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posted by Rob_patt_fan
I was on my way to 首页 when I saw Cullen's house road. I didn't know what to do. I didn't know if I would die there when I see their rooms empty. with no COLD ONES!

I turned around and decided to go home. I wanted to be strong. But... who was there for me to make me be strong for him?! As I went in my room I recognized something under the carpet of my room. I went closer and got the papers out from there. The 标题 was:

"Last part of me"

It was Edward's gorgeous handwriting. Tears ran on my cheecks before I could even read any of it.

"Edward, Edward...Come back"

With my screams, Charlie was at my door, looking nervous.

"Bella, What is it?"

He took a look at my face and said:

"Not him, again! Bella your dying without knowing it. Can 你 see who you're becoming?!"

"Char...Dad leave me alone, Please!"

I knelt on the floor of my room, hopeless and cold. Charlie closed the door of my room and went to see another baseball game on TV.

I tried to find a good place for those papers which Charlie couldn't reach them and I knew that I could put them under my bed. I told Charlie I was going to get a 淋浴 and went in the bathroom. I looked at myself in the mirror. I was getting probably too weak. My eyes had dimples around them and I was getting too thin.

Then the thought of cutting my vein came in my mind. There was no fear in me. I could do this. I fulled the bath tub with water and layed in it with my clothes on.

Ouch... My left hand was twinging in pain and I couldn't even say a word. The water in the bathtub was turning red and it was probably a good color. I couldn't even think what would 吸血鬼 do then when I had a bathtub full of my blood.

"Bella No!"

I heard HIM! Was I dreaming?! Was I in heaven?! Where were I?!

"Bella, Don't do this"

I didn't bother to open my eyes. I knew I was dead. And then I could hear Charlie and Jacob. I couldn't hear them well, like it was a distance between us.

"Bella, I'm coming back... I am! Wait... please... for me!"

And then everything went dark.

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My eyelashed were weak and heavy.

"Bella, Can 你 hear me?"

It was a familiar voice. Carlisle?! No, it couldn't be! I was dead ofcourse.

"Bella, Come on! I know 你 hear us!"

Jacob 说 while he tried not to laugh. I opened my eyes and looked at each of them. But somebody caught my eyes.

"Alice?!"

I cried as I throw my arms at her to hug her.

"Bella, I missed you"

"Where's everybody?!"

"They're in the waiting room. We all heard the news and we rushed here!"

"All of you?!"

Alice nodded.

"Dad can I talk to Edward?!Alone?"

Charlie nodded angrily and came in the room after Alice called him.

"Shhh"

I warned him as I analyzed every line of his face.

"Bella, I'm... Sorry!"

"Who are you?!"

"Bella, are 你 alright?!"

I answered angrily:

"Of course, I am!"

"Let me explain..."
posted by dinosteph
For those of 你 who are new, Here is chapter 1, 2 and 3.

Chapter 1 - link

Chapter 2 - link

Chapter 3 - link




Ending of Chapter 3


It wasn't raining as much in the woods, the trees protected me from the rain. I didn't realize how cold it had gotten until I noticed the 鹅 bumps tickle on my arms. I wrapped my arms around myself, still crying and kept walking until my legs and feet grew tired. I spotted a rock and wiped it off before I sat down. I hugged my knees close to my body.

“I can't say here. Where can I go? Renee is traveling with Phil. Would Charlie even let me leave? He wouldn't understand....
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posted by Twilight_F
Here is chapter eight. Hope 你 like it please read, rate, 评论 and enjoy!!

CHAPTER 8


Bella’s POV

I cannot believe I have left him. But its for the best. He KILLED my parents. 或者 if 你 want to put it specifically, he killed my mum and his brother (Emmett) killed my dad. And he expects me to stay with him after that. Uh-huh, right.
    I don’t know what I would have done without Sara. She really is nice, once 你 get to know her. She has taught me the ways of living as a nomadic vampire. Without her I would have been crying at the Cullens’ doorstep 由 now. I don’t...
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posted by Twilight_F
Here is chapter seven. I hope 你 like it!! i got my ideas from the Twilight 图书 so there are connections, but the story has got different points in it! Please read, rate and comment. Enjoy!!

CHAPTER 7

Edward’s POV

She left me. I can’t say I blame her really. I murdered her parents. But I am hurting and I didn’t think she would leave with Sara. Of all people, Sara.
    There is a huge hole in my heart, and I am struggling to keep it together. Emmett’s trying to help. But I know he feels guilty, he killed her father. I’ve heard him blaming himself. ‘Damn, why didn’t...
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posted by mikaela_isabela
third chapter, full of shocks and crazy twists...enjoy!

