马达加斯加的企鹅 Article: A Song for Doris the 海豚 Lyrics (rough draft)

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A Song for Doris the 海豚 Lyrics (rough draft)

posted by Bluepenguin

This is the rough draft of the lyrics, I would 爱情 to have revisions and constructive 评论 added to this post. Please add 音乐 notes to the song 由 posting it on the pictures section of this fanclub. Hope 你 enjoy! :D

Kowalski: A Song for Doris the Dolphin.

Kowalski pulls out a 吉他 and starts playing

Kowalski:
Stunning like a 海滩 sunset,
Her eyes bluer than the neverending ocean,
She bears an amazingly soft face,
That I will never be able to hold.

Doris, the dolphin,
She is a miracle of nature,
Doris, the dolphin,
If only she would 爱情 me,

We swam in peace, in perfect harmony,
Flipper in flipper we went,
I was so happy and in total bliss,
But then, she cruelly left me,

Doris, the dolphin,
Why did 你 abandon me?
Doris, the dolphin,
If only she would 爱情 me,

If only she would 爱情 me.

.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.

hahahaidontcare, egel_0507 and 4 others like this

SPKR689 well i like it :D but do you know what kind of rythem (pfft i cant spell -_-) it would be? like, the melody? the beat? cuz then i would have a really good picture of what it would sound like and what the vocal range would be. yes i know alot about music :)

Penguinangel This is really cool! (And the picture at the top's pretty good, too) SPKR, were you going to put the lyrics to music?

SPKR689 i was going to try to find something that would match yeah :] i would have to find something that was already made or just come up with a random beat, most likey it would be finding an instumental of some sort and adding the lyrics. so to answer your question, yeah xD

Bluepenguin @SPKR689: I would think of it as a relitively slow-ish rythym, maybe sort of like 3/4 time. Kowalski doesn't sing many high notes (he can only go up to a girly scream XD) but I would'nt think of his voice as being extremely low either... so I would say he has a Baritone/High-pitched Bass voice.

SPKR689 it would be a little easier if it rymed, but i think i could look for something. the bad thing is is that i dont know many slow songs... at all really. ill see if i can find something like that

EppofangirlXD Ooh! nice song!! To sing it, I would have 'stunning like a beach' be sung on just one low note, and then 'sunset' would be a high note. It should be a happy/mysterious song and good song like that! XD

Bluepenguin @SPKR698: If you want to change it so it rhymes thats ok! :D This is the rough draft, so I'll take some editing comments.

Icicle1penguin Lol, nice!

SPKR689 thanks. ill think of something cuz im trying to learn how to make songs without having most of it written already by someone famous. like, rewritting a Lady Gaga song, which i did do for no reason lol

Bluepenguin ^Yay!!! :D I just didn't have time to make it rhyme... and even though I play clarinet, I'm not very good at writing music. XD

beastialmoon tht was really good... I don't usually like slow songs, but I will definitly make the exception! :)

Bluepenguin ^It probably won't be extremely slow, just a tad bit slow... like Andante/Adagietto speed. XD