My first ever clois fic and this is an AU taking place after season 8's episode "Bride". I would REALLY like some feedback!! thanks!! :)<3
Chapter 1: The Lois Factor
She crawled into 床, 床上 as tears rolled down her cheeks. She just lay there choking back sobs; feeling paralyzed as memories of that 日 came rushing back to her with a whirlwind of heartbreak. Her cover had been blown, she could no longer pretend she didn’t have feelings for the dorky farm boy when all she wanted to do was run her hands through his thick dark hair and 吻乐队（Kiss） him. Her hands gripped her blanket tight as she thought...
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