The La Push students stood out among the vast amounts of students at school. They were tanner, and wore brighter 颜色 than us, a very unusual; thing to do in Forks where your covered in an unclear haze of rain and shadow. The La Push kids mostly kept to themselves, at lunch in most classes, but there would be a rare occasion that they would have to communicate with 你 for an assignment 或者 for something they needed help with. I was lucky to be in mostly senior classes, so I didn’t have to worry about that too much. If I sounded stupid,...
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posted by mikaela_isabela
hey, for those who did my question, this is the draft of my story, of edward and jacob for bella's protection, and when they come back, she is in fact, a vampire slayer/witch (havent decided which yet!!!)
let me know if 你 like it!

Prologue

I never thought it would happen like this. The Quileute’s on my left, and the Cullen’s on my right. Both people I thought I could 爱情 and trust. Both ready to kill me. I waited in weary anticipation as Edward and Jacob took two steps towards me, both looking upset yet focused at the same time. I felt my new family stir uneasily behind me, bound 由 the...
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Okay guys, so I had a great idea, I'm still gonna continue 写作 this story, but I always seem to never be able to make up my mind on whats going to happen..

So, what I want to do, is ask 你 guys, I 发布 a 问题 under "Picks" about who is behind Bella.

You guys are going to help me continue my story, and have some imput in how the story works, I'm really excited for this and think its gonna be fun!

If you're just 阅读 anything from me for the first time, I would suggest going back to read all three chapters and then going under picks and selecting an option...

I think i'm gonna resort...
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posted by doyouknow
This is my first fanfiction so I need 你 to be honest and tell me what 你 think!

I dont own Twilight 或者 any of it's characters.


My mother kissed my forehead softly, “You know sweetie, 你 don’t have to do this if 你 don’t want to.” Her eyes bored into mine and for a 秒 I actually considered staying in Phoenix. But I knew Phil would be going on the road soon, and I also knew how hard it was for Renee to be away from her new husband. I didn’t want that.
“Mom for the last time I want to!” I replied, putting on the best 《勇敢传说》 smile I could manage, smiling was just so much effort...
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posted by dinosteph
Chapter two guys.


I opened my eyes slowly, noticing the time was 5:34. Early. I closed my eyes again rolling over to my other side. I could sleep for another 小时 before I had to get up and start my morning routine for school. I could hear Charlie moving around the house downstairs, probably making himself breakfast, and then I smelled burnt toast. Yup. Definitely making himself breakfast. I turned a few times trying to get comfortable when I heard the rocking chair in the corner creak. I peeked through my eyelashes holding my hand over my eyes, shielding the daylight coming in through the window....
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posted by team_edward_
Chapter One-Hunting

I pulled into the school parking lot. Most of the cars were old so my old truck didn`t stand out to much. “Oh my gosh 你 must be Isabella 天鹅 right? I`m like Jessica and this is Angela, Mike, Eric, and Tyler. I`m so glad you’re coming here what’s your first class?” A girl about 5 foot 5 has wild, curly, dark brown hair and blue eyes was introducing me to her friends. “Hey please call me Bella not Isabella. Nice to meet yous. I have English first. What do 你 guys have?” The guys just stared at me. Jessica 说 she and Mike had English too. The other three had...
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posted by twerdx24x1
Edward comes into the house and says” What the hell is all my stuff doing in the garage?” Then i stood and looked Edward in the face and 说 “we have company who is living with us now. Don’t be rude come 加入 us.” In my head i was thinking to him. ‘They just showed up and knew our names and everything about us. It was awkward at first and then i gave them a tour and Alice saw your room and wanted it. So I helped her with your stuff. Paybacks a pain in the butt, 你 shouldn’t have of been mean to me while i was being transformed. Oh yeah, I heard every word 你 说 about me.’...
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"Alice,what did 你 see?" I asked her in a soft tone.
"I saw us fighting newborns," she started, "there was only 25 of them and we finished them off in an instance." Alice started to sob again. "After we killed all of them, we started a bonfire and burned all their bodies." She paused. "We 分裂, 拆分 up into groups. Well, actually couples- 你 and Edward, me and Jasper, 你 and Emmett, and 你 and Carlisle." Me, Rosalie, and Esme immediately knew who was with who. In her premonition, I was paired up with Edward, Alice was with Jasper, Rose was with Emmett, and Esme was with Carlisle. Alice went...
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 Ugh...I can't even LOOK at this!!
Ugh...I can't even LOOK at this!!
Okay so I saw the movie and Taylor was PERFECT!!! I was a little iffy at first about him being my 最喜爱的 character, but he really surprised me! He's SUCH a good actor it nearly made me fall out of my seat. He didn't have a big role, of course, but I'm looking 前锋, 期待 to him in New Moon. He's just so GREAT!!! I mean, he has the smile, the voice, the body, the eyes, the hair, the height...why does Summit want to replace him so badly??? Yes, I understand that in New Moon he grows a lot and gets 更多 muscle, but who cares? Taylor can work out and he'll grow, too. And if it's not enough, I say...
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posted by team_edward_
PART 1 Bella POV

