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 Commando Mike
Commando Mike
This story was inspired 由 a 粉丝 who sent me art work on my 脸谱 Page, Zoey Total Drama Revenge of the Island. Check it out if 你 have a Facebook. I hope 你 like this story. I might me rusty because I haven't written a story in so long, so enjoy. I also want to say about this story that Mike and Zoey are in college, but it's during the summer. Also, It's in short chapters
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Chapter 1
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It was just another 日 at the psychiatrist. Zoey was waiting for Mike to come out through the doors of the office. There was a part of her that was always worried, but another part of her that wasn't. Mike finally came out. Zoey stood up hoping for good news. "Hey, Zoey.". "Hey, Mike. I'm hoping for some good news,"Zoey replied. "You don't have to be worried my dear. Mike is fine, like always. I want to thank 你 again, Zoey. Ever since that 显示 你 and Mike were in, Mike's MPD has gotten a lot better," Lisa said. "Your welcome, doctor," Zoey responded.

The two of them walked out of the psychiatrists and went to hang out. They got into Zoey's red 可兑换, 可转换, 敞篷车 and drove off to the ice cream parlor. They headed in and got the town's best ice cream. They talked for about half an hour. That's when everything went berserk.

The doors slammed open and the room went quiet. A gang of guys, tall and sleek, walked in and over to Mike and Zoey. Of course, it was the one guy who got on both of their nerves. The same guy who turned the sweet, innocent girl into a choragus, wild chick, AKA Commando
Zoey."Well if it isn't the two loser, 爱情 birds,". It was Scott. Zoey almost got riled up, but Mike stopped her before she could.

"What do 你 want, Scott?" Mike asked angrily. "I just wanted to see my two best 老友记 in the world," Scott replied. Zoey was just about to say something when Scott dumped Mike's ice cream all over her. "Oh, I'm so sorry, Zoey. Let me help 你 clean off," Scott 说 as he dumped her water all over her. Him and his gang were laughing hard. At that point Zoey was soaking wet and super angry. She wanted to break Scott in half, but she needed Commando Zoey to do that. She hasn't been out since the show. She still wanted to know how he recovered from the 鲨鱼 attack, but that wasn't important right
now.

Zoey got up and looked Scott right in the eyes. To him, it looked like flames were shooting out from them, but he kept his cool. He insulted both of them any walked out. Everyone, then, just stared at Mike and Zoey. "I'll be right back," Zoey 说 and walked off to the bathroom to clean off. Mike sat there feeling hatred at Scott. for the both of them, and then felt the need to go do something. Mike stood up and out of the parlor. There, he saw Scott and his gang. Mike walked straight up to Scott and punched him right in the noes. He didn't know what he just did, but now he was afraid. All he knew at that point was Scott's nose was bleeding and he should run.

He started to run away, but one of Scott's guys caught him 由 the collar. He stared to pray and hope for help, but nothing happened. Mike was just about to be pulverized when a miracle happened. Zoey saw Mike in trouble and that's when she snapped. Commando Zoey appeared and beat them down. "NO ONE HURTS MIKE!!!!!" exclaimed Zoey. She then punched them all hard enough to where they black out. Zoey got up, brushed herself off and turned to Mike.

"You ok?", she asked as she helped Mike up. "Yeah, I'm fine,". Mike just looked down at the group of guys then looked at his hand that turned to a fist. "Why did I do that? I've never punched a guy in my life," Mike thought.

The rest of the day, until that night, Mike's 问题 rang in his head. He wanted to know why he punched Scott. He was so confused. He laid in his 床, 床上 with his hands over his stomach, breathing at a steady pace. His quiet surroundings caused him to drift off to sleep.

Chapter 2
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Weeks passed. Mike gradually started
表演 更多 rambunctious and crazier that ever. It was as if he couldn't control it. He was like Robin 兜帽, 罩, 发动机罩 或者 the Lone Ranger, only 更多
dangerous. Zoey was worried and knew he
had to go to his psychiatrist. Lucky for them, today was the day.

Zoey walked over to Mike's house and rang the door bell. His roommate, Cameron answered the door. "Hey, Cameron. Is Mike here? We have to go,". Cameron responded," Yeah, he's here. Come on in". The two walked down the hall. "He's in here, but be careful. He hasn't been himself lately," Cameron informed. "Trust me. I know," Zoey replied. She walked in. "Hey, Mike. It's time to go,". "Oh. Hey, Zoey," he stood up a kissed her on the cheek. "OK. Let's go," Mike replied to her. They 说 bye to Cameron as they walked out.

