者 any of its characters. Stephanie meyer does.
(I wish I did though) :(
One night it got bad so Zach invited me to go hunting with him. I was trying not to think of him So I distracted myself 由 focusing on my prey. A fully grown mountain lion. I lunged for it and drained it.I hadn't even noticed the hiker watching me untill it was to late. I had let our secret slip to a human! How could I have been so careless?
I quickly killed him but knew deep down that there would be a punishment for breaking the most important rule even though the human no longer lives.
Bella POV
I didn't want to kill the poor human and the 秒 I snapped his neck I felt a pang of guilt.
"I know it's hard Bella. That's one of the reasons that 你 are a vegetarian, but if 你 hadn't done it then Aro would have and then he would have suffered a 更多 painful death."
说 Zach, seeming to have seen the extra emptiness in my eyes. I looked at him and forced a smile.
"That's true. I suppose it was for the better but I still feel guilty. If I had been paying attention-"
Zach interupted me, "No! If we had been paying attention, then this wouldn't have happened. I am just as much of fault. I didn't notice him either."
Sigh.....
"Oh and I suggest we get out of here." he continued, "The volturi will be coming soon and I personally don't feel like dying today if that's what I even do."
"'kay let's go." I said.
Personally I don't care if the volturi find me. I'd rather be dead anyway. But I do have to protect Zach. He won't leave without me. He cares to much.
I feel a little bad. I have been with him now for about a 月 and a half and I can tell he likes me but I can't give him what he wants. My 心 is already taken.
We ran for about 2 hours but then had to stop and hunt. We didn't get to finish what we started because of our little run in with the human.
So after about three deer and a 熊 I was ready to go. I walked back to were I told Zach we would meet up after hunting but he wasn't there.
About an 小时 passed and still no Zach. I decided to go out and look for him. I soon came across his scent and followed it."AHHHH!"
ZACH! It was Zach's scream. I started running and about a 分钟 later I saw him. He was lying on the ground, dead. 下一个 to his corps were three men. Correction, three vampires. I froze in shock. My best friend!
"Who are you? Why did 你 kill him?" I shouted at them.
The one on the right with long, blond hair answered, "You have broken a rule so 你 must be punished. We are members of the volturi coven," he pointed to himself and the girl in the middle. "My name is Alec and this is Jane. Our leader here is Aro." He pointed to the tall man with black hair on the end.
"I've heard of you." I said.
"Oh well then, I guess we don't need to explain why we are here 或者 what our powers are." 说 Aro
"Let's just get this over with!" 说 the girl who is named Jane.
"One moment. I would like to know a little about her first." Aro 说 as he grabbed my hand.
Zach had told me about Aro's power to read minds and see into your past so I just let him look.
Good luck trying to see anything. I have my shield up and there's no way 你 are breaking it down!
There is no need to let anyone see into my past at my hurt. "hm... interesting," he mumbled. "I cannot read your thoughts. How is that possible. 你 seem to be immune to my gift.......................... I wonder, Jane dear. Shal we see if she is immune to your power as well."
Jane stepped forward, "we shal," she 说 then looked into my eyes. Suddenly I felt a sharp stabbing pain trying to penitrate my shield. Jane took another step 前锋, 期待 as she tried to push her power even harder. "It won't work," I said.
"Why is that? Alec?" asked Aro
"I'll try..." 说 Alec and I felt another sharp pain in my shield.
"Ahahahaha PERFECT!" Exclaimed Aro.
"Just get my punishment over already! Kill me!" I finally said. I can't take this anymore! Just kill me!
Aro spoke again, "My dear-"
I interupted him again. "Bella" he abviously didn't know my name.
"Bella," he repeated, "You broke the most important law of our kind but I am willing to oversee that if 你 are willing to 加入 us."
"But she must be killed! 你 know what she did!" yelled Alec and Jane together.
"True.... Well let's go back 首页 and we will talk about it. Here is not the right place." Aro replyed calmly.
Alec and Jane started running and Aro encouraged me to follow. "Let me say goodbye." I said. With that I bent down and kneeled 下一个 to Zach.