I whispered"I 爱情 你 too"In his ear."I think we should get going Bella.Are 你 ready?"This took me a 分钟 to answer.Who`s ever ready to tell their father that they are divorcing their best 老友记 son?"As ready as i`ll ever be.Bye Jake."I kissed Jacob on the cheek and I left leaning on Edward for suport.

On the way to Charlie`s I kept my eyes closed and didn`t talk."We`re here."I opened my eyes to see Edward geting out and opening my door."Come on."I got up not sure if I could still walk."I`m not sure if I can tell him.He was so happy and Jakes his best 老友记 son."Edward...
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posted by i_luv_twilight
嘿 this is the first chapter of a story i m writing. if u like it comment! if ppl like it i'll post more!

I was walking outside of my house when I saw him. He was unloading a moving 面包车, 范 across the 街, 街道 with who looked like his father. His hair was a glistening golden-red color. I completely froze. I was stunned 由 the beauty that was standing a few yards away from me.
He caught me staring, causing my face to turn a bright shade of red. I could tell he was laughing at my cherry-colored face.
I rushed into my house almost running my face into the door, because I didn't unlock the door fast enough...
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posted by mrsblack_1089
Here it is: The long awaited, demanded Chapter 10!! Chapter 11 will follow shortly.


Jacob and I kept planning for hours in the cottage.
I decided that Mom, Aunt Rosalie, Aunt Alice, Grandma, Leah, and Emily would be my bridesmaids, and Jacob wanted Billy as a best man, and Dad, Uncle Emmett, Sam, Quil, Embry, and Seth as groomsmen. Uncle Jasper would read the vows. We wanted a house in Forks, in the woods, like Mom's and Dad's, but with a different design. Our interrests differed from theirs. We went to go see Grandma to tell her our plans for a house.
She and Aunt Alice were upstairs in Aunt...
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"You know, I am going to miss this place," I noted as Jacob took my packed suitcase.
"You'd rather stay here than be with me?" he pouted.
"Of course not! I'm just saying..." Oh. He was teasing. He grinned at me and I laced my fingers through his.
I was leaving Brenton. Today was the last 日 of my first semester. It had been a great experiance, but Jacob was 更多 important than anything in my life right now. On the night of the dance, we had fallen asleep in the silvery moonlight, curled up 由 each other, under the tree. The 下一个 morning he was going to catch a flight back to Washington; he...
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"She was there -expecting me,naturally."He chuckled once."She hopped down from the high 粪便, 凳子 at the counter as I walked in and came directly toward me.

"It shocked me.I was not sure if she meant to attack.That's the only interpretation of her behavior that my past had to offer.But she was smiling.And the emotions that were emanating from her were like nothing I'd ever felt before.

"'You've kept me waiting a long time,'she said."

I didn't realize Alice had come to stand behind me again.

"And 你 ducked your head like a good Southern gentleman,and said,'I'm sorry ma'am.'"Alice laughed at the memory.

Jasper smiled down at her."You held out your hand,and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing.For the first time in almost a century,I felt hope."

Jasper took Alice's hand as he spoke.

Alice grinned."I was just relieved.I thought 你 were never going to 显示 up."
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie 你 know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... 或者 with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e 钢琴 for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)

but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
posted by mandapanda
Well, as most of 你 know, the Twilight Score is coming out December 9th, and I can't wait for that day! The track listing has been released and I decided to match up the track listings with the movie scenes, and the book. (My guesses are in parantheses) Movie scores usually 列表 the songs in the order that they are played in the movie. And, if my guessing is right, the movie is following the book chronologically. The tracks that don't have my guesses is because I'm not sure about where they fit. But anyways, please comment, either disagreeing 或者 agreeing, both are welcome. :)

Track Listings...
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okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" 或者 "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" 或者 "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude 评论 about it.

and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a 随意 piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.