10 分钟 later, they pulled up to Mike's physiatrist's office. They walked in and the two of them were in for a surprise. Lisa was sitting in the waiting room, seeming very worried. When she saw Mike and Zoey, she immediately stood up and walked to them. "Mike, please follow me. Zoey, your welcome to come too," 说 Lisa. They started walking down the hall when Mike asked," What's the matter?". Lisa just kept walking until they stopped at a room Mike hasn't seen before. They all walked inside and saw a bunch of sciency gadgets. Zoey was instructed to walk into the room 下一个 to the room they were currently in. So she did.

In the middle of the room was a 表 and they sat down. "What the matter, Lisa? And, where am I," asked Mike. "Mike, I found some startling news," responded Mike's doctor. "What is it,". "Mike," started Lisa," 你 have a fifth personality,".

Chapter 3
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"What?! How is this possible?" exclaimed Mike. "We're not sure how it happened, but we can tell 你 about him," 说 Lisa, "his name is Commando Mike. He tough like Vito, agile like Svetlana, and sourceful like Manitoba. I think he came to be, because of something 你 either saw 或者 did. Now we don't know how to trigger him, but we think it might be anger. But because we don't want trouble, 你 have to go in your subconscious. Can 你 do that for us?" asked Lisa.

"Yeah. I guess. Where should I lay down?" Mike asked. "Well 你 can lay anywhere, but I recommend the 床, 床上 over there," she replied as she pointed to a nearby bed.

Mike walked over to the soft 床, 床上 and laid there. He closed his eyes until he fell asleep. Lisa and her assistant Gwen (Yes. The Gwen from Total drama) walked over and stood around the bed. They took notes on what was
happening.

Zoey was very worried. She knew this room and she didn't want the same thing that happened to her, to happen to Mike.
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Flashback
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It was the before the Freshman 年 of high school started. Zoey was one of the most quiet kids at the orientation for the entire freshman class. Luckily she was with one of her best friends, Dawn. They walked around to classes together with Zoey's parents. After all of that Zoey went 首页 with them. As soon as they got into her car, Zoey instantly felt terrible. It was because of her parents. They were telling her that she was so quiet when they met her teachers and she should of been 更多 outgoing. She felt even 更多 terrible when they got 首页 and mom told her that she needs to think about her future and all that crap. What turned her is when Scott insulted her. She went crazy after that. She was never the same. That's how Commando Zoey came to be.
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Reality
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Zoey looked at herself in discomfort and sadness. Then she looked at Mike in worry. Mike was her best friend and she loved him very much. "If only I knew what was happening in his head," Zoey thought.

Chapter 4
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Back in Mike's subconscious, he was sneaking around looking for anything
suspicious. It was really quiet and really dark. Just then he saw a small light, up ahead. He grew closer and closer hoping it was one of his other personalities. He was closer than ever to the light, when it hit him. A green, slimy ball of goo hit Mike right in the back. It was pretty big about half the height of Mike and twice the width of him. He cried for help. He heard foot steps running up to him.

"I got him. This is a big one, mate. 嘿 guys come help me with this," exclaimed Manitoba. Two 更多 pairs of feet came running up to Mike and the green ball of goo. "Don't worry, Mike. We'll get 你 out of there," Vito told him calmly. He grabbed his wrists and pulled him out of the goo ball. "Why didn't 你 tell us that 你 were gonna get a new personality?!" exclaimed Svetlana as she struggled to hold on to the ball of goo. "I didn't know! Just like I didn't know that 你 would be here either!" replied Mike. "Fair," Vito said. The ball broke free and everyone backed up. The ball was right in front of them. They were terrified of what was going to
happen.

That moment the goo ball started to break open like a chick breaking from an egg. It opened, and a great light broke free along with smoke. At first they couldn't tell what the personality looked like, but once the smoke died down they could see the figure that stood before them. It looked like Mike ,only he had war paint just below his eyes and the bottom of his 衬衫 was ripped off an wrapped around his head. Mike walked up to him and just stared at him.

Chapter 5
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They all started to have a deep conversation and got to know Commando Mike. "So," Mike started," do 你 know how your triggered?". "Hm. Let me think," 说 CM, "I'm pretty sure it might be anger 或者 something based around that,". Mike replied," Well thanks. I will see 你 guys later. And CM...." 说 Mike. "Yes?" he replied. There's someone I might be able to introduce 你 to,". 'Who," asked CM suspiciously. "You'll see. Well bye guys," Mike said.

