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Well.

Like with the other two. I taking a 'blast to my past' to give reviews that I read, originally back in 2011.

First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written 由 one of my closest 粉丝 fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.

Much like Ecology, Applejackrocks thehumphrey, KingSimba4ever9 and probably KarinaBrony were the firsts to welcome me, and befriend me, here on fanpop, back in the day.

Uhh, anyway.

I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.


The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.

The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violantly turtures Humphrey, and enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am NOW. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.

Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.

I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy 树 friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).

Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.

Anyway.

One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.

Another neggative is. The story isn't exatly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back, on detail.

what else should I say?

I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
Do much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to mention it, lol.
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when 电影院 do that to you.

Well.
That's all I got.

The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.

In any case.
Please leave 评论 and suggestions for the 下一个 review episode.

Till then.
Here's some badass 语录 from the story.

"this whole Alpha and omega thing a disgrace" - Fang (or 'the traiter/bitch' as I call him)

"Today we moan the loss of a friend. A friend who taken from us from the Southern Pack.. NO MORE! We will allow them to rip our loved ones away from us! No longer, will we offer peace! IT IS TIME THEY LEARNED THE POWER OF RHE EASTEN AND WESTERN PACKS!.. We wil, rush forward!. FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH!" - Winston

"Omega twerp!" - Hunter

"WE WILL CRUSH WHAT THEY HOLD DEAR! WE WILL BREAK THERE DEFENCE! WE WILL KILL THEM ALL!" - Hunter
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posted by SentinelPrime89
Humphrey, Kate and the pups were running up the snowy mountains. The same snowy mountains that Humphrey and Kate had trekked before.
Behind them, Stinky and Claudette were playing in the cold white powder. They were having a good, fun time unlike Runt who continued to stick close to his mother and father. Stinky noticed this throughout the 日 even as he right now was occupied with his sister. He called out to his little brother, "Runt! 你 wanna play?"
Runt paid no mind to his older sibling. Humphrey watched down at him, Kate doing the same.
"Go on, Runt. We're making good time. 你 can go play...
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as y'all know i loved Alpha and Omega 2. it re-captures the spirit of the first movie (which is my all time favorite) and it does it perfectly even though the ending felt a tiny bit rushed. looks like i'm not the only one who says that, critics do too. i mean, this movie has a 60% in Rotten Tomatoes, which means mixed-to-positive and that critics agree it was a fantastic sequel.
yea, i admit that they needed 2 work a little 更多 on the 动画片 and the ending, but A&O 2 was great in almost every other way. great plot, great story, great voice acting, it had humor, it had 心 and lovable...
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posted by westernunit-211
嘿 what's up guys this is my first idea and I hope I do very well on it so here I go and enjoy!

I decided to include my own team and myself into this 文章 to see how it goes, hope it works out.

Here's the difference, I'm not going to be a wolf. I've had a few imaginations on how this might work.




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Counter Attack!
Day1 07:34 hrs
Dare 狗 212
Frost's 安全 house
Jasper National Park, Canada

Frost was at the briefing 巢穴, den, 书房 with "Poet", "Sandman", "Rocket", and David. David is Frost's only son. Frost had David two years 以前 with his mate Stacy an Alpha 狼 from Alaska. She died when David...
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posted by TheChriZ1995
A/N: Wrote this awhile 以前 for Fanfiction.net and decided to add it on here.

Summary: Kate is out doing a solo border patrol until she comes across a new born pup left alone in the woods. She doesn't know how it got there, but decides to bring it back to her parents and see if they know what to do with it.

Kate's POV

The 日 was like any other, the late afternoon sun was shining brightly overhead and clouds marched along the sky. Summer was in full 摇摆, 秋千 meaning everyday was pretty much the same, hot and sunny. I didn't mind the heat, in fact the only time it did bother me was if I was running...
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posted by AlphawolfAlisha
Here's one of best comedy I've come up with so enjoy this first episode and please tell me what 你 think and feel and please leave 评论 below thank you! Steve-o is voiced as Humphrey.

Starring Humphrey, Kate, Garth, and Lilly.

