this is my first fanfiction and it probley aint that good so could 你 please comment
chapter one
the sun was shining through the window, i felt the heat on my back, i rapped my arms around edward we both knew we had to get up not that we wanted to. i sighed and started to get up when i felt a strong arm pull be back down on the 床, 床上 "were do 你 think your going" he wispered as he kissed my neck.i kissed him and sighed "we have to get up" he started to shake his head and kissed me again "edward we really have to get up,nessie is gonna be awake soon" he ignored me and carried on 接吻 me just under my jaw, i gave in then and wrapped my arms back around his neck and started 接吻 him so passionatley that this time he was the one to remind me that we had to get up that our little girl was waking up in the 下一个 room and as always he reminded me with one word "nessie" he crowed in my ear. i was up and out of his arms in a second, nessie wasnt exactly a little girl anymore she is technacally seven years old but phisically she looks sixteen years of age,she is really smart and spends all her spear time studying of with jacob.me and edward were in our over sized wardrobe when i heard my best friend and favirote 狼 running to our door,he would knock in exactly two seconds,i sighed and put my blue v-neck jumper on the walked to the door.he didnt even say high he just rushed past me still in 狼 form into nessies room i ran after him what has him so worried "jake,jake" i asked i was worried now. in the living room i heard edward answer the door again i got a wiff of the scent and realised it was alice, i heard edward growl from hearing her thoughts . i turned back to jake wanting 答案 he was in his human form now he sat down on the side of nessie's 床, 床上 and started to stroke her hair i waited for him to tell me what's going on,he looked up at me and 说 two words that made me frezze into place "the volturi"
chapter one
the sun was shining through the window, i felt the heat on my back, i rapped my arms around edward we both knew we had to get up not that we wanted to. i sighed and started to get up when i felt a strong arm pull be back down on the 床, 床上 "were do 你 think your going" he wispered as he kissed my neck.i kissed him and sighed "we have to get up" he started to shake his head and kissed me again "edward we really have to get up,nessie is gonna be awake soon" he ignored me and carried on 接吻 me just under my jaw, i gave in then and wrapped my arms back around his neck and started 接吻 him so passionatley that this time he was the one to remind me that we had to get up that our little girl was waking up in the 下一个 room and as always he reminded me with one word "nessie" he crowed in my ear. i was up and out of his arms in a second, nessie wasnt exactly a little girl anymore she is technacally seven years old but phisically she looks sixteen years of age,she is really smart and spends all her spear time studying of with jacob.me and edward were in our over sized wardrobe when i heard my best friend and favirote 狼 running to our door,he would knock in exactly two seconds,i sighed and put my blue v-neck jumper on the walked to the door.he didnt even say high he just rushed past me still in 狼 form into nessies room i ran after him what has him so worried "jake,jake" i asked i was worried now. in the living room i heard edward answer the door again i got a wiff of the scent and realised it was alice, i heard edward growl from hearing her thoughts . i turned back to jake wanting 答案 he was in his human form now he sat down on the side of nessie's 床, 床上 and started to stroke her hair i waited for him to tell me what's going on,he looked up at me and 说 two words that made me frezze into place "the volturi"
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight 粉丝 I have joined this club. I fell in 爱情 after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of 阅读 the books. If 你 could please at least say in the beginning of your 文章 that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the 图书 so much 更多 and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for 阅读 when I shouldn't be. Thank 你 so VERY much.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were 金牌 and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend 或者 girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in 爱情 and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would 爱情 edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the 图书 yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank 你 for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please 评论 of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in 爱情 and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would 爱情 edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the 图书 yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank 你 for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please 评论 of wat u think of my article...=þ
YOu know what my friend Adriana I got her this awesome Chritmas preasent it is a Twilight shrit that I got a the Willowbrick Mall (Also Adriana is obsesed with Twlight)
thanks for 阅读 im really new at this as some of guys can tell