暮光之城系列 Article: my opinion about the movie !

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posted by fegzii

it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie 你 know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... 或者 with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e 钢琴 for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)

but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !

tubby2002, the_bunkster and 1 other like this

Leytonfan4ever I keep reading about how Stephenie Meyer appeared, who did she play?? I didn't see her........?

fegzii after waylon dies and charlie and bella went to the cafeteria she appears ordering breakfast like 2 seconds but it was a great idea hehe

SaveMe620 Billy can drive you know. It is possible to still drive under his condition. The sparkling effect was amazing. It was better than I thought it would be. It literally looked like thousands of tiny diamonds all over his body. You do have to remember it is a low-budget film, meaning they didn't have the money to really make the special effects absolutely astounding. The Victoria part I agree with. Unless Edwards too wrapped up in Bella's argument about wanted to be changed. Edward isn't supposed to sparkle when he's on the piano. What gave you the impression he was supposed to?

musiclikelove i agree. i really enjoyed it. it was a very good movie, however, i was disappointed with the fact that they took a lot away from the other characters to get the point across. it seemed a bit rushed, and not natural. the actors did an INCREDIBLE job. they were all absolutely amazing. i loved them, but i honestly blame the writers, and the lack of funding for them not having a lot of things that defined the other Cullens.

saraplain it was awsome but i agree it was rushed but i truly belive that they will have more than enough money 4 new moon

fegzii saveme620 when he is playing the piano the sunlight enters through the window ... but however it was awsome haha i love twilight !

angy7sdg ok... the movie was good ,it wasn't bad tho... i did really enjoyed =) all the characters did a great job . and YES... IT was a little bit RUSHED , the skipped importants parts from the book. but also they were some things like: *the first kiss, it wasn't in the meadow , it was in the bed :( but i still liked it.. *they did never said " I LOVE YOU " :( in any part of the movie .. and that's kinda disappointed. however i still love the movie, i'm goin to see it again.. =)

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HUMAN CULLEN part 4

posted by mia1emmett

PART 3:
"hey, my name's Mike Newton" i 说 "hey, Elizabeth Cullen. but i think 你 knew that" he laughed and 说 "walk 你 to class?" i smiled and 说 "no thanks, Emmett and I have all the same classes" Mike looked sad but he just nodded and walked away. I ran into Alice and she 说 "hey, your brother Jasper is so nice!" i smiled at her and 说 "did he tell 你 my name?" she nodded and i told her "call me Liz" she smiled and nodded. i started walking to class Alice is so nice and she does seem perfect for Jasper! i smiled to myself and i bumped into something that felt like a brick wall....

My Broken 心

posted by LexisFaith

This is a VAMPIRE DIARIES one-shot in Stefan's POV. If I didn't put it on here, it would never get read so, before 你 starting chewing me out for that, I KNOW!! Okay, I really hope 你 guys like this.
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I laid back on my bed, shoving my palms into my eyes, to try and stop the tears. Despite my efforts, tears seaped through and soaked my hair and pillow.

Just a week ago, Elena was laying beside me, bringing light into my old battered room. She was running her fingers though my hair, telling me how everything would work out. She was 接吻 me with...

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HUMAN CULLEN part 1

posted by mia1emmett

i made the Cullen's human and i added a character.
Idea: Dr.Cullen and his wife Esme have 4 adopted children.Emmett and Elizabeth twins, then Edward and Jasper and Renesmee
**twilight is not owned 由 me, a.k.a all the characters that belong to the book belong to S.Meyer. the only thing owned 由 me is Elizabeth**
***The characters might be different, they are in the way i thought of them***
*Elizabeth :: 6'4", dark brown hair that looks almost black that was wavy, light brown eyes.*

Elizabeth's P.O.V:
Renesmee ran down the stairs she was holding out BoB Emmett's pet duck. Emmett jumped off the...

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New found Sunshine Chap 12

posted by NeeNee14

I got out of the bed, but Cords were puling me back.I ripped them out my arm and the machines started beeping rapidly. Carlisle came in, he looked at me and walked over to me and wrapped me in his arms. I stood there and cried. I didn't notice he was gone and someone else came in to hug me. These arms where warm...
I looked up at who was holding me.She looked back at me and smiled. I saw my reflection in her eyes. I looked horrible, my eyes where puffy and my hair was a mess.
"He loves you, he would never do anything to hurt you...and if he ever did hurt you.I will kill him..I don't care if He's...