Scene 1: "The water slide prank"


Humphrey: "hey this is the water slide prank and i'm going to prank on my mate, Garth and Lilly on this fake scenery". (goes and sets up the fake scenery) Humphrey: "okay we are set and now we must let them walk into this scenery right here and see what happens". (runs behind a 衬套, 布什 and watches them walk to the fake)

Kate: " hmm this...
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The Life of Cap
Chapter 16 - Who are you?

Author: Well I'm out of Idea's :( So I might stop the series here. It took me a week to think of this one so. If *IF* I make another one then it might be in 2 weeks 或者 so. If 你 guys have Idea's and 你 want to share message me.     As Rick made his way to Jasper he started getting hungry. He looked around and seen a turkey, so he crept up on the turkey. He was right behind he inched 前锋, 期待 just two steps. Then pounced on the turkey. And bit into his neck instantly killing it.

Once he finished off the turkey, and he wondered...
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posted by SnowFangXi
Hi everyone I just got this from my editor...
More will be added to this. But we will have to wait till he's done with the rest...

Anyways without further ado here's the editors edition of chapter 1!

SNOW
AN ALPHA AND OMEGA STORY

By Snow Wolf

CHAPTER I
LONE WOLF


I


It was a beautiful 日 in Jasper National Park. The sun was out and the radiance of the green 草 shone in the bright morning light. A gentle cool breeze flowed through my fur, making my 涂层, 外套 sway from side to side. The storms had been brutal the past two days but no matter the weather, nothing was going to ruin this perfect day.

I was playing...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
狼 Hunters Attack!

Nick: *sees a portal open* Eh?

*a Purple Creature with Silver Claws walks through*

Nick: Who are you?

Maku: I am Maku, Five 星, 星级 狼 Hunter!

Nick: Why are 你 here?

Maku: *Sees Astra* That!

Astra: Nick...i'm...

Nick: Yes Astra?

Astra: I am pregnant!

Nick: Really?!!

Astra: *nods*

Maku: I must destroy her!

Nick: I won't let you! *Slashes Maku*

Maku: *jumps*

Nick: I won't allow 你 to! *fires a Ki laser at Maku*

Maku: *guards*

Nick: I must defeat you!

Maku: *grins and fires purple laser at Nick*

Nick: *it goes through his Arm* Ow!

Maku: *slashes Nick*

Nick: *dodges and lands in river*

Maku: Finally!...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Episode 10: Pascal vs 0! (part 1)

Announcer: Now it's time for the finals to start! For our first fight, Pascal versus Zero!

Pascal: *gets in photon Armor*

Zero: *becomes a Horse-like being with a white mask* Now Pascal...

Pascal: I will destroy you...

Zero: I doubt that...

*battle starts*

Kate: *in the audience* Go Pascal!

Humphrey: Pascal 你 can do it!

Zero: I 说 i doubted it... *summons a Dragon-like creature* Aberconway, destroy!

Aberconway: *blasts 火, 消防 at Pascal*

Pascal: *slashing it, destroying it* This is it?

Zero: Of course not! *summons a Ram-like beast and a green Falcon-like beast* Eale,...
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On November 26 2012, the US Government infested the water systems of a town called Oghan Mash, Lowa/America, with a virus appearently called Trixie.

The victims of this virus may protray zombie like behaviors at times, and often look like them. But they are NOT turned into zombies, instead something possibly worse. The victims of Trixie become LITERARY insane. They forget everything about themselves, (one guy burned alive his own family after being infected).

In the end of it all, Oghan Mash was liturary destoried in a massive explosion.

However.. Trixie wasn't.

After nearly 2 months of traveling...
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posted by TimberHumphrey
The 下一个 day, Winston comes running to the den, urgently.

Winston: Kate?
Kate: Hi, dad. Good morning.
Winston: Where's Humphrey?
Kate: He's back there.
Winston: Humphrey!
Humphrey: Winston! Sorry about that. I didn't here 你 coming
(Winston just sighs)
Kate: Dad? Is everything alright?
Winston: I didn't think so. Hunter's outta his cage!
Humphrey: WHAT? But i thought he was...
Winston: Not anymore. He killed Hutch.
Kate: Oh my god!
Winston: Yeah, Hutch's dead!
Humphrey: That dirty bastard!
Lilly: (Comes running to them) Is everything okay?
Humphrey: Hunter's outta his cage. He killed Hutch!
Garth: What? That's...
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