ok so this is my first stoy so please 评论 and tell me if 你 want me to continue and if 你 have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the 下一个 thing i knew he was on 最佳, 返回页首 of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward 说 angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i 说 through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are 你 and what do 你 want!?!i asked hard.my name is 茉莉, 茉莉花 im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i 说 guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the 下一个 thing i knew he was on 最佳, 返回页首 of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward 说 angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i 说 through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are 你 and what do 你 want!?!i asked hard.my name is 茉莉, 茉莉花 im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i 说 guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.