46th Annual Cinema Audio Society Awards

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Jasper

She gently guided me toward a booth. I barely noticed the stares. For a moment, she looked very 迷失 in thought, but it passed quickly. After she was seated, I slid into the booth. She beamed up at me "Always the gentleman" What did she mean "always"? She acted like we were old friends. Had I known her before? I felt sure I would remember if this 天使 ever crossed my path. She was short and had features. Her hair was black and short. It went in all directions, yet it didn't look messy. It was perfect. I looked into her...

*by Stephenie Meyer*



TWILIGHT - chapter 17 - THE GAME


"So I hear you're getting my girl to watch baseball." Only in Washington would the fact that it was raining buckets have no bearing at all on the playing of outdoor sports.
"Yes, sir, that's the plan." He didn't look surprised that I'd told my father the truth. He might have been listening, though.
"Well, 更多 power to you, I guess."
Charlie laughed, and Edward joined in.
"Okay." I stood up. "Enough humor at my expense. Let's go." I walked back to the hall and pulled on my jacket. They followed.
"Not too late, Bella."
"Don't worry, Charlie,...

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PREFACE,

I no what its like to have your life flase before 你 eyes. Knowing everything 你 once loved, had and owned, Gone. Seeing, Hearing and feeling everything disappear. The plessure of an embrace 由 a loved one, the deception of realising a new enemey, the immature sounds of kids, that one tingley touch of a finger tip, the silet swaying sound of the 草 and trees, feeling the crushing and snapping of 识骨寻踪 in your hands, that sweet sweet sensation of warm fresh...