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Disclaimer: *I am on Season 3 Episode 16 and I have not read the books*

I'm going to hope you've read my other 文章 "How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon" so that I can skip the detailed introduction. I have become so aggravated 由 the messy 爱情 'V' going on between the three main characters on The Vampire Diaries. So much so I've decided to write (vent) about it. Obviously the best thing to happen would be the three of them getting over each other and moving on with their lives but we all know that's not going to happen. For argument's sake, I'm going to discuss who I think should be with who. I ship Damon and Elena (not that Elena really deserves Damon's 爱情 but that's besides the point). While I admit I am a little biased when it comes to wanting Damon to have a "happily ever after" I like to make sure I have valid reasons, which I think I do, so here they are:

1. Damon deserves to be happy for once, darn it! He didn't want to become a vampire and for his whole life he has only gotten judged 由 his little brother - who has no room to do so.
2. Just about everything he puts Elena through is out of love, he cares about her. Despite making poor decisions, he means well.
3. He sucks up the fact that she loves Stefan and that Stefan loves her. Whereas Stefan just gets little jealousy rages towards Damon.
4. He's honest with her. He's never really made her beat around the 衬套, 布什 for the truth.
5. I believe Damon would change and heal if Elena would be with him. He's in so much emotional turmoil all the time, she would ease it.
6. No matter how angry Elena gets with him, in the end he forgives and forgets.

7. Deep down, Elena knows she loves Damon. She won't let herself admit it though because she can't let Stefan go. Which really isn't fair to anyone.
8. This is to back up #7 If Elena didn't 爱情 Damon, she would have kicked him to the curb a long time 以前 and we know she isn't the kind of person to just use him for personal gain. 你 can't hide your feelings forever, Elena.
9. When Damon kissed Elena, she didn't pull back.
10. When they aren't avoiding impending doom, Elena lets herself go with Damon. She has a little fun with him and shows a sliver of real depth.
11. Let's be honest, the only thing holding her back from throwing herself at him is that she won't let Stefan go for some odd reason.
12. She's been able to trust Damon 更多 than Stefan for the most part.

Here's why Stefan shouldn't be/doesn't deserve to be with Elena:
1. As I've stated in my 前一个 article, Stefan's a liar. He's 给 Elena a hard time about giving the truth from the very beginning.
2. While both he and Damon can be labeled murderers (and I'm not saying this is okay 或者 a great reason) we know who's worse: Stefan.
3. He's toying with her. Hinting that he still loves her and then turns his back again - talk about rude.
4. If he had ever really loved her, he would have left her alone from the beginning. The only reason Damon got involved is because of Stefan.
5. Honestly he can't be trusted. We've all seen how he can't control himself when it comes to human blood. Damon has never showed that problem.
6. I still can't get over the fact of how poorly he treated his brother all those years when he ruined Damon's life. I know Stefan loves him and has saved him but 你 still can't deny all the times he's wrongly been mean to him.

There 你 have it, my opinion and reasoning to why I think Damon and Elena should be together and Stefan should stay out of it. If 你 liked and agreed with this 文章 and have not read my other 文章 "How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon" It would be great if 你 did. Thank you.
posted by hgfan5602
I'm up all the time now.
Head up
Shoulders back
Legs slightly apart
Back straight.

I walk into the exam room,
Knowing inside my heart
That the ones who fear
Are the ones who do not succeed.

I sit down.
Confident,
I start my song
Of utmost elegance.

I use all my power
And strength.
I use all the dynamics in the world,
I use everything everyone's brought me.
I use all the good that everyone
Has 给 me
In my life.

Time goes slowly by.
I feel myself going along with the beat.
I am entranced in my own song.
It feels better than ever before.

I am done.
I walk over to the judges,
Shaking each hand.
I feel a sense of pride in my heart,
Knowing that I have done it now.
I truly have.
posted by hgfan5602
I am disappointed,
At the way things are moving along.
Why is everyone so private about
Everything?

I am disappointed,
That I have not met my dream yet.
It seems a long way until I will
Catch my dream in the sky.

I am disappointed,
With many people.
Not just me.
But mostly me.

Why am I being so selfish?
Why are other people being so unkind?
Everything seems in ruin,
Including me.

