Is this a good poem and do 你 think 更多 could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke 或者 saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
你 had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
或者 your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
你 说 it was akward
And that 你 still 爱情 me
But I think I pushed 你 too far
What did I do
To make 你 push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want 你 in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for 你 even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if 你 want me back
Prove 你 won't hurt me again
Never again 你 will 你 hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
你 fucked up