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Disclaimer: *I am on Season 3 Episode 16 and I have not read the books*

I'm going to hope you've read my other 文章 "How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon" so that I can skip the detailed introduction. I have become so aggravated 由 the messy 爱情 'V' going on between the three main characters on The Vampire Diaries. So much so I've decided to write (vent) about it. Obviously the best thing to happen would be the three of them getting over each other and moving on with their lives but we all know that's not going to happen. For argument's sake, I'm going to discuss who I think should be with who. I ship Damon and Elena (not that Elena really deserves Damon's 爱情 but that's besides the point). While I admit I am a little biased when it comes to wanting Damon to have a "happily ever after" I like to make sure I have valid reasons, which I think I do, so here they are:

1. Damon deserves to be happy for once, darn it! He didn't want to become a vampire and for his whole life he has only gotten judged 由 his little brother - who has no room to do so.
2. Just about everything he puts Elena through is out of love, he cares about her. Despite making poor decisions, he means well.
3. He sucks up the fact that she loves Stefan and that Stefan loves her. Whereas Stefan just gets little jealousy rages towards Damon.
4. He's honest with her. He's never really made her beat around the 衬套, 布什 for the truth.
5. I believe Damon would change and heal if Elena would be with him. He's in so much emotional turmoil all the time, she would ease it.
6. No matter how angry Elena gets with him, in the end he forgives and forgets.

7. Deep down, Elena knows she loves Damon. She won't let herself admit it though because she can't let Stefan go. Which really isn't fair to anyone.
8. This is to back up #7 If Elena didn't 爱情 Damon, she would have kicked him to the curb a long time 以前 and we know she isn't the kind of person to just use him for personal gain. 你 can't hide your feelings forever, Elena.
9. When Damon kissed Elena, she didn't pull back.
10. When they aren't avoiding impending doom, Elena lets herself go with Damon. She has a little fun with him and shows a sliver of real depth.
11. Let's be honest, the only thing holding her back from throwing herself at him is that she won't let Stefan go for some odd reason.
12. She's been able to trust Damon 更多 than Stefan for the most part.

Here's why Stefan shouldn't be/doesn't deserve to be with Elena:
1. As I've stated in my 前一个 article, Stefan's a liar. He's 给 Elena a hard time about giving the truth from the very beginning.
2. While both he and Damon can be labeled murderers (and I'm not saying this is okay 或者 a great reason) we know who's worse: Stefan.
3. He's toying with her. Hinting that he still loves her and then turns his back again - talk about rude.
4. If he had ever really loved her, he would have left her alone from the beginning. The only reason Damon got involved is because of Stefan.
5. Honestly he can't be trusted. We've all seen how he can't control himself when it comes to human blood. Damon has never showed that problem.
6. I still can't get over the fact of how poorly he treated his brother all those years when he ruined Damon's life. I know Stefan loves him and has saved him but 你 still can't deny all the times he's wrongly been mean to him.

There 你 have it, my opinion and reasoning to why I think Damon and Elena should be together and Stefan should stay out of it. If 你 liked and agreed with this 文章 and have not read my other 文章 "How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon" It would be great if 你 did. Thank you.
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by NormalcyIsDead
Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap


Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock


One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat


Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As 你 bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap
posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes 前锋, 期待 the mind and body of an individual changes for either good 或者 bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years 以前 由 a wise old man that fortold my future. He 说 "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's 迷失 Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him 更多 shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a 安全 distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be 展示 你 the best techniques for 写作 your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what 你 may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, 你 have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before 你 decide on a plot, 你 should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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posted by PhoenixRoyale
This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired 由 some 评论 about stuffed animals/plushies on youtobe being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...
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posted by shenelopefan
La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...
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The room is silent, as always. Nothing can be heard, aside from the soft rasp of pencil on paper. Words take form, joining various thoughts into one whole. On the outside, nothing is different from the average writer. To find what sets me apart, we must look deeper than the surface.
Inside my mind, 图片 and ideas race about, sometimes colliding, sometimes not. This whirlwind is composed of everything I know, read, seen, heard, 或者 thought of. It is here that my greatest works begin to form.
To 显示 how thw whiirlwind works, let us have an example. During practice for spring track, I noticed...
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posted by Lord_Anubis
If 你 mates like it, comment, I'll make 更多 if anyone notices it =3

