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hi all, i dont know any poets names, but here is a poem i made, plz tell me if u like it 或者 not, thx

(i have no name 4 it yet, so it would be nice if some1 could give me some ideas..)

I never thought that my bestest friend could be so near, but though they seem close, they are further then expacted......but if they're a true friend, it would be worth the walking mile, to see them and knoe that there near.........

老友记 are extreamley special, always keep them close......


to reader:I know that most 诗歌 should ryme, but some doesnt, all that matters is that it has heart......
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:D hi every1, ther is a send verse....exept my 4 月 old dog ate it, ;D
ambie98 posted 一年多以前
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it was nice and good i liked it
chagrin91 posted 一年多以前
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very good. 你 should go to www.thepoemproject.kk5.org
poetryproject posted 一年多以前
 ambie98 posted 一年多以前
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Lovetreehill said:
I 爱情 your poem.
No rhyme, but your words came from your heart.



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posted 一年多以前 
shomill said:
Hey, I like it.
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posted 一年多以前 
topazEYEs91 said:
i like it a lot. it reminds me of a friend that i lost.
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posted 一年多以前 
kacimay72293 said:
I 爱情 your poem....it really touched me.....
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posted 一年多以前 
kanyewestlover said:
U shuld call it "near vs. far" 或者 "hold on to frienship"
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posted 一年多以前 
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