Mike woke up from his sleep to see Lisa and Gwen standing near him. "So, what happened in there?," Gwen asked. Mike, still confused about what happened, said," Whoa! That was crazy. There was a ball of goo, and light, and smoke, and and and,". "Mike. Calm down," 说 Lisa, "Now, can 你 tell me what Commando Mike's trigger is?,". He finally calmed down and told her the trigger. "But the only problem is, is that I'm not sure how to get angry. The only time I've ever felt angry is when.....". Mike stopped and remembered the one person who started all of this. "What is it Mike?", asked Gwen. He slowly looked up at them and responded,
"Scott,".

"Scott?!" replied Gwen. "Yes. Scott,". "Scott!" Zoey 说 over the intercom. Mike put a thumbs up. "Who's Scott?" Lisa asked. That's when Zoey finally walked into the room where everyone was. "Who is Scott? I'll tell 你 who Scott is. He is the one caused all of this. He's the one that turned me. He has gotten on my nerves since 9th grade. Because of him I'll never be the same," she 说 as she slammed her fist on a 表 nearby. Mike got up, walked over to her and put his hand on her back to calm her down.

"Then we have to go and find him. Where ever he is," Gwen responded. "But we don't know where he is. He could be anywhere. He could be in France for all we know," Mike said. *beep* *beep* Mike's phone got a text. He looked at his phone and realized it was Cameron. Mike open the message. "Oh no," cried Mike. "What is it?" everyone asked in unison. "I know where Scott is,".

Chapter 6
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They all drove off to where Scott was. "What did the text say again," asked Zoey. "It 说 *MIKE. HELP!!!!!!!!!!! Scott is at our house. I'm hiding in a closet so he can't find me. Please come soon,". "We better hurry then," 说 Gwen.

10 分钟 later, they arrived at the house. They all walked in and there, stood Scott. "Why are 你 here, Scott?" Mike asked. "I like to walk in to people's homes and terrorize them. 你 guys are next," replied Scott. "How? There's two of us and one of you," responded Zoey. "Wrong,". Scott snapped his fingers and three of his gang members appeared. "Come on Mike. We can take him," Zoey told him. "Yeah. Sure 你 can. Face it Zoey your boyfriend is a weakling. He couldn't fight if his life depended on it,". Scott laughed. Zoey snapped. Once she turned back into Commando Zoey, she tried to get Mike to fight. "I-I can't." Mike 说 in shame. "That's right. 你 cant fight, because your a weakling. Just like that Cameron guy who I have tied up over in your very ugly living room. I mean come on. Get some paint on your walls 或者 something," Scott said.

Mike got angry. Like really angry. "No one can tie up Cameron. And no one make's fun of my living room," Mike responded angrily. Mike turned into Commando Mike. He ripped his clothes and had war paint. Everything got graphic all of a sudden. Everyone was bloody and Scott and his gang were knocked out on the floor. Gwen called an 救护车 and got the blood cleaned up.

After the 救护车 came and picked up Scott and the others, Lisa and Gwen left. CM and CZ were left alone in the house,other than Cameron who was still tied up. The two of them just stood there staring at each other. "So, 你 must be the one Mike wanted to introduce to me," 说 CM. "So. What are 你 gonna do about it," CZ 说 with a smirk on her face. "This,". CM kissed her. They both turned back into their regular selves. They looked at each other. Mike then said," I should probably go and untie Cameron," Mike 说 quietly.

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1 年 later
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Everything was back to normal. Mike and Zoey didn't get any 更多 trouble from Scott. They decided to protect anyone who was in trouble (not like super heroes). They lived happily ever after.