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Alice's Obsession Part Two

posted by basketballstar

This is a follow on to my story of Alice's Obsession. It was slightly difficult to write, as I never intended a follow on for the first one! Please 评论 and tell me what 你 think!

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The night was pitch black as I approached my house. The moon shone down upon it, creating an eerie shadow across the meadow. The fact that there were no lights on inside didn’t strike me as strange, as I could hear the thoughts inside. I managed to shut them out before I could get too grossed out.... I made a mental note to stay away from all their rooms.
I scaled the side of the building quickly....

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When they all come back Chap 10

posted by NeeNee14

Edward was taking us to the Hamptons for a couple of weeks before he goes back to school. His family was already there, so we would tell them the new about our engagement when we see them.

We arrived at this big white house, it was so beautiful and had alot of balconies. I took the bags and carried them upstairs, no one was here. I heard the door 钟, 贝尔 ring and was about to answer it but Edward was already there. I saw a girl with 草莓 blonde hair at the door, she was all smiles.
"Eddie!!!!It so good to see you." She 说 and wrapped her arms around his neck.
"You too Tanya." He 说 and...

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just a twist chapter 14

posted by mia1emmett

:) ;) i 爱情 how i ended this chapter
Chapter 14
School is fun
Today was my first 日 at the packs school. Me Paul and Jared are in the same grade then Jake, Quill, Embry, Leah then Seth. It was 6:30 I got up and walked to Jake’s bathroom quickly showered and grabbed a t-shirt with a peace sign and all over 写作 that 说 peace. Then I grabbed cut off shorts. I changed and walked out grabbed my white nikes and let Jake in to change and get ready. I made us breakfast and I noticed that Billy was...

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just a twist chapter 13

posted by mia1emmett

Tell me if 你 want to see *sparks* ;)
Chapter 13
Welcome to the pack
I drove into Jakes drive way and I turned my car off. It was raining so my vampire scent had gone. I walked out into the soaking rain and knocked on jakes door. Jacob answered it and 说 “right this way”. I walked in and saw the whole pack was there jake, embry, seth, paul, sam, leah, jared, quil. them all and sat down on the empty chair I 说 “um.. I am guessing jake told 你 all to come. Well thing is the Volturi are coming they 冶炼, 闻到 me, Edward, and Emmett in Italy...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 6~ [TWENTY]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Six
BuffyFaithfan1
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[TWENTY]
    Later that night, I got out of the shower, ready to go to bed, anxious for Verona's arrival tomorrow morning. I was tired and anxious. If you're anxious, doesn't that mean that 你 should be awake and a bit energized? Anyways, I am tired and anxious, and if that wasn't possible before, it now is.
    "You tired?" I asked Jerek once I crawled into bed.
    "Yea. Being nervous, and now anxious, made me tired. Plus, I had to fight a few people in...

Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 6~ [FOURTEEN]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Six
BuffyFaithfan1
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[FOURTEEN]
    Five 分钟 later, seven knocks came to the door again, and I let Ethan back into the room.
    "He's there. I told him to lock the door, and watch out for people." Ethan said, and I felt better now.
    "Thanks so much." I said, and he nodded.
    "So, when does Shropee get here?" He asked.
    "We don't know. She 说 she'll knock ten times on the door so we know it's her and Jerek." Tabra answered.
    "Alright....

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 6~ [TWELVE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Six
BuffyFaithfan1
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[TWELVE]
    "Cydnee, right?" The doctor said, and I nodded. "You must be Tabra." Tabra nodded. "Hi, I'm Dr. Black. But call me Ethan, please."
    "Alright, Ethan." Tabra rose to his feet and shook his hand. "Nice to meet ya'."
    "Yea. Can I ask 你 something, Ethan?" I sat on my bed, and he nodded.
    "Did 你 ever have Verona as a patient?" I asked him. "She's on this floor, room 23."
    "Yes, I did. I know why...

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just a twist chapter 12

posted by mia1emmett

i know this is short sorry.
Chapter 12
DREAM
I was running with Embry and Seth. Embry stopped me and I asked “what? We have to go!” but then I heard Sam say “Embry don’t do it she’s not ready” Jake grabbed my hand but Embry smacked it away and growled. I tried to run but he held tighter, I screamed ‘help!’ and Paul came running to my side. He pushed Embry and grabbed me and started running with me but then Embry pushed Paul and Paul got mad. But then I gave Paul a look and he walked away and that’s when...

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just a twist chapter 11

posted by mia1emmett

this is stellas car. its a jaguar color black roof open.

