Well.
Like with the other two. I taking a 'blast to my past' to give reviews that I read, originally back in 2011.
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written 由 one of my closest 粉丝 fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Much like Ecology, Applejackrocks thehumphrey, KingSimba4ever9 and probably KarinaBrony were the firsts to welcome me, and befriend me, here on fanpop, back in the day.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violantly turtures Humphrey, and enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am NOW. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy 树 friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exatly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back, on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
Do much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to mention it, lol.
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when 电影院 do that to you.
Well.
That's all I got.
The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.
In any case.
Please leave 评论 and suggestions for the 下一个 review episode.
Till then.
Here's some badass 语录 from the story.
"this whole Alpha and omega thing a disgrace" - Fang (or 'the traiter/bitch' as I call him)
"Today we moan the loss of a friend. A friend who taken from us from the Southern Pack.. NO MORE! We will allow them to rip our loved ones away from us! No longer, will we offer peace! IT IS TIME THEY LEARNED THE POWER OF RHE EASTEN AND WESTERN PACKS!.. We wil, rush forward!. FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH!" - Winston
"Omega twerp!" - Hunter
"WE WILL CRUSH WHAT THEY HOLD DEAR! WE WILL BREAK THERE DEFENCE! WE WILL KILL THEM ALL!" - Hunter
Like with the other two. I taking a 'blast to my past' to give reviews that I read, originally back in 2011.
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written 由 one of my closest 粉丝 fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Much like Ecology, Applejackrocks thehumphrey, KingSimba4ever9 and probably KarinaBrony were the firsts to welcome me, and befriend me, here on fanpop, back in the day.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violantly turtures Humphrey, and enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am NOW. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy 树 friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exatly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back, on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
Do much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to mention it, lol.
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when 电影院 do that to you.
Well.
That's all I got.
The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.
In any case.
Please leave 评论 and suggestions for the 下一个 review episode.
Till then.
Here's some badass 语录 from the story.
"this whole Alpha and omega thing a disgrace" - Fang (or 'the traiter/bitch' as I call him)
"Today we moan the loss of a friend. A friend who taken from us from the Southern Pack.. NO MORE! We will allow them to rip our loved ones away from us! No longer, will we offer peace! IT IS TIME THEY LEARNED THE POWER OF RHE EASTEN AND WESTERN PACKS!.. We wil, rush forward!. FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH!" - Winston
"Omega twerp!" - Hunter
"WE WILL CRUSH WHAT THEY HOLD DEAR! WE WILL BREAK THERE DEFENCE! WE WILL KILL THEM ALL!" - Hunter
The 下一个 morning Kate set out of the 巢穴, den, 书房 to hunt for some caribou and asked humphrey to come along he agreed hapilly because he loves to be around Kate wherever she goes.
They were about an 小时 into the hunt when a hunter came out of the bushes and Kate hears him she jolts 前锋, 期待 right when the hunter fires his 步枪 the bullet just missed kates leg, and immediately after the shot humphrey jumps up and pushes the gun out of the hunters hand and the hunter (amazed 由 the situation) takes one look at humphrey and runs back into the bushes.
After this happened they decided to quit the hunt and go back to the 巢穴, den, 书房 because Kate and humphrey were both in shock From this moment and from that point on Kate always hunts with Humphrey.
They were about an 小时 into the hunt when a hunter came out of the bushes and Kate hears him she jolts 前锋, 期待 right when the hunter fires his 步枪 the bullet just missed kates leg, and immediately after the shot humphrey jumps up and pushes the gun out of the hunters hand and the hunter (amazed 由 the situation) takes one look at humphrey and runs back into the bushes.
After this happened they decided to quit the hunt and go back to the 巢穴, den, 书房 because Kate and humphrey were both in shock From this moment and from that point on Kate always hunts with Humphrey.
Name: Terax
Ranking in Organization: XV
Original Name: Kate
Sex: Female
Age (human): 21
Mate: Huxley
Color: Brown
Element: Poison
Weapons: Two rusted Oathkeeper keyblades
Personality:
Terax is the nobody of Kate and the mate of Huxley. Terax was born when Kate, along with Humphrey, turned into a heartless on the night the heartless consumed the worlds. She, much like her mate, hates heartless. She will do anything to protect her 老友记 and her mate, even if it meant taking down a fellow organization member 或者 turning against them. She too controlls the Dusk nobodies and can be playful. But if 你 piss her off, be sure find a place to hide 或者 she will tear 你 up with her venomous keyblades (thats why they are rusted). She 爱情 玫瑰 like Marluxia but sometimes can have an attitude like Larxene. Some of her 老友记 include: Roxas, Axel, Marluxia, Vexen, Larxene, Namine, and Siax. She loves to also play with her Dusks that she controls.
I may add 更多 later.
Ranking in Organization: XV
Original Name: Kate
Sex: Female
Age (human): 21
Mate: Huxley
Color: Brown
Element: Poison
Weapons: Two rusted Oathkeeper keyblades
Personality:
Terax is the nobody of Kate and the mate of Huxley. Terax was born when Kate, along with Humphrey, turned into a heartless on the night the heartless consumed the worlds. She, much like her mate, hates heartless. She will do anything to protect her 老友记 and her mate, even if it meant taking down a fellow organization member 或者 turning against them. She too controlls the Dusk nobodies and can be playful. But if 你 piss her off, be sure find a place to hide 或者 she will tear 你 up with her venomous keyblades (thats why they are rusted). She 爱情 玫瑰 like Marluxia but sometimes can have an attitude like Larxene. Some of her 老友记 include: Roxas, Axel, Marluxia, Vexen, Larxene, Namine, and Siax. She loves to also play with her Dusks that she controls.
I may add 更多 later.
Kate ran and hid in a hollow log. ever since Winston Tony and eve died there had been war. Kate plugged her ears shut as a gun shot went off. Kate peered out from her log. mary had been shot. Kate smiled. she hated Mary always trying to mate with Humphrey. Kate snuck out of her log and snuck home. Luis Jessie and the twins masey and felicity all ran towards Kate. " mommy your alive!" cheered the puppys. "where's Humphrey?" asked Kate. " in your room." Kate couldent wait to feel humphreys soft 毛皮 and his moist nose. Kate walked into humphrey and hers room. "oh my gosh Kate." 说 Humphrey. Kate and Humphrey rubbed noses for a while. " are 你 ok?" asked Humphrey. " no, no I'm fine!" Humphrey looked down at kate's paws. " your not ok your paw is dislocated." gasped Humphrey.