The End
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Finally finished!!!!!!!!!! I really hope 你 guys enjoy it. I'll have another story out soon. Peace out, guys (and gals).
 Commando Zoey and Commando Mike
Commando Zoey and Commando Mike
added by niklnt
posted by SvetXMani
 The 项链
The Necklace
Here's a story about Manitoba and Svetlana meeting in one of the craziest ways ever. So, hope 你 guys enjoy.
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Deep in the country of Russia a baby girl was being born. Though after, her mother died. The 24 年 old woman just closed her eyes and died on the medical bed. George, the father, kneeled beside the woman he longed for, and now she was gone. "Sir," one of the doctors said, "I'm so sorry,". The tall man stood up. His eyes were starting to tear up. "Thank you," George told the doctor. "Would 你 like us to leave and get 你 daughter...
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added by Frankiestein65
posted by SvetXMani
 The 项链
The Necklace
Chapter 2 of The 项链 . Sorry it took so long to post. I've been really busy. Well, enjoy.
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George opened the folder and began to look through it, in hope that he'll find out 更多 about this 项链 thing. "No. No. No, not that one. Nope. Hello. What's this?". He had just stumbled apon information about his new daughter's partner and his parents. "Hm... Manitoba Smith. Lives in...". George paused. "Australia?". He was confused. He thought Svetlana's partner was going to be in Russia, not in another continent, but as much as George...
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added by Frankiestein65
Source: Me
posted by gotdroti45
This is basically a listing of ways i'm like the tdroti cast.OK so lets get this over with---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Anne Maria:I 爱情 fashion,and make-up
B:I rarely ever talk
Brick:I'm very Patriotic to the U.S.A
Cameron:I'm practically a nerd,but also very sweet
Dakota:I wanna be famous someday
Dawn:I take care of the earth,and 爱情 animals
Jo:I like to beat boys
Lightning:I'm very competitive
Mike:I'm crazy,but also very kind-hearted
Sam:I like video games(but not as much as sam does)
Scott:I can be mean at times for good reasons
Staci:I like to find out about my family's past(but I believe staci is a psycho liar,which I'm not)
Zoey:I'm very easy going,and sometime's I can lose my temper
------------------------------------------------------------------And that's pretty much it for this one.Thanks for reading.
JO
JO : oh 你 guys don't 你 see when I was alittle kiddy and the sun was going dooowwwnnnn ....
annemaria ; tell me she not
jo ;the darkness and the shadows would always make me frooowwwnnnn
camron; she is
jo ; id hide under my 枕头 from what I though I saw but granny may 说 that wasn't the way to deal with fears at all
brick ; THEN WHAT IS ????
jo; she 说 : " joey , 你 gotta stand up tall learn to face your fears you'll see that they wont hurt 你 just laugh and make them disappear " "HA HA HA " ( mutan disappears )
brick,anne,zoey,mike,and Cameron ; (gasp)
jo and mike ; SOOOOO !!!! , giggle at the ghostly guffaw at the grossly crack up at the creepy whoop it up with the funly chortle at the kooky snortle at the spooky
and tell that big dumb creepy face to take a hike and leave 你 alone and if it think it can scare ou its got something else coming and the very though of such a thing makes 你 wanna .... HAHA HAHA ... HEH ....LLLLAAAAAUUUUGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
posted by cannibalZoey
AnneMaria :
Type unicorn mane : puffy and purple coat: 紫色, 紫罗兰色 cutiemark : 发胶 can eyes : purple
B :
Type : unicorn mane : black 涂层, 外套 : green cutiemark : a rinch eyes: blue
Brick (prince ) :
Type : anticorn mane black 涂层, 外套 : green cutiemark : dog 标签 eyes : red
Cameron :
Type earth mane red 涂层, 外套 yellow cutiemark a book eyes glasses with brown
Dakota :
Type unicorn mane 粉, 粉色 涂层, 外套 粉, 粉色 cutiemark camera eyes green
Dawn (1 of princess Jo's faithful students )
Type peagus mane blonde 涂层, 外套 green cutiemark a leaf eyes blue
Jo ( princess ) :
Type anticorn/ 斑马 mane looks like Luna's 涂层, 外套 dark...
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posted by emmab13
A pale, red headed, 16 年 old girl was getting ready for one of the most exiting days of her life. She auditioned for a 显示 called Total Drama Revenge of the Island. She was so exited to meet other people outside of her hometown full of hippies, juvi rejects and hockey thugs. As she packed her stuff her mom came and asked if she was ready to go. "Yeah. I'm ready. Let's go," 说 Zoey. They got into the car and drove to the Muskoka Ontario Dock. Zoey got her things from her car and waved to her mom and dad.

She turned towards the cruise ship and gave a deep breath. Walking over to this enormous...
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posted by crystalpotato
this is gonna sound weird but, i feel like since there making a 显示 with an all new cast 下一个 season they should put the old cast on a new show. but since there all adults now, and most of the viewers that enjoy the 显示 are older, they should put the 显示 on adult swim 或者 something. kinda like and uncensored version of the show.

I know it sounds weird but think about it. this allows the 显示 to introduce a TON of new senerios that weren't nessicarly appropriate for smaller viewers. like I'm just gonna pick on a 随意 character….

DUNCAN. we could find out 更多 about his criminal record...
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posted by gotdroti45
Summer was just starting.The air was starting to get hot,and the days were getting longer.A 16 年 old girl named Zoey,was packing her things to go to Total Drama Revenge of the Island for the very 1st time,She was half exited,half nervous.It's like one of those 50% 50% things,Her best friend,Laynie,was in her bedroom helping her pack.Laynie,and her other bestfriend,Abigail.The 3 girls had been 老友记 sience kindergarden,and they were Zoey's only friends."Are 你 exited,Zoey?"asked Laynie."Kinda" zoey replied."I just hope the challenges aren't as crazy as the seasons before,other wise,bring...
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