Twilight

I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be

I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have 发布 it over there too.

here are 链接 to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. 你 will recognize many scenes I kept. 你 will notice some things that I have combined. 你 will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.

There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for...

"Sometimes 爱情 isn't enough"

Those were the last words I ever heard Jacob Black say. At first, I didn’t care. For three years I didn’t care. I was too dark and thirsty to care about any of my past. I almost forgot some of it. I almost forgot him.

It’s been ten years and those fears of mine came true. The Volturi wanted me to 加入 them and I refused. But they didn’t play nice. No, they didn’t, not at all. Instead of letting me walk away, sorry that I had refused their offer, they gave me an ultimatum. Either I joined them 或者 the Cullen’s died. This time, they didn’t find a way out....

This is my first Twilight 粉丝 fiction. I started 写作 it a bit after I read Eclipse. So it's set after that, and does not mesh with Breaking Dawn. Anyway, I got the idea while listening to the song Unchained Melody, hence the title, and started 写作 it. I'm looking for a beta reader, btw! Feedback is much appreciated.


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Unchained Melody

“Cold feet?” I heard his voice whisper into my ear. I would have jumped 或者 screamed if it wasn’t for the fact I seem to be in a catatonic state. I knew it was Jacob’s voice, but I couldn’t see him. Even if he were to walk up in front of my wide...

This is short but I just wanted to get through it quickly. I didn't want to write it but it had to happen.


My brilliant plan that sounded absolutely brilliant wasn’t so amazing when I sat and thought about it. It seemed quite simple when I first thought of it. What was the only way Charlie would have no control over me? The answer was my mother. My plan was to go back to England, where my mother was, and Charlie could no longer have a say in what I did. Edward would follow me and he could bring his whole family to 伦敦 if he wanted to. But the 更多 I thought about it, the 更多 I knew it...

Chapter 3 - 你 Cannot Be Serious
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"HAHA! 你 GUYS ARE HILLARIOUS!" I laughed. I laughed so hard that I fell out of my chair. Bella helped me up and the others just stared at me.
"You have to be joking, vampires?" I asked with a chuckle.
"We are Katrina, and we are offended that 你 take this as a joke," Carlisle said.
"I am very sorry."
"Its alright Katrina, but we are telling the truth. Please believe us," Jasper asked. I nodded.
Vampires--you cannot be serious.
"I'm gonna go," I told them, finishing my last cinnamon roll and walking out the door....

Do 你 like this kind of stories?
Actually, I’m not obsessed wih vampires, but I really liked this story.

How do 你 describe Bella?
She’s a strong character. It’s easy to relate to her and 爱情 her from the start.

Did 你 meet with Stphenie Meyer?
She was very involved with the production of the movie, she checked the script with Catherine and she loved it. She joined us while filming, but just for fun, she never got too involved.

What was it like working with Robert?
It was really cool, he’s a great actor. In this movie he plays the ideal man. I don’t think 你 can find a guy like...

Sorry for the delay, hope 你 like it!

Edward caught her and ran with her inside and up a huge set of stairs. " Carlisle!" He yelled desperately.

" What is it?" Carlisle said, suddenly right 下一个 to Edward. Right away he started to check her pulse, then turned his head towards me and 说 " Who is that?"

" Oh, that's the girl Seth imprinted on." Edward 说 destractedly. He was holding Bella's hand and was staring intently at her closed eyelids as if to try and will her to wake up.

" Well Bella just needs to rest, she'll wake up when she's ready. 你 must admit that she's been through a rough time...

Chapter One - Little Miss Katrina
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I looked out to the clouds. Renee-uh I mean Mom-stares at me. Phil, eh, dad, keeps his eyes on the road.
"Ughh! Why do 你 have to bring me to meet my new sister? She doesnt have to know about me, CAN WE PLEASE GO HOME?" I beg. Renee smiles.
"Kat, Bella will be glad to see you."
"Its not her I dont want to meet," I pout.
"Oh, Edward. Dont worry, he wont bite."
I scowl.
"Dear God, PLEASE LET ME LIVE!" I beg. Phil and Renee laugh.
"You will 爱情 Nessie," Phil assures me. Who names their daughter Renensmee? Who? My...

i know that it sounds like twilight a bit but i didn't know how else to get her through the day. chapter 3 coming up!!





His eyes searched mine, almost as if he was trying to read me. His eyebrows creased together and his gaze became 更多 intense. The small dark haired girl turned around, wanting to know why her partner had let the shuttlecock fall. She followed his gaze to me and gave me a smile, 展示 bright white teeth. He gave me one last gaze and returned to his game. I looked away from him and back to Mike who had been watching me watching the boy.
“Who’s that?” I asked, nodding at...

heres the 下一个 one i hope 你 like it

chapter four
(mia's pov)
my first four months as a vampire, went well other than the fact that i couldn't go places with people if i werent walking through the forrest with seth, i was hanging out with my new brother's and sister's, i got along well with everyone, i was rose and alice's 芭比娃娃 doll, i knew how to play the 钢琴 when i was human so i played with edward, i started learning latin with bella, i arm wrestled emmett, played chess with jasper, me and nessie were really close we spoke a lot watched films together and gave each other make overs. today...