I am sorry that this is the way it must be
Today,
But I know that tomorrow is a new day,
Waiting for all of us to do good deeds.
And do we shall.
Jake Gartner here. For some reason, something kept those mutant serpents away from us. Chase Johnson, my friend, is over here with me at the 图书馆 of Death. Yeah. Bad name for a library, if 你 ask me. I would never have come here in the first place, had no one ever bothered me with a ransom note about my mother dying if I didn't go on this life-or-death journey. (Sorry, I have to speed the story up now. Chase says I'm getting all the attention.) So, what we found out at the library. Not much. All we found out was that mutant serpents tend to be very huge, have sharp teeth, and stay away...
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posted by Insight357
    “Kayden!” Sebastian-my band’s manager-had a look of dismay on his simple features. I couldn’t hear him, but I could read his lips. Anyone who knew me knew to get my attention before they spoke.
    “What?” I asked. Though I’d been deaf since I was five I knew how to speak as well as anyone with full hearing.    
    “You still haven’t made your set list,” he stated, his face screwed up into a frown. “The first performance is tomorrow night.”
    “I’ll have it finished...
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posted by hgfan5602
My name is Matt Downley, and I am a 足球 player. I just moved here to New York, and I was just going to try out for the Weston Middle 足球 team, when believe it 或者 not, the principal came rushing down the halls and 说 that I couldn't play because I am disabled. WHAT THE HECK!!! Okay, I was like, "So here's the deal. I can't play. I can't do anything. What the freak am I supposed to do at this stupid school!!!" But, of course, I didn't have the guts to say that out loud to the principal, so I just muttered and said, "Okay." Lately, I feel like people have been stalking me when I came back from school. Everyday when I go to bed, I feel like people are looming in the shadows above me. I didn't know now, but tonight would be a night of extreme danger.
posted by alicia386
What scandalous secrets can adults keep from their parents? I need ideas for a book I am currently writing. It is about how some secrets adults keep from us can actually save our lives. I hope to give 你 a sneak 预览 of my book which is called The Deadly Truth. Can't wait for your opinions!

To know 更多 about my book please post your 问题 on my wall. I will try my best to reply as fast and as soon as I can. If I don't then just know I did read them.

你 can believe the first chapter of my book will be 发布 either this week 或者 下一个 Friday.
posted by morganaforever
Full of excitement, Nicole and Ellie arrived at the fairground. They walked through the towering gates, expecting laughter and chatter – but everything remained quiet. No music, no noise, nothing! The place was deserted. A strong gust of wind blew, making them shiver. As they walked on, it began to get darker. Gradually, the sky turned from a bright blue to black. One 由 one the lights of the fairground flickered on, illuminating the black sky. As they passed 由 The Haunted Mine, it seemed to be inviting them to have a go. A man clad completely in black was waiting beside the entrance.

“Can...
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It probably took 你 a while to learn the 26 letters of the alphabet back when 你 started school. But actually, 你 should count yourself lucky. Some languages use alphabets with many 更多 letters than that. Russian, for example, has 33 letters, and the Khmer language of Cambodia has over 70. And in China and Japan, where they write with signs called 'characters', there are hundreds, even thousands of different shapes to remember. Japanese primary school children are expected to learn about a thousand characters before they can go on to high school!
posted by candyvtoby511
Tess’s parents were shot down right before her eyes, coming out through the side door of a theatre. She couldn’t understand why he had killed them and not her. The murderer was young, maybe even the same age as herself. He was disguised as an older man, but she could still tell he was quite young, 14 或者 so.
Tess is walking late at night with her dog alone, thinking about her parent’s mysterious murderer; why didn’t he kill her as well? What motive did he have to kill them? She ponders over the words her mother spoke in her dying breath; what did she mean that I shouldn’t trust him?...
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 Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture 由 金牌 Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Ray, Britain’s Fashion 图标 of The 年 2011 (Fashions Finest Awards), successfully opened Fashion Week Gibraltar on 18 April 2012 at the Casemates Gallery in Gibraltar.
London – In front of an excited crowd Emmanuel Raygave a short speech thanking everyone who came to the opening, his publicist David J Mann, director ofHighmore PR, and Fashion Week Gibraltar’s organiser and fashion designer Reene Weston. He then proceeded to cut the red ribbon allowing everyone to start their Fashion Week experience.
Emmanuel had this to say about the opening,
“What an amazing experience it was....
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If i get enough 评论 i will extend it.

It was damp, smelled of earth and pine, I heard leaves rustle, twigs snap as 动物 scurried in the 树 tops. I wasn't supposed to be here, this wasn't my room, my bed. I was supposed to me in 由 cottage on eagle lake. I was supposed to be asleep, 最佳, 返回页首 bunk with my younger brother Elliot on the bottom. I was supposed to be smelling fabric softener and hear the soft snore from little Elli, feel the heat of my cat sleeping on my chest. I opened my eyes and I could see the sky, black with soft twinkle of a million 星, 星级 and the florescent glow of the moon....
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posted by precious211
“Before we leave I must warn you. We are now entering alien territory, so be careful and considerate to you’re new surroundings. One stupid mistake can get you, and everyone around 你 killed.”

The safety instructor’s voice boomed across the large, air conditioned spaceship. It sounded oddly cheerful for someone who had just told them that they could all die.
Everyone tried to see where her line of vision was pointing towards. It was aimed toward the windows.
Kendra glanced through them and, and gulped. They were about four thousand feet above sea level, and the 太空 craft had just...
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Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if 你 want to convey your thoughts accurately. 你 also want your 写作 to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is 更多 annoying than 阅读 a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of 写作 sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
1


Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

2


Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by NormalcyIsDead
Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap


Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock


One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat


Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As 你 bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap
posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes 前锋, 期待 the mind and body of an individual changes for either good 或者 bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years 以前 由 a wise old man that fortold my future. He 说 "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's 迷失 Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him 更多 shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a 安全 distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be 展示 你 the best techniques for 写作 your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what 你 may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, 你 have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before 你 decide on a plot, 你 should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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posted by PhoenixRoyale
This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired 由 some 评论 about stuffed animals/plushies on youtobe being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...
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posted by shenelopefan
La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...
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