This is just something i started writing.. Im not sure where its wanting to go.. but please 评论 and tell me if i should continue 或者 not.. this is just the opening chapter. It gets better from here. But please let me know.

I walked through the halls of my high school alone. I tried to ignore the stares people were giving me but it was hard. This had to be one of first times anyone had seen me walk the halls without my best friend Kayla. But ever since Kayla had hooked up with this jock jerk Justin, she never had time for me anymore. Which bothered me 更多 than I let on. I turned down one hallway and headed for the back hallway 由 the choir and band rooms. It was one of the only hallways that weren’t monitored 由 security cameras, therefore making it one of the most 流行的 hallways for the couples. And of course my first class was in that hallway. It was bad enough not having a boyfriend, but having to walk through making out couples only made it worse. I knew I would find Kayla back there sucking face with her tool of a boyfriend. Yuck. I pushed through the doors and instantly identified my best friend, pushed up against the wall, 接吻 Justin like it was the last 日 on Earth.
“Uh umm.” I cleared my throat loudly. They both sprang apart and Kayla glared at me, straightening her clothes.
“ Geez, Nissa. Did 你 have to scare us like that? We thought it was the dean 或者 something.” Jerk Face Justin snapped.
“ Yeah I did. Kayla and I are gonna be late.” I glared at him, even though our class was just twenty feet away.
“ She can stay a few 更多 minutes.” Justin said, regaining his cool. He ran a hand through his sandy blonde hair, and leveled smug green eyes at me. He was quite a looker. Too bad he was such a jerk.
“ She’s coming with me.” I 说 in a fake nice voice and grabbed Kayla’s arm, dragging her with me before she could think.
“ Bye Babe!” She yelled back to Justin dramatically.
“ Oh please, Kay.” I rolled my eyes. She was way too serious with this guy.
“ 你 know what Nissa? Me and Justin have been talking-” She started. I interrupted, already knowing where this was headed.
“ 你 and Justin talk? Wow. I thought all 你 did was suck face.” I 说 sarcastically. Kayla huffed a breath.
“ Yes, we talk. And we have decided that the only reason 你 don’t like him is because you’re just jealous 你 don’t have a boyfriend like I do.”
I stopped in shock.
“ What?” I exclaimed.
She rattled on, oblivious to my mouth hanging open.
“ So, we’ve decided to get 你 a boyfriend so 你 wont hate Justin so much.”
I felt my anger start to build.
“ Me not having a boyfriend has nothing to do with me not liking Justin. He is a jerk.”
“ No he is not!” Kayla almost shrieked.
“ Whatever. But in any case, you’re too serious with him. He only wants one thing from you.” I had started walking, too angry to notice Kayla not walking with me. I didn’t notice it until she grabbed my arm and whirled me around. It happened so fast, I couldn’t even start to 鸭 when her fist came at my face. I managed to 移动 just a little, so her fist glanced off my cheekbone, breaking most of the force of the blow, and slid into my eye.
For a second, Kayla looked like she couldn’t believe what she had just done. Then her face hardened and she flipped her 板栗 hair over her shoulder.
“ I don’t think 你 need me to tell 你 that 你 will be needing to find another ride home. Justin is no longer offering that service to you, Janissa.”
I didn’t really realize how serious this was. But between the 冲床 and the use of my real name, it was starting to sink it. Without waiting for me to say anything, Kayla turned and stalked to our first 小时 choir class. Suddenly, I realized the throbbing in my cheek and eye and figured she had hit me harder than I thought. I needed to go to the bathroom and take inventory of the damage. I walked into my choir class and located my teacher. She allowed me to go to the bathroom. I grabbed the hall pass and walked quickly to the bathroom, the throbs intensifying. As I walked down the hall, I got a glimpse of someone going around the corner in front of me. I shook off the uneasy feeling that had suddenly washed over me and entered the girl’s restroom. I stared into the huge mirror that almost covered one wall. My blue eyes were huge and shining with unshed tears. My long blonde hair looked fine, but under my right eye was a beautiful mass of blue, black and yellow already starting to form. I was going to have a wonderful black eye. Maybe I could call my mom and have her come and get me so I could be meat on it. That’s what they always did in the movies. I walked slowly out of the bathroom, trying to 辩论 what to do. I ran right into a rock hard body.
    I almost fell back from the impact of hitting such a solid object. Long arms wrapped around me, helping me find my balance again.
“ Wow. That’s quite a shiner.” A deep voice said.
I looked up quickly, taking in the pretty face above me. 翠, 翡翠 green eyes peered down at me, surrounded my light blonde hair, that was a little on the longish side, and styled to flop down over his forehead. I resisted wanting to push it back. I stepped back reluctantly, taking him in.
He looked like a band boy. A black tee-shirt and worn and ripped jeans showed off his nice body.
I tried to keep from staring. He was a bit on the pale side, but over all was very buff. When I finally drug my eyes off of him, I noticed he was doing the same thing to me. I blushed, feeling very self conscious.
“ I’m Nick.” He said, offering a hand.
“ Janissa.” I answered, and hesitantly placed my hand in his. Instantly, I felt a rush flow over my body. Something felt like it was tickling my brain. Cool fingers felt like they were sliding along my memories. I stared into his 翠, 翡翠 green eyes, which were now streaked with a lighter green color. A memory flashed in front of my eyes, but not one of my own. A person was coming. I was trying to run, but unable to get away. The person was coming closer and closer.
“ Its okay. This will only hurt for a moment. 你 will be better after I do this. It wont hurt that bad.” A voice said, colder than the pavement under my skin. Why was I laying on the road? Cold hands lifted me, and suddenly a brief needle of pain pierced my neck…The memory suddenly disappeared.
Nick was staring at me with 翠, 翡翠 green eyes wide with disbelief. I stared back, equally confused. His eyes suddenly cleared, and the confidence returned.
“ Well, its very nice to meet you, Janissa.” He said, smiling. My knees sagged as a dimple showed up in his right cheek.
“ 你 can call me Nissa. All my 老友记 do.” I 说 automatically. Nick grinned, revealing shiny white even teeth.
“ Great. 你 need a ride home?” He smiled placed a hand on my lower back, guiding me toward the office.
“ How did 你 know I needed to go home?” I asked, confused.
Nick paused a minute. “ Well who wouldn’t with a shiner like that?”
I nodded, convinced. “ Right. Well if 你 wouldn’t mind, that would be great.” A little warning was ringing at the back of my mind. 你 barely know this guy! He could be a kidnapper! Don’t let him drive 你 home!
I shook all the doubts out of my mind. He was a nice guy. I trusted him already. For some odd reason. Again I felt the prickly feeling of someone watching me streak down my spine. I shuddered and looked around but no one was there. I shook my head and followed Nick out of the school.