Chapter 11
“oh boy”
Edward and everyone greeted us at the door, rose walked up to Nessie and 说 “you spent to much time with dogs, other then one of your aunts being a dog” I rolled my eyes and I walked up stairs thinking about how me and Seth were talking about how it would be so cool if we swam all the way from La push to where ever. I must have been so deep in thought I didn’t hear the door open because Emmett’s face was in my face. I rolled off my 床, 床上 “ok I am ready” Emmett’s...

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just a twist chapter 8

posted by mia1emmett

i am thinking of ending it in the 下一个 chapter.

Chapter 8
HERE COMES THE WOLFS
Emmett told the family that he was going to drive around with me; I knew it was going to be a long ride. I rolled my eyes at that fact. The whole car ride Emmett was 表演 like a father I wanted to laugh so badly but I couldn’t I knew it wasn’t good for me to right now. Edward would have 说 “smart girl” if he was here. Boy do I wish jasper was though Emmett was so tense. I was scared to step into the car. As I...

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just a twist chapter 6

posted by mia1emmett

this is how i pictured Estella

ok this is very simple and short but you'll 爱情 the 下一个 chapter :)

Chapter 6
WOULD YOU? O.o
Emmett honked his horn in my face and my face must have been funny
because I saw jasper and Emmett laugh, Alice came to my rescue and
smacked both of them. I laughed and opened the door. Alice and jasper
gave me a hard time about wanting to leave for Italy. I noticed rose was all silent. It puzzled me. I felt a change in emotion and I instantly hit jasper, Emmett laughed and I 说 "don't play with my emotions!" then jasper said...

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the new volturi

posted by bluemc24

intrduction
Hayley and indie were walking along the 海滩 at sunset. They had spent a whole 日 sunbathing and getting a tan.- but lets hope they were good ones as they will be spending the rest of forever looking exactly like that.

Hayley’s POV

I woke up I felt strong but, a weird burning was in my throat. I sat up, where was I? it was definitely a palace 或者 a mansion!? Just then I realised that I could hear and see everything. Then suddenly, indie sat up.

“indie?” I asked, my voice sounded different, sort of like bell’s. “yes” she replied. “where are we?” she took a while before...

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New found Sunshine Lanise's P.O.V.

posted by NeeNee14

This is a sequel to "When The Stars Align" I hope 你 like it.☺☺☺

I lay in the bed, waiting for Tala to burst through my door and "wake" me up. I sighed, wishing that Seth was here with us, but he couldn't be, he was dead. I started to get up to see why she wasn't up yet. I peeked into her room, she was still asleep.
"Wake up Sunshine" I whispered in her ear. She opened her eyes and smiled.
"Morin' Mommy" She 说 and got out of bed. She went into the 厨房 and sat in her chair.
"What do 你 want for breakfast?" I asked her.
"PANCAKES!" She yelled and smiled. She looked so much like Seth...

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the follow up to a beautiful death part 21

posted by xroylex

Edwards’s pov

Approaching the meadow was weird I mean we were about to try and get my daughter back os it was like I don’t know it’s really hard to explain it right now.
Bella has been playing with her hair all the way here and now stood here she is crying tearless tears.
She looked so helpless without our baby and I remembered back to the time she use to look like that when I first got her back when she didn’t have any life in them eyes. It pained me so.

It hit me a 分钟 later their thoughts about whom and which one they are after I scanned across them until I reached nessies.
I...

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Foolproof!

posted by groovychicklisa

音乐 and Memories

Charlie had left 由 the time I got up the 下一个 morning; he was fishing with Billy again, and probably wouldn't be back until late. I did the homework that had to be done 由 Monday and cleaned the house, but it was still barely noon 由 the time I had finished. Edward hadn't 说 when he would call, so when the phone rang a few 分钟 later, I almost fell down the stairs in my hurry to get to it.

"Hello?" I answered breathlessly.

"Hi honey!"

I let out a slightly disappointed sigh; mom.

"Hey mom." I started twirling the chord around my finger, hoping this wouldn't turn out to be...

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taking chances chapter 12

posted by karpach_13

this is ivan

we walked upto jake and he just looked at eric. i wondered what he was planning to do but i wasn't really good at guessing so theres no help. i looked at jake. his eyes were burning with anger.
"jake whats wrong?" i asked him. no answer, only two of them staring at each other, it was like a staring competition. them i saw sam and seth come to the school. then i knew there was going to be danger for sure.
"sam!" i yelled. he walked up to and started whispering something to seth.
"what is it nessie?" he asked me.
"whats happening with jake?" i asked him. he didnt look worried at all, like it was...