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Okay so I have written a story similar to this. Same concept just 更多 different. The other story I 发布 was/is on fanfiction.net I wrote that story years 以前 and now looking back at it, I want to change it up and fix my grammar and what not. This story picks up right after new moon before eclipse. No Victoria battle, no 接吻 Jake, no marriage, no Renesmee, at least idk yet. (; Enjoy. Review. Please.
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What if Edward and Jacob left Bella for a while and as this time alone for her, causes her pain, 更多 pain then they ever imagined. She turns...

I understand that I will probably get a lot of hate crime for this but I don't care THE WORLD DESEVES TO KNOW! THE TRUTH!
why harry potter is better than twilight.

1. HP 粉丝 don't rely on characters looks to like a story/movie.

2. even though twilight has good romantic scenes they have nothing else! HP has romance, action, adventure, friendship, even death!

3. OH and in twilight I didn't know that blood doesn't come out of your head 或者 neck when 你 chop it off!

4. HP is for females males and for all ages. Twilight is for teenage girls! I am a teenage girl and I even hate twilight!

5. J.K Rowling...

I don't really care for Jacob that much, but this a scene that I've always wanted to see written: Jacob's wedding with Nessie. Now, I'm not the best writer in the world, so please don't judge too harshly:

Renesmee sat on the living room 长椅, 沙发 with Jacob's arm tight around her waist. Beside them sat Alice, a big pile of bridal magazines in her lap.
"I just can't believe 你 two are getting married already," she gushed, flipping through the glossy pages of a Modern Bride issue. "It seems like just yesterday Ness was still in diapers. Oh, where has the time gone?"
Renesmee rolled her eyes.
"Anyway,"...

Here's chapter 4 enjoy:)
Hala's Pov
I never thought that i would fall in 爱情 after my mother died.I thought that life suck and there wasn't any reason for me to be here. I have no hope but until today when i meant Seth. He made me feel like there was something to live for. Like i worth something. I've never loved anyone beside my mother. Every 吻乐队（Kiss） and touch was a magentic shocked through my body. It felt great. Seth was explaining to me imprinting that every 狼 imprints in when they find their 'Soul Mate' and they will do everything for them. The Seth told me that he imprinted on me and...

Dear Edward


Edward, 你 are THE guy according to 99.9% of the girls out there but not me no siree! here is why:

Watching Bella while she is asleep:
I get that 你 wanna protect her blah blah all the romantic stuff, but 你 started doing the watch-her-while-she-is-asleep thingy RIGHT after 你 met her. What were 你 protecting her from? oh right 你 were scared that she would die in her sleep 或者 something, would have been interesting to see how 你 would have saved her from that one.

The whole deal with blood:
Do not care whether 你 drink human blood, animal blood 或者 any other blood. Its disturbing...