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''Oi, 你 guys! What are 你 doin'?!'' screamed a brown haired boy from the street.
''Mind your own business and go back under your momma's skirt, 或者 you'll get some too!'' replied the tallest boy on playground, probably the leader of the rest 4 boys.
5 of them were teasing one small boy, taking away from him candies and ruining his game on playground. The brown haired boy frowned with his black eyes and started walking towards them.
''You scum really have guts! 5 tall 狗 on 1 small...
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posted by dragonsmemory
The Eden Chronicles is the 幻想 series I am currently working on. As the series is in progress, I decided to add a club here, allowing you, Reader, to tell me your thoughts.
In 写作 the series, I decided to document the entire history of Eden. I called this place Eden because it is where the spirits of dead 动物 and plants are taken. No humanspirit has ever been pure enough to come here. Eden is a true paradise.
The first book, A Little Bit 更多 Than Love, takes place toward the end of Eden's history. Later in the series, I hope to explain the past. Once I get caught up, I will then...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
Roxana woke up one night to hear a loud howl outside her window, she slided herself out of 床, 床上 with her covers wrapped around her, she walked toward the window and saw a somewhat a large white 狼 outside, watching her then it turned its head to hear other 狼 howling, the white 狼 runs off to follow the howl, Roxana felt like she knew that 狼 for a long time, Roxana walked back to her 床, 床上 and lies down, but she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning but she couldn't sleep, she sat up, grab her wallet and pull out a 照片 of a beautiful, pale-skinned,...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
A young and beautiful succubus named Roxana opened her green eyes as she sees the sun flooded her dark room with lights from her windows, she sat up in her twin bed, the mattress was tan and her covers were 浓情巧克力 brown color, she pulled herself out of the 床, 床上 and throws on her black tank top, then she slipped on her jeans on her long and beautiful legs, Roxana then walked in her bathroom and brushed her long red hair slowly as she stares at herself in the mirrior, she put her brush on the sink and walked outside, as she walks, she turns around as she feels like...
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We were builders. We were builders, fighters, scholars, but 更多 importantly, friends. When the Government took all our rights away, our food, money, our culture, we allied ourselves against it. But they had a machine. A machine that could sail the seas and air. It was called, The Oppresive. The Oppresive forced us underground, making us creatures of the very soil they walk on. But it is time for our revolution. We have a great machine, bigger than the Oppresive, and stronger than it. It will trample them like a boy tramples grass. No resistance at all, we are sure of it. We are ready. We have...
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posted by DarrenGruch
Ever since my family died down to be just me.... I`ve been alone since they died in a car accident. I got out fine (only with cuts and a migrane), but they died. I now live with my grandpa... but he doesn't get me..... I cut my self, dresss diffrently, and never really talk.

4 days after the funeral for my family.... I became Emo. But the 日 my Family died, something changed within me..... something good went rotten.
My Grandpa see's it, but ignores my pain and anger... only if that drunk driver that hit us was sober and never... spun out of control. Some 日 I hope his 心 gives out and he dies in jail.

Does any one feel the same?
posted by noahnstar1616
"Are okay, V?" Francine was checking me for bruises.

"I'm fine."

"We're so telling the principal." Zoey grabbed my arm.

"No, it's okay. She didn't hurt me." I rubbed my arm where Mercury dug her nails in. She didn't leave permanent marks.

"What happened?" They both waited for my response.

I told them how Mercury knew that I felt something when Cameron was visiting me in the hospital. How she knew I was trying to get him back. How I saw her eyes glowing red, like a sea witch's eyes when angry.

"You know what this means, right?" Francine and I waited for Zoey's answer. "That Mercury is the sea witch...
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Jed was a part of the Rebellion against the Syndicate of Alien Beings (S.A.B.). 或者 like most enslaved races call them, the Monsters. In 2067, S.A.B arrived on Earth in 搜索 of fuel sources for their machines, not expecting to find a whole planet that has been living for centuries unconquered. Caught unexpected, the S.A.B. slowly amassed their forces, while countries all across world united. North Korea, Russia, China, all those countries that were on the opposing sides during all the wars, united alongside all the other countries. With the whole world united, the U.W.O. (United World Order)formed...
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posted by DxCFan123
"Oh, 嘿 Sam!" I 说 as I found her in the hall while going to lunch. "How are you? 你 seem upset. Something wrong?" I said. The edges of my 短裙, 裙子 floated up as I walked. Marie's jewelery jingled along my neck, ears, wrists and fingers. It really hurt to get my ears pierced, but the earrings are so beautiful!

"Nothing's wrong" she murmured and pulled her arms closer to her chest. She looked away from me, at the floor. "Ah, come on! Something's gotta be wrong! Trust me! I know! One time, my cousin, Valeria, accidently fell off her carriage and twisted her ankle. But, still, she told us she...
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posted by noahnstar1616
My 心 rate increased, causing my 心 monitor to start beeping erratically. Not at the sight of Cameron, but at the sight of Mercury.

Cameron must've noticed because he ran up to me and said, "Vanessa, calm down."

I kept my eyes on Mercury. "What's she doing here?"

"You should be greatful that I came to see you", Mercury said.

"Mercury..." Cameron turned to face me. "She drove me here."

"After he hit you, the police too his car away", Mercury said, grabbing my 电视 vision remote and changing the channel.

"Hey!"

"Don't worry about the television, Vanessa." Cameron sat down on the 长椅, 沙发 chair...
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posted by dexisawesome
Jed was running. Running from a dark figure a few feet behind. "You will never escape!", the dark figure from behind yelled. "yes I will", he thought. He ran and ran, until he reached the dark grey building in the middle of the field. He ran inside and slammed the iron door shut. A few bangs came from the other side, but they subsided quickly. He ran down the hidden staircase that was under a 箱, 板条箱 in the small shack. He reached the bottom, and passed through the small passageway until he came to another door. He opened and entered the dimly lit room. Five other people were sitting around some...
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