"Zach," I started, not even caring that Aro was listening, "I am so sorry I let this happen to you. 你 never should have befriended me. 你 took me in when I was broken and helped me learn to use my powers. But most importantly, 你 gave me a friend. 你 were the only one I could trust. Everyone else has abandoned me. I 爱情 you, like a brother. Goodbye." On the outside I probably looked like my empty lifeless self but on the inside I was breaking.
"Ok I'm ready." I 说 and started running in the direction that Alec and Jane had ran. I caught their scent and ran up to them. They were easy to catch with the speed I was able to run at. Aro was still far behind me.
I ran up beside Jane and she looked at me and slowed a little in surprise, I shot right past her but then started to slow back down to her pase, fore I do not know where I was suppose to go.
Ok this was short but I had to go. I promis that I will try to make the 下一个 chapter longer. 评论 always help!
Rate and Review please!
;)
Hey, I'm typing away at 首页 while my dad takes Mom on an extensive trip to France! Jacob could hardly contain his excitement! Seriously, He's burst into a dog three times- oh, not again Jake! Four times. Anyways, whenever my parents are out, my dad posts up a 列表 of rules. Here's what he wrote.
Renesmee,
your mom and I are going to France. Do not take advantage of this with Jacob. Tell Alice where you're going, and DON'T go to La Push. Watch for bears, and don't go anywhere near the hunting zone. No 老友记 over later than 10:00PM unless it's Jacob(even then don't try anything funny.). Jacob is not allowed on your bed(and I don't care if he's in dog form.). Alice will come over to check in on 你 regularly, but call her if 你 need help.
-Dad
Ugh. As if Jake and I would do anything stupid. I think Jake was planning on that, though. Well, I hear Jake break something upstairs. I'm gonna see what he's up to. Later!
Renesmee,
your mom and I are going to France. Do not take advantage of this with Jacob. Tell Alice where you're going, and DON'T go to La Push. Watch for bears, and don't go anywhere near the hunting zone. No 老友记 over later than 10:00PM unless it's Jacob(even then don't try anything funny.). Jacob is not allowed on your bed(and I don't care if he's in dog form.). Alice will come over to check in on 你 regularly, but call her if 你 need help.
-Dad
Ugh. As if Jake and I would do anything stupid. I think Jake was planning on that, though. Well, I hear Jake break something upstairs. I'm gonna see what he's up to. Later!
-Edward-
As I placed Renesmee's hand in Jacob's, whispered to me, "Thank you."
That took me 由 surprise. As I took my 座位 下一个 Bella, she whispered, too low for the surrounding humans to hear, that she was proud of me.
When it was over, I was convinced myself and Bella had had a less melodramatic ceremony than this. Then again, perhaps it had been even 更多 so.
Alice had gone over-the-top with decorations, not that Renesmee minded. She was unlike Bella in that way. When it was my turn to dance with her, she whispered, "You'll still be my dad."
Again with the dramatics.
When it was Bella's turn, she let me see her thoughts. A special gift. I enjoyed hearing her thoughts.
"This bothers 你 更多 than you're letting on, Edward. Relax, let it go. She'll be fine," Bella said.
"You know me so well," I grinned at her before Emmett claimed her and I was forced to dance with Rosalie.
As I placed Renesmee's hand in Jacob's, whispered to me, "Thank you."
That took me 由 surprise. As I took my 座位 下一个 Bella, she whispered, too low for the surrounding humans to hear, that she was proud of me.
When it was over, I was convinced myself and Bella had had a less melodramatic ceremony than this. Then again, perhaps it had been even 更多 so.
Alice had gone over-the-top with decorations, not that Renesmee minded. She was unlike Bella in that way. When it was my turn to dance with her, she whispered, "You'll still be my dad."
Again with the dramatics.
When it was Bella's turn, she let me see her thoughts. A special gift. I enjoyed hearing her thoughts.
"This bothers 你 更多 than you're letting on, Edward. Relax, let it go. She'll be fine," Bella said.
"You know me so well," I grinned at her before Emmett claimed her and I was forced to dance with Rosalie.
