TanglescarxParchpaw~Broken

"I wounder what it looks like" and "what do I look like" was all Lily could think about , so one 日 she opened her eyes for the first time, and all she could see was gray fluff.she wonder if that was all there was so when she flipped over lily was shocked but she loved the green and the blue and red she saw outside of her nest.
She sniffed and knew that fluff was her momma,"Momma"she squeak "wake up" "ugh,im up im up" her mother was a dark gray she-cat named Daisy. "Look I open my eyes" "LOOK! LOOK!" 雏菊, 黛西 turned over too she her little girls eyes, as she looked into her eyes she was shocked...

Stormstar lay restless in her den, she tossed and turned on her moss made nest.
Moonlight filtered through the 巢穴, den, 书房 entrance, and the coldness of leaf bare filled the open air.
It had passed three moons since Stormstar had ruled Stormclan.
The clan was coming along nicley but Stormstar couldnt help thinking about the kits she had left behind then 迷失 all those moons ago.
Stormstar's memory flashed before her eye's as she closed them and began to remember....
Stormstar rememberd three moons ago, when she had began recruting new members, so the first place she went was the old clan that had...

Long 以前 when I first was born... Ahh I remember it like yesturday when I first open my eyes and saw the world of light and life that engulfed me. As I felt the warm moss that srounded me I looked up at my mother, her warm gaze made me smile as I tried to stand. Well, that didn't work as well as I thought. I fell down a couple times only to me picked up 由 my mother, but my brother had some problem's as well.
Soon our mother took my brother and I to a group of cats. Not long after she 说 that she had to leave.
Moons Later, after my mother had left me and my brother decided to go out and...

I opened my eyes. It was blurry for a second, but my eyes soon went in focus. I looked around and saw that I was in a 狐狸 den. I stood up, and shook myself. I licked my light silver with darker gray stiped fur. My first instinct was to find StormClan. Was to find Stormstar.

I ran. I ran as fast as my young legs could carry me, and I stopped dead. I yowled in triumph. It was the forest! Hundreds of thousands of trees lined up in messy rows; some crooked and some straight. "Now, all I have to do is find StormClan," I 说 to myself, "but how?" I beared my teeth in annoyance, I always was short~tempered....

"Gather around" Wavestorm call's, "Anyone who wants to hear about our past, gather around!" Wavestorm, calls from the elders den. Stormstar sits beside her as clan members begin pouring from the warriors 巢穴, den, 书房 to hear about her past.
Spottedshadow and Bloodpool appear from the nursery, followed 由 Thistlekit, Moonkit, and Nightkit. Then Stormstar spots Featherpaw and Daisypaw come out of the apprentaces den. There sister Fernpaw, then appears from the med. cat 巢穴, den, 书房 followed 由 Lilypaw. The warriors Mistyflower, Nightstalker, Spruceleaf, and Dawnsky sit near the back